Number One Commander

by ANormRobot

Original ONGOING Action Comedy Fantasy Sci-fi Magic Male Lead Reincarnation School Life Supernatural Virtual Reality Wuxia Xianxia

Life is an unfair game. If you were born rich and smart, then you were more than likely arrogant and cunning. If you were born poor and dumb, you were probably simple and ignorant. A commander is someone who protects his people regardless of their faults, position, and riches, but the Number One Commander is someone who would even protect the Galaxy itself.

Join Luon Fate, an engineer and a bookworm simpleton who changed the fate of humanity. Orcs? Elves? Demons? Cultivators? Follow Luon in another fantasy, sci-fi, martial artist novel in the making.

 

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1 - Luon Fate ago
Chapter 2 - Awakening ago
Chapter 3 - Meeting ago
Chapter 4 - Life Simulations 1 ago
Chapter 5 - Life Simulations 2 ago
Chapter 6 - A place to call home ago
Chapter 7 - Biometric Magicite Processing Unit ago
Chapter 8 - Another Freshman ago
Chapter 9 - Tutorial ago
Chapter 10 - Geno-enhanced Barbarian Berserker ago
Chapter 11 - Engineering Examination ago
Chapter 12 - Engineering License Lv1 ago
Chapter 13 - The dorm ago
Chapter 14 - Night Stroll ago
Chapter 15 - First Class ago
Chapter 16 - With Overwhelming Power ago
Chapter 17 - How to deliver a beatdown ago
Chapter 18 - Cultivation Technique ago
Chapter 19 - Playing with Friends 1 ago
Chapter 20 - Playing with Friends 2 ago
Chapter 21 - Playing with Friends 3 ago
Chapter 22 - Consolidating Foundations ago
Chapter 23 - Confrontation ago
Chapter 24 - Commander Class 1 ago
Chapter 25 - Commander Class 2 ago
Chapter 26 - Commander Class 3 ago
Chapter 27 - Basic Engineering ago
Chapter 28 - The poor and surpressed ago
Chapter 29 - Old Zekar Drake ago
Chapter 30 - Introduction to Survival Training ago
Chapter 31 - Preparations ago
Chapter 32 - Departure ago
Chapter 33 - Dance Under The Stars ago
Chapter 34 - Falsehood ago
Chapter 35 - First Outpost Reconstruction ago
Chapter 36 - Simple Hunting ago
Chapter 37 - Reunion ago
Chapter 38 - Dispute ago
Chapter 39 - Inzektor Outbreak ago
Chapter 40 - Retreat ago
Chapter 41 - Stranded ago
Chapter 42 - A Surprising Turnabout ago
Chapter 43 - Return ago
Chapter 44 - Inzektor Queen Clamaris ago
Chapter 45 - Evolved ago
Chapter 46 - Queen's Death ago
Chapter 47 - The End Of Survival Training ago
Chapter 48 - Engineering Examination Lv2 ago
Chapter 49 - The End Of Exams ago
Chapter 50 - New Year ago
Chapter 51 - Engineering Madhouse ago
Chapter 52 - Selection Qualifications ago
Chapter 53 - Qualifiers 1 ago
Chapter 54 - Qualifiers 2 ago
Chapter 55 - Qualifiers 3 ago
Chapter 56 - Qualifiers 4 ago
Chapter 57 - Zero Delta Center ago
Chapter 58 - Mastering The Gear ago
Chapter 59 - King Of The Ring ago
Chapter 60 - Top 16 ago
Chapter 61 - Battle Vs A Diva 1 ago
Chapter 62 - Battle Vs A Diva 2 ago
Chapter 63 - Battle Vs A Diva 3 ago
Chapter 64 - Infamous ago
Chapter 65 - Pride 1 ago
Chapter 66 - Pride 2 ago
Chapter 67 - Pride 3 ago
Chapter 68 - The Night Before The Semi-Finals ago
Chapter 69 - Semi-Finals 1 ago
Chapter 70 - Semi-Finals 2 ago
Chapter 71 - Semi-Finals 3 ago
Chapter 72 - A True Commander Battle ago
Chapter 73 - Unexpected Moves ago
Chapter 74 - In Order To Win ago
Chapter 75 - To The Internationals ago
Chapter 76 - Opening Ceremony 1 ago
Chapter 77 - Opening Ceremony 2 ago
Chapter 78 - Opening Ceremony 3 ago
