The Foretold: Sun Child (Complete)

The Foretold: Sun Child (Complete)

by Tituswolf

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

As a sixteen year old commoner, your future is bleak. Worse, your appearance sets you apart from others. Your only achievement so far, is befriending the second son of the Lord of the Keep. He has been your only friend for eleven years, initially partner in mischief and later your hunting companion and confidant.

Now your friendship is being torn asunder, he has turned eighteen and is being sent away to become a Judge Knight Aspirant. What is to become of you? Before your friend leaves, there is murder and conspiracy! Magic left the land hundreds of years ago, all you have is your bow and hunting skills, nevertheless you must fight to survive and save another to have any hope of a future!

Note: The graphic isn't mine; it is a re-imagining of a few separate images, any objections by original artists let me know.

N.B. If you are looking for Sexual Content every chapter, or every second, third or fourth chapter this isn't the story for you - the Sexual Content is required for a plot device, not a way of life and the later chapters reflect that - please stop dropping Low Ratings when you feel I haven't met your idea of "fan service".

This is finished as much as a multi book vision can be finished. At 750,000 words give or take and very little readership I can only blame myself. I have learnt a lot, possibly forgotten a lot as well! I will probably return to the Chapters at some point - a touch up here and a touch up there. The second book though will probably remain in my head for a very long time, so yes "cliffs" although I hope the characters and their motivations are developed enough that you can have a good guess at the content of Book Two and tell me so I can confirm or deny!


This isn't a LITRPG where classes are developed, great foes are defeated by a hero of immense power. This is a story based within (I hope) a very real and consistent culture, that leaves breadcrumbs for the reader to work out what the heck is happening and why. This is a slow burn story as the MC is stumbling around discovering her new place and role.

Author's Note (Apr 2021): I dropped the Fantasy Genre for the Mystery Genre, because while the setting mentions magic, is it about past glories and trying to return to them. Whereas the MC from Chapter One doesn't understand her predicament and the range of mysteries she must solve to survive. If I have this wrong PM me and I will change this back.

