Bloody Grass

Bloody Grass

by Irachii

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Dorian had an accident, a stupid one at that, and he died.

He thought it was the end, that only darkness awaited him.

That was until he woke up, in a room full of babies, Orochimaru of the Sannin inspecting every newborn, to see his potential new recruits, that he knew his life was going to go from bad to worse.

(Cover is what I picture Dorian/Jin to look like when he'll be 15, It doesn't come from me, the character on it is from Tokyo Raven, a nice anime that I enjoyed watching)

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mikarp
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really amazing beginnning and i would have loved to see more. :(

Zackitty
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Work more like a slave for us, noble readers!

I love this story, the history of Naruto is a little messed up in my head and I don't remember some part. But this kekkei genkei, its the first time I heard about it.

I honestly say, 

 

Your story has potential!