Et Non Lucem

Et Non Lucem

by ZeCrayz

A lonely fortress, a (slightly) deranged assassin, secrets, intrigue, magic and war. What could possible go wrong? If you've ever wondered what would happen if somebody attempted to blend a realistic medieval world with fantasy, then this is for you. If you've ever wondered what happens when you stick some (extremely) flawed humans into positions of power and try making them save the world, then this story is for you.

Or if you're simply bored and can't seem to decide on a new story to read, then this story is for you!

This is my first ever attempt at writing a story after years and years of reading, so any and all constrictive criticism is appreciated!

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DrunkenDutch
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Just giving a few stars to balance out your rating. Couldnt help but notice a few people have been placing bad reviews just because you left a review of their story. Xzandler and his second account will start lashing out when you offend him.
So here's 5 stars.

SamPenn
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Good writing and story

vivid descriptions really take me to the setting, there seems to be no OP main character and the overall feel is gritty realism I LOVE IT

Nekophilia
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So far not much has been released but I write this with the intention of bringing in more readers. I had just clicked on the sight when I saw a Latin title and thought "this might be cool." What I found was an author who can write beautifully. With descriptions that surpass my own and that of many other authors on this site. Truly a great read despite the few chapters posted.

Dio Asd
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"This is actually a horribly written boring piece of literature. It took me 2 days just to get past the horrible first chapter because there was nothing going on to keep me reading. And I figured if it is already this slow and boring than I have to stop. Stay away from this disgustingly overrated book and disgustingly bad writer."

Plus your behavior is bad