Azarinth Healer

Azarinth Healer

by Rhaegar

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

A new world with nearly unlimited possibilities. A status, classes, magic and monsters. Sounds good? Well, for Ilea it didn't come quite as expected as for some other protagonists, nor was there a king or god to welcome her.

The grand quest? Well, she might figure that out someday but for now, a new world with new food is prize enough. Her fists at the ready, she's prepared to punch and get punched, however long it takes and however many limbs she might have to regrow.

A story I've started writing now quite a while ago. Transported to another world, somewhat standard fantasy setting with my beginner attempts to make it dark but funny. There are Litrpg elements here but I do hope it's not too heavy and annoying. The fights should be interesting and aren't just numbers vs numbers. Contrary to the title the protagonist will be quite an offensive fighter.

Ilea Spears is your average sarcastic kick-boxing fast food worker and soon to be student. She will be transported to another world rather conventionally and will be confronted with survival in the wild.

Give it a shot and let me know what you think. My experience is incredibly lacking. If you find yourself hating it early on, do convey your anger in a detailed comment or review :) I want to get better but without any feedback it's simply quite difficult.

Quick heads up: Around chapter 120 there are a bunch of longer PoV changes that I discontinued again shortly after. The Arc around chapters 150-200 is darker than the rest and the themes shift quite a bit. Just know that it goes back to what you've come to know after that section.

Thank you for reading.

Quick update June 2019: Many complaints regarding the formatting, specifically spacing in conversations and of course the usage of the present tense in the first 36 chapters have been addressed. I'm of course learning by the day but compared to how it was before it should be an improvement at least.