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146 Chapters
Chapter Name Release Date
1.001 Judge Knight Aspirant (11th Day of Spirit Month) ago
1.002 Friend or Foe (12th Day of Spirit Month) ago
1.003 Escape or Die (13th Day of Spirit Month) ago
1.004 Judgement (14th Day of Spirit Month) ago
1.005 Bearwatch Village (15th Day of Spirit Month) ago
1.006 The Elder (18th Day of Spirit Month) ago
1.007 Redemption (19th Day of Spirit Month) ago
1.008 A Noble Visit (20th Day of Spirit Month) ago
1.009 Wagons South (21st Day of Spirit Month) ago
1.010 On Her Trail (2nd Day of Light Month) ago
1.011 Well Met Magistrate of Judge (19th Day of Light Month) ago
1.012 Message Delivery (4th Day of Fertility Month) ago
1.013 Influence Uncontrolled (5th Day of Fertility Month) ago
1.014 The Trial of Three (9th Day of Fertility Month) ago
1.015 Our Fate (12th Day of Fertility Month) ago
1.016 Farm, Family and Friends (12th Day of Fertility Month) ago
1.017 The Invitation (4th Day of Truth Month) ago
1.018 Family Matters (5th Day of Truth Month) ago
1.019 The Temple of Judge (7th Day of Truth Month) ago
1.020 Waiting Can Kill (17th Day of Truth Month) ago
1.021 To See in the Dark (20th Day of Truth Month) ago
1.022 Bard Day (21st Day of Truth Month) ago
1.023 Training Days (1st Day of Law Month) ago
1.024 No Vacancy at the Inn (3rd Day of Luck Month) ago
1.025 Bump in the Night (3rd Day of Luck Month) ago
1.026 The Chase (3rd Day of Luck Month) ago
1.027 Wayward Sisters (4th Day of Luck Month) ago
1.028 Battle in Bearwatch (5th Day of Luck Month) ago
1.029 Sisters that pass in the Night (5th Day of Luck Month) ago
1.030 Seer Business (6th Day of Luck Month) ago
1.031 Hunting and Finding (7th Day of Luck) ago
1.032 Where I lay my Armour (14th Day of Luck Month) ago
1.033 Chests and Packages (18th Day of Luck Month) ago
1.034 Packages and Seduction (6th Day of Movement Month) ago
1.035 Escorts and Packages (8th Day of Movement Month) ago
1.036 The Noble is always Right (14th Day of Movement Month) ago
1.037 Packages Delivery (15th Day of Movement Month) ago
1.038 What was Under the Rock? (15th Day of Movement Month) ago
1.039 Pain and Pleasure (15th Day of Movement Month) ago
1.040 Awaiting the Verdict (16th Day of Movement Month) ago
1.041 Before the Council (21st Day of Water Month) ago
1.042 Preparations (4th Day of Earth Month) ago
1.043 The Journey to the Duke (11th Day of Earth Month) ago
1.044 Outwit, Outlast (15th Day of Earth Month) ago
1.045 The Court of the Duke (17th Day of Earth Month) ago
1.046 The Daughters of the Duchess (17th Day of the Earth Month) ago
1.047 Beyond the City (2nd Day of Plant Month) ago
1.048 The Betrothed of Lonely Keep (7th Day of Plant Month) ago
1.049 The Sheriff of Lonely Keep (13th Day of Plant Month) ago
1.050 Defending the Barony (15th Day of Plant Month) ago
1.051 Tell them we are Saved (16th Day of Plant Month) ago
1.052 Welcome to the Inn (16th Day of Plant Month) ago
1.053 A Touch of Sunshine (17th Day of Plant Month) ago
1.054 The Dead and the Living (17th Day of Plant Month) ago
1.055 Plan A (17th Day of Plant Month) ago
1.056 Plan B, C and maybe D (17th Day of Plant Month) ago
1.057 Prisoners (18th Day of Plant Month) ago
1.058 After the Rain (20th Day of Plant Month) ago
1.059 The High Priest (20th Day of Plant Month) ago
1.060 The Forest Watchers (20th Day of Plant Month) ago
1.061 Report and Escort (20th Day of Plant Month) ago
1.062 Acquaintance, Friend or Foe (6th Day of Mastery Month) ago
1.063 The New Initiates (8th Day of Mastery Month) ago
1.064 Trouble on the Doorstep (8th Day of Mastery Month) ago
1.065 Awkward Guests (14th Day of Mastery Month) ago
1.066 What happens in the White Room... (14th Day of Mastery Month) ago
1.067 Awkward Company (14th Day of Mastery Month) ago
1.068 Awkward Visitors (15th Day of Mastery Month) ago
1.069 Prepare for Assault (16th Day of Mastery Month) ago
1.070 To The Rescue (17th Day of Master Month) ago
1.071 Preparation (17th Day of Mastery Month) ago
1.072 Unknown Future (1st Day of Trade Month) ago
1.073 They Should Be Here Soon (5th Day of Trade Month) ago
1.074 Tricks and Traps (6th Day of Trade Month) ago
1.075 Friendly Conversations (6th Day of Trade Month) ago
1.076 The Wait (7th Day of Trade Month) ago
1.077 The Wait is Over (13th Day of Trade Month) ago
1.078 The Mission (14th Day of Trade Month) ago
1.079 The Struggle (15th Day of Trade Month) ago
1.080 The New Knights (16th Day of Trade Month) ago
1.081 Discovery (17th Day of Trade Month) ago
1.082 Discovering ago
1.083 Discoveries ago
1.084 Danger Mistress ago
1.085 A Bard from the Past ago
1.086 Gifts and Rewards (1st Day of Magic Month) ago
