Revenge of the Golemman

by Oring20

Original ONGOING Action Drama Fantasy Psychological Male Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore

When the news arrived that a monster horde was on collison course with his home village preperations were made. People were hired to protect the villagers and supplies were bought to help the villagers fight. But not everyone deliverd. But not everyone who was paid helped. And the results of that was a disaster. The village was destroyed, almost everyone died and Balin made a deal with the devil, to make the ones who wronged them pay.

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So far, so good

This review was done at chapter 3. The fiction starts out pretty well. It’s first couple of chapters give a nice backstory to the fiction and gives good explanation of the mc’s motives. It’s too soon to give a character, story, or style score, but the grammar has been consistently good so far.