Immortal in Another World

by Reid

Original HIATUS Adventure Fantasy Romance Gender Bender LitRPG Non-Human lead Reincarnation
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Justin Holmes was strolling across the beach on a cold day. He didn't care much, though, since this was the same area where they first locked eyes. Also, it was where they shared their first kiss. Today was the same day he got married to his wife over 30 long years ago. Their marriage was a happy one, and they haven't fought in over 29 years so far. As he was reminiscing of the past, his stroll was cut short, however, when the clouds started rolling in, and blocked the heat of the sun. At that time, and he decided to start heading back to his house with his lovely wife and children. A few hundred yards away from the house, he was hit by a white, hot streak of lightning. Now, he confronts God and is sent into a fantasy world with immortality and strong abilities. Will Justin, now Allen Valro, be able to handle himself in this brand new world?

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