Song of Blood and Fire

Song of Blood and Fire

by patrickborg

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content


'Song of Ice and Fire. is more like Song of Blood ' a man laid his eyes on the battle field filing the heavy aroma of blood croom to himself. ' A coincidence or not a came to this world'

 He came to the world of "Game of Throne" with his knowledge he forges the land, the iron, the steel and use as flame the blood of his enemies".

This is a story of a man with a fragile heart but an unwilling one

 

 

Note: 

- My schedule is once a week (mostly Fridays)

- I revise every 5 chapter ( except the first 10 that would be revised in one go )

- If I am in good mood (Or bored) you can expect new chapter.

- This book have a heavy reference to Song of Ice and Fire that his intellectual propriety of  Georgy RR Martin (PS:  don't sue me GRRM for playing with your work PSS: )

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Socahtoa
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Good start, like the idea of where this is going  so keep it up 

mattemo153
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I do like your style even though it could use some work maybe. Its just hard to get a feel for your stule since your spelling is so bad and you miss entire words in so many places.

i love the story and how you telling it. Atleast from what i can get from this story through the awful awful spelling and missing words from sentences

 

your spelling and grammer and not to mention your missing entire words is frankly atrocious. Simply almost unreadable. Like i can read seventy percent and make sense of sixty percent of this story on chapter three.

 

i do like your characters and how you have presented them. Or atleast what i can get and read from yohr story. 

i hooe you can fix the missing words and the spelling and then i will tate this five stars. This story has good potential 

 

 

also since this review needs two hundrew words i am going to fill this with nonsense so ignore this paragraph ok? I am short and stout and a little teapot. Twinkle twinkle little star oh how I wonder what you are. Humoty dumpty sat on a wall humpty dumpty had a great fall. All the kings horses and all the kings men couldnt put him back together again