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An archway that appeared out of nowhere in the middle of my bedroom.

A portal to a twilight zone-like place that makes no sense at all.  And the potential for real power and resources to be found and exploited in this world.

At this rate I, Adrian Walker a dedicated and if not ‘mildly’ psychotic geek, might just end up ruling the pathetic and annoying human race after all.  That’s if I can survive the world beyond the Arch long enough and manage to unlock its secrets.

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