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To be called upon, one must have the power.

To muster the power, one must be reliable.

To be reliable, one must gain trust.

But trust is an ironic thing to have, it can warp reality to those who are desperate and it can salvage those who are shattered.

A story about greatness.

And a story about collapse. 

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AN: This is my first story... English is not my first language, but I've been practicing; and I think I'm ready to write my own story. 

Please give constructive criticism, what should I improve upon, what techniques I could use, and so on and so forth.

I'll update twice a week. More, if inspiration hit me like a truck.

 

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