1.087 Well Met in the Meeting Room ago
1.088 Taking Our Leisure at Home ago
1.089 Strange Meetings ago
1.090 Disposing of Interlopers (14th Day of Illusion Month) ago
1.091 A Welcome Stranger Returns (20th Day of Illusion Month) ago
1.092 To Train a Young Sister (21st Day of Illusion Month) ago
1.093 The Urchin, The Favour and the Guest (Death Season Events) ago
1.094 Wind and Cold (1st Day of Death Month) ago
1.095 The Blood Cavern ago
1.096 The Delivery Men (1st Day of Death Month) ago
1.097 Once More (3rd Day of Death Month) ago
1.098 Cavern Keeping (4th Day of Death Month) ago
1.099 Vistation Part 1 (5th Day of Death Month) ago
1.100 Vistation Part 2 (6th Day of Death Month) ago
1.101 Unexpected Visitors (7th Day of Death Month) ago
1.102 Disorder in the House (7th Day of Death Month) ago
1.103 Have Faith (9th Day of Death Month) ago
1.104 Distractions (12th Day of Death Month) ago
1.105 That Talk and The Coins (12th Day of Death Month) ago
1.106 Ringing in the Changes (13th Day of Death Month) ago
1.107 While the Mistress Sleeps Part 1 (14th Day of Death Month) ago
1.108 While the Mistress Sleeps Part 2 (17th Day of Death Month) ago
1.109 While the Mistress Sleeps Part 3 (17th Day of Death Month) ago
1.110 The Mistress Arises (18th Day of Death Month) ago
1.111 Return to Farstay (1st Day of Dark Month) ago
1.112 Knowledge (4th Day of Dark Month) ago
1.113 The Weight (Dark Month) ago
1.114 A Cold Stay (9th Day of Dark Month) ago
1.115 Into the Snow (12th Day of Dark Month) ago
1.116 A New Friend or Old Strangers (13th Day of Dark Month) ago
1.117 The Ceremony (3rd Week of Dark Month) ago
1.118 High Places and Low Places (21st Day of Dark Month) ago
1.119 A Shrine for your Thoughts (First Week of Fate Month) ago
1.120 An Unexpected Guest Part 1 (8th Day of Fate Month) ago
1.121 An Unexpected Guest Part 2 (8th Date of Fate Month) ago
1.122 Followers Part 1 (8th Day of Fate Month) ago
1.123 Unexpected Meetings (9th Day of Fate Month) ago
1.124 Followers Part 2 (2nd Week of Fate Month) ago
1.125 An Unexpected Guest Part 3 (15th Day of Fate Month) ago
1.126 Cleaning House (15th Day of Fate Month) ago
1.127 The Horde Assembles (First Week of Stasis Month) ago
1.128 The Final Stand (7th Day of Stasis Month) ago
1.129 Bittersweet Victory (8th Day of Stasis Month) ago
1.130 Faerie Forest ago
1.131 The Dream Part 1 ago
1.132 The Dream Part 2 ago
1.133 The Dream Part 3 ago
1.134 If only ... (8th Day of Stasis Month) ago
1.135 Foolishness and other concerns (10th Day of Stasis Month) ago
1.136 Folly in Pursuit (Second Week of Stasis Month) ago
1.137 House Calls (Second Week of Stasis Month) ago
1.138 Distressing Times (Second Week of Stasis Month) ago
1.139 Discoveries (12th Day of Stasis Month) ago
1.140 Loose Ends (15th Day of Stasis Month) ago
1.141 Unpleasant Surprises (16th Day of Stasis Month) ago
1.142 Some Lost Find a Home (18th Day of Stasis Month) ago
1.143 Is there such a Thing as Humble Power? (19th Day of Stasis Month) ago
1.144 Rumble in the Inn (20th Day of Stasis Month) ago
1.145 A Foray into Farstay and Mountain Views (1st Day of Harmony Month) ago
1.146 Birth Season Homecoming (First Week of Harmony Month) ago

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BlackTarask
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Can become a pearl. Just really good now

I'm not real good with this reviews thing so I shall make this short.

For the reader :

A good story with no overpowered character but just a little hunter girl with a bit of luck and fate which must run from home and will finally make a group of powerfull and beautifull female warriors (always no overpowered).

Some action, some magic, plenty of yuri, plenty of potential. 

For the autor :

Good and interresting story with a little bit too much of yuri sometime.

good characters with each their roles, and stories of near tragic ends which unite them.

A little bit too fast in their world time for some relationship but the 'rings' can explain this part.

the real fault here is maybe the feeling of the main characters could be more present since this make some decision/moment colder than they really are.

EDIT : the latest chapter are better with my last point.

MrMnds
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Go ahead, it's good.

Though not for me, for some reason I dislike female POVs, but with just four chapters this story already surpasses those CN-JP things people like to post here. For real, novels about being a dungeon? Aliens giving videogame powers? MC gains powers from eating or some equivalent garbage? Why? Why can't people use their god-given brain to write something like this story?