Chapter 79 - Nexus vs Plana 1 ago
Chapter 80 - Nexus Vs Plana 2 ago
Chapter 81 - Nexus Vs Plana 3 ago
Chapter 82 - Prelude To The Next Battle ago
Chapter 83 - Nexus vs Atlantica Royal School 1 ago
Chapter 84 - Nexus Vs Atlantica Royal School 2 ago
Chapter 85 - Top 4 ago
Chapter 86 - Arisa's Will 1 ago
Chapter 87 - Arisa's Will 2 ago
Chapter 88 - Luon Vs Deminier 1 ago
Chapter 89 - Luon Vs Deminier 2 ago
Chapter 90 - Luon Vs Deminier 3 ago
Chapter 91 - Luon Vs Deminier 4 ago
Chapter 92 - Finals 1 ago
Chapter 93 - Finals 2 ago
Chapter 94 - Finals 3 ago
Chapter 95 - Finals 4 ago
Chapter 96 - Pitching A Theory 1 ago
Chapter 97 - A New Way ago
Chapter 98 - End Of The Second Year ago
Chapter 99 - Introduction To Space Combat ago
Chapter 100 - Suppression ago
Chapter 101 - Flashback ago
Chapter 102 - The Life Of A Lone Wolf ago
Chapter 103 - Lv3 License Examination 1 ago
Chapter 104 - Lv3 License Examination 2 ago
Chapter 105 - Lv3 License Examination 3 ago
Chapter 106 - Preparations ago
Chapter 107 - Paired Training ago
Chapter 108 - Final Exams ago
Chapter 109 - Robotics ago
Chapter 110 - Commander Exam 1 ago
Chapter 111 - Commander Exam 2 ago
Chapter 112 - Commander Exam 3 ago
Chapter 113 - Putting Things In Order ago
Chapter 114 - The Next Step ago
Chapter 115 - Enlistment ago
Chapter 116 - Training 1 ago
Chapter 117 - Training 2 ago
Chapter 118 - A Small Encounter ago
Chapter 119 - A Clean Up ago
Chapter 120 - First Deployment ago
Chapter 121 - Operation Zedale ago
Chapter 122 - Chaotic Battleground ago
Chapter 123 - Paving A Road ago
Chapter 124 - Clearing Things Out ago
Chapter 125 - Operation End ago
Chapter 126 - Realization ago
Chapter 127 - Arrangements ago
Chapter 128 - Quick Responses ago
Chapter 129 - The Way Home Is Very Far Away ago
Chapter 130 - Things Going Wrong ago
Chapter 131 - Harvest ago
Chapter 132 - The Shadows Of The Shattered World ago
Chapter 133 - Inzektor Tower 1 ago
Chapter 134 - Inzektor Tower 2 ago
Chapter 135 - Inzektor Tower 3 ago
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tyes77
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The introductions and settings are fun giving a nice sci-fi feel for a young teenage drama. Only cons might be some plotholes(capsules) can be glaring if you really think deeply but its a fun ride

Tweedledeeme
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The start is a little abrupt feeling and the emotional response of the Mc is hard to believe considering the circumstances. Once you are past that it slows down and starts to feel more realistic. Overall a fun read at the time of this writing. 

jacobpaige
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I only made it to chapter 3 before the nonsensical world building completely destroyed my willing suspension of disbelief. If you can fully shut off your brain, you might be able to enjoy this. I don't know though, since I wasn't able to do so.

It's also worth noting that, of those 3 chapters, almost all of it was info dumps. Perhaps the author got better about this later, after the nonsensical world was built, but I sincerely doubt it. And based on the quality of the limited dialogue, it might even have gotten worse after the exposition finally stopped.

Alekseyev
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I really Like the story, but you really REALLY need a better cover, i think you are not winning more readers because of it.