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A young man finds himself in a new world as a character he created. He arrives in this new world with wonder, only to find death within his first day of arriving.

He travels until he finds a caravan, this caravan held many secrets. Secrets that could end up killing him.

Not exactly the newest idea out there, but it is something I enjoy writing.

I am trying to use the same style of game world that the creator of Friendly Neighborhood Necromancer uses. Lets see how it works. 

Hope you enjoy.

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Prince Corwin

Prince Corwin

Reader Of All Fantasy.

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Brosef Johny Boy
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I WISH THERE WERE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS

This story is great not only is the mc an actually good guy, but he has to work for his progress, and use his brain.

He has no selfish desires, arrogance, or crazed malicious behaviors, he just cares about people and wants to help them.

But he is not some idiot kid who thinks he can just do whatever he wants for justice, No the MC is practical, logical, and a total badass, while he works toward helping others he stays calm, paitient and when the moment is right he strikes taking out his foes and saving/helping people in the proccess.

 

Drew's Story is the web novel that I'm sure will become the story of a Great Epic of a Legendary Kindhearted Wise Hero of Bravery.

 

I highly recommend this web novel.

Oberon King
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Fun addition to a new Genre

I think the story is fun, great paced and imaginative. I can't wait to see how this young author grows. I have known him for a long time and read many of his stories. He is not afraid to try new styles and ideas. This time, I might finally get to read a finished story! I'm glad you all get to read Corwin's tale with me. Go Rose!