It's not a game

It's not a game

by devblazer

Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

Where am I?  This is not my room.  What is this place.

If you were transported to another world, to be an RPG protagonist.  Just another average weak human being, with nothing but ten copper coins and a crappy sword.  Could you defeat demons, monsters and giants? I think not.

In a world inhabited by all manner of unspeakable evil, by devils of both monster and man.  Could you right wrongs and fix a broken world? I think not.

When both your fellow man, demons and the very divines that hold reality together conspire to corrupt, extort and rape this world.  When they toy with you and laugh in amusement as you dance in their palms. Could you alter fate? I think not.

So when this is the thorny path ahead of our protagonists, why would you expect them to be able to?  They’re just human after all, teenagers at that.

Nevertheless,  join me on an epic journey that will alter the course of history and reality itself as our protagonists show you what it really means to be human... in an inhuman world.

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Good God I love characters that aren't OP, and from the looks of it the characters are broke and underpowered at the beginning with a good realistic approach of the medieval setting as well. this story shows a lot of promise ive read all the chapters lol, looking forward to more of your work in the future :)