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Haphazardly thrown into another world, Robin finds herself tasked as a governor in the new world. Uniting kingdoms, managing her new domain, understanding fundamentals of magic, and ultimately overseeing for a higher god, is enough to cause more than a few strands of white hair.

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VoidEater
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STYLE: It's almost identical to overlord which I don't mind but I'm hesitant in giving this 4-5 star knowing it's unoriginal.

STORY: Story is somewhat average. Although I adore this kind of story, I find it lacking with regards to the background story--to little information.

GRAMMAR: So many grammatical errors but it's not major that you won't be able to understand the thougt.

CHARACTER: The reason I like overlord is because of ainz interesting servants. And I'm quite disappointed with this story because the characters is not fleshed out. I can't connect to them. Plus I don't like the mc. I don't know why though.

 

OVERALL: It's an okay read but definitely needs to improve.

 

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It has a very good start.  I like the idea of being the leader of an organization.  I look forward to seeing where this goes.  There are some errors here and there but for the most part its very good.  I hope you continue this project of yours.