Pandora: A New Beginning

Pandora: A New Beginning

by Divine Sparrow

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Alicia Gray had reached the top, she had put her all into the game, but she had lost something in the process.

She had sacrificed her family and friends in order to gain benefits in the game, neglecting the ones who loved her from her childhood, asking for products when she knew her family couldn't afford them, all so she could gain advantages in the game, watch as her life restarts and how she is given the chance to change everything she had done in the past.

Watch as she rejoins the world of:

Pandora

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(As of Chapter 6): A standard Reincarnation to Younger Self story so far. The MC, having selfishly abused her parents, wakes up as an earlier self just before she had begun her 'addiction' to Virtual Gaming. Will this life be better?

The prose style is good and the grammar is excellent.

Will keep reading to see what happens.