TO GAIN WHAT IS LOST

TO GAIN WHAT IS LOST

by acederequiza

Original HIATUS Contemporary Drama Short Story
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity

A story for the New Year Resolution contest. 

A wealthy man thought he had it all; fame, wealth, reputation and most importantly his life. But he was wrong. Lying on the hospital's bed, he began to have a second thought of his life and where it had led him; on the verge of losing everything -  most importantly his family.

 

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Since I'm not much of native speaker (English as 6th language and all), do pardon my mistakes. 

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