**IMPORTANT: Because I am trying to reconcile some of the consistancy issues due to unexpected changes in how I've decided to write the story, this story is to be renamed/reordered. I apologize for any confusion or inconvenience. The Tutorial (completed, but unedited) is now to be concidered as Book One of Tatterskin. Tatterskin will contiune without real inturruption, though "Book Two" is really going to be the rest of the series with multiple volumes. Sorry guys! I've gone and brought the chaos of my real life into the storyverse T-T.
Dassah Graydon was just another human woman looking for adventure in her life when she moved to the academic floating continent, the Enclave. But while she wanted to escape her mundane reality, she quickly discovers that her life there – with the exception of all the crazy aliens and the unusual setting – was no different than her life on Earth had been. After spending a couple of months getting used to the place, she finally got the chance to play the popular new VRMMORPG, TheirWorld.
As she is drawn deeper and deeper into the game, however, she begins to realize that her in-game life is far more connected to the happenings of reality than she could have imagined. Finding herself in the middle of a conspiracy that threatens her life and the lives of the people around her, Dassah must decide whether she allows herself to be a puppet, or she finds the determination to become the master of her own fate.
The story will usually update once a week, sometime on Fridays JST.
The updates on Royal Road L will be about 1 chapter behind my main WordPress site found here: Project: TheirWorld. This will change, as the WordPress site will have holiday releases and RRL will not.
Thank you for reading, and the support! :)
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Style: The Sentence Structure is great when I read it I don't rethink in my head it could have been put better another way and there is a clearly excellent use of words. Also, it's easy to read and I just like the way you (she?) writes.
Story: It's a VR (Virtual Reality) Story. But unlike typical VR Stories, AR (Actual Reality) is also quite important and has significant events going on.
Grammar: Nothing serious, just some minor grammatical mistakes.
Character: The characters, including the NPC's, have clear thoughts and motives. Which really adds to the story.
Thank you for clearing up that whole title thing.
This book is a fun story with an interesting new take on an old genre. I wholly recomend it.
Make sure to read the first novel first!
its just really good, recommend reading book 1/ prologue first to really get a feeling for the world though.
I hope the author can find some rest