Clover: A Seeker's Story

Clover: A Seeker's Story

by Ronks

Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity

Seeker. The renowned title for those brave men and women of all races who risk their lives for adventure and treasure. Raised in the Vanden Seekers Guild, one would think that Clover Rumare would aspire to become one just like his father, Bastille is. Instead, Clover has chosen to become a musician like his elven friend, Sven. However, this will soon change as an unknown faction threatens his life and the lives of those around him. Because of this, Clover will be forced to embark on a grand journey across the vast continents in search of vengeance.

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I am writing this when there are eight chapters. And all I can say is that I really like it! Each chapter is fairly long (4000-6000 words a chapter) and is updated frequently! I only hope that the author is not burning the candle at both ends, you need to take a break from time to time after all!

The characters in the story are a breath of fresh air, with each one of them being vividly described along with distinct and unique personalities! Chapter eight solidified my love of Clover and his parents, Bastille and Maria. Their slapstick humor is enjoyable to read and puts a smile on my face. 

Another point I'd like to mention is the romance. It is definitely at its beginning stages but I can say that it's cute and innocent, which makes my heart flutter with hope for their future encounters!

Besides a few grammatical errors here and there. I give Clover a good review and encourage everyone to read it!

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Well, that got intense...

 Like the title says, this story got pretty intese all of a sudden. Without spoiling anything too much, Chapter 4 is when the real badassery starts!