Years after being sent in the middle of a danger zone instead of becoming a hero like the rest, Amano Shun decides to meet his fellow classmates. There's just one problem: he's no longer the 'same' as before. 

 

WARNING: The pairing is F(M)xM.

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This is a great story with good plot and I didn’t think I would come across this while searching with the advance search but overall it like the story. I deleted the previous review because my “auto correct” put “new story” as “newbie” so I felt bad and deleted it but yeah I hope you can continue on this.

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As I have already stated, this little story looks promising, but well..... there isnt much writen yet to give a proper review. Planning to give a proper(ish) review if this story is ever picked up again. 
Hope you do come back to this, story seems to have both alot of promise for ether a great and semi original take on a transportation story(and fairly easy to read to boot) or to get very cringe-worthy. 

Wish you the best of luck on your future writings, and hope to see more of this one~