Chapters usually around 3k words

Cover art by Kevin Catalan

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Table of Contents
856 Chapters
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1 Boring introduction - Where is the magic? ago
Chapter 2 Generic wolves - who would've guessed ago
Chapter 3 Glowing Moss ago
Chapter 4 Exploration ago
Chapter 5 Civilization ago
Chapter 6 E X P O S I T I O N ago
Chapter 7 Broken Bones ago
Chapter 8 Death ago
Chapter 9 Graves to dig ago
Chapter 10 Catch a ride ago
Chapter 11 City life ago
Chapter 12 Bread and Circuses ago
Chapter 13 Relaxing afternoon ago
Chapter 14 It's a party! ago
Chapter 15 Bad doggos ago
Chapter 16 Loss ago
Chapter 17 Bracers and Books ago
Chapter 18 Through the fire and flames ago
Chapter 19 Caves. Still caves. ago
Chapter 20 Superhero landing, yea that's really hard on your knees ago
Chapter 21 The Unlife ago
Chapter 22 Not a cliffhanger ago
Chapter 23 Sun ago
Chapter 24 The Queen ago
Chapter 25 Woman and Monster ago
Chapter 26 Not a title ago
Chapter 27 It's a roadtrip! ago
Chapter 28 Actual healing, what? ago
Chapter 29 Force of nature ago
Chapter 30 Claymore ago
Chapter 31 Arrival ago
Chapter 32 Slice of life ago
Chapter 33 #Traveling ago
Chapter 34 Dungeon diving ago
Chapter 35 Outclassed ago
Chapter 36 Sparring and advice ago
Chapter 37 Azarinth Leecher ago
Chapter 38 Centurion ago
Chapter 39 Traps ago
Chapter 40 Fire and Ash ago
Chapter 41 Trash compactor ago
Chapter 42 Sushi ago
Chapter 43 Reasons and talks ago
Chapter 44 Newcomers ago
Chapter 45 Cake ago
Chapter 46 I feel like my titles are boring ago
Chapter 47 Darkness ago
Chapter 48 Treasures and fire ago
Chapter 49 On the trail of history ago
Chapter 50 Demon of Ash ago
Chapter 51 That is no bird ago
Chapter 52 New companions and enemies ago
Chapter 53 The forgotten title ago
Chapter 54 Cards and poison ago
Chapter 55 Welcome to the Internet ago
Chapter 56 Cleanup crew ago
Chapter 57 Loony steel ago
Chapter 58 Resisting ago
Chapter 59 Boss battles are easy ago
Chapter 60 Scythes and Swords ago
Chapter 61 Sharing is caring ago
Chapter 62 Survivors ago
Chapter 63 Onwards through the storm ago
Chapter 64 Snow and Ice ago
Chapter 65 There is a title though it holds no meaning ago
Chapter 66 Hunting ago
Chapter 67 Evolution ago
Chapter 68 Library ago
Chapter 69 Return ago
Chapter 70 Bait ago
Chapter 71 A dark night ago
Chapter 72 Old Beings ago
Chapter 73 Decisions and Ale ago
Chapter 74 Hashtag Traveling ago
Chapter 75 A Guild and a Bed ago
Chapter 76 Storage Skills ago
Chapter 77 Evaluation ago
Chapter 78 Excursion ago
Chapter 79 Iron ago
Chapter 80 Team ago
Chapter 81 Class ago
Chapter 82 Vampyr ago
Chapter 83 Team building excercises ago
Chapter 84 Yield ago
Chapter 85 A fine Establishment ago
Chapter 86 Dinner ago
Chapter 87 A Knowing Trade ago
Chapter 88 Questions ago
Chapter 89 Shields and Explosions ago
Chapter 90 Picnic ago
Chapter 91 Hide and Seek ago
Chapter 92 Vampire? ago
Chapter 93 Workaholics ago
Chapter 94 Rarities ago
Chapter 95 Negotiations ago
Chapter 96 Survival ago
Chapter 97 Change ago
Chapter 98 Statistics ago
Chapter 99 Housing ago
Chapter 100 Mission ago
Chapter 101 Inheritor ago
Chapter 102 Lost Wanderer ago
Chapter 103 Mission accomplished ago
Chapter 104 Another settlement needs our help ago
Chapter 105 Don't fear the old blood ago
Chapter 106 Cleanup Crew ago
Chapter 107 Everyday Life ago
Chapter 108 Tactical Defusing ago
Chapter 109 Dangerous Leeching ago
Chapter 110 Barriers ago
Chapter 111 Useless Ruins ago
Chapter 112 Another one of them missions ago
Chapter 113 Advances ago
Chapter 114 Bedtalk ago
Chapter 115 Tournament ago
Chapter 116 Horde ago
Chapter 117 Salt ago
Chapter 118 Mind Weaver ago
Chapter 119 Bone dog ago
Chapter 120 Diamonds in the sky ago
Chapter 121 Chambers of the Lost ago
Chapter 122 Flashy Beams ago
Chapter 123 Horde Mode? ago
Chapter 124 Into the Light ago
Chapter 125 Ripples ago
Chapter 126 Return ago
Chapter 127 Air Support ago
Chapter 128 Family Dinner ago
Chapter 129 A Good Show ago
Chapter 130 Noble Halls ago
Chapter 131 Escort Missions ago
Chapter 132 Recovery ago
Chapter 133 Immigration Documents ago
Chapter 134 Virilya ago
Chapter 135 Roguey Rogues Doing Rogue Stuff ago
Chapter 136 Vihal - Town Defense Simulator ago
Chapter 137 The Storm after the Storm ago
Chapter 138 Upgrade - Cave to Sewers ago
Chapter 139 Flying in the Dark ago
Chapter 140 Infected City ago
Chapter 141 Green, the not so stupid demon ago
Chapter 142 It's just a Fleshwound ago
Chapter 143 Bloody Entrails ago
Chapter 144 Lakes and Crystals ago
Chapter 145 Horde mode is exhausting ago
Chapter 146 Night Shift ago
Chapter 147 Chaos is a laddah ago
Chapter 148 Bearded Follower ago
Chapter 149 Reminiscing and Planning ago
Chapter 150 Politics, meh. ago
Chapter 151 I did this before but #traveling ago
Chapter 152 An Inn and a Boy ago
Chapter 153 Friends ago
Chapter 154 How much we grow ago
Chapter 155 A Night of Investigations ago
Chapter 156 Electric boogaloo ago
Chapter 157 Judge and Executioner ago
Chapter 158 Loose Ends ago
Chapter 159 The Hunted ago
Chapter 160 Ashen Afternoon ago
Chapter 161 #Economics ago
Chapter 162 Contracts, a Guide to Bland Titles ago
Chapter 163 Bad News ago
Chapter 164 Estate Investigation ago
Chapter 165 Silver Lining ago
Chapter 166 The Next Steps ago
Chapter 167 Reunited ago
Chapter 168 Tools and Information ago
Chapter 169 Shopping ago
Chapter 170 Ambush ago
Chapter 171 Silent Escape ago
Chapter 172 Crash ago
Chapter 173 Void ago
Chapter 174 Following the Trail ago
Chapter 175 Hunting in the Woods ago
Chapter 176 Tracks ago
Chapter 177 Negotiations ago
Chapter 178 The Price of Information ago
Chapter 179 Moonlit Talk ago
Chapter 180 The Path of Revenge ago
Chapter 181 Plan and Execution ago
Chapter 182 Murder ago
Chapter 183 Demolition Crew ago
Chapter 184 Shoes? ago
Chapter 185 A Bright Night ago
Chapter 186 Night Attack ago
Chapter 187 Bath before the Storm ago
Chapter 188 War ago
Chapter 189 First Huntress ago
Chapter 190 The Walls of Virilya ago
Chapter 191 Black Death ago
Chapter 192 The Librarian ago
Chapter 193 Prison Break ago
Chapter 194 Dangerous Flight ago
Chapter 195 Detour ago
Chapter 196 Rebuilding ago
Chapter 197 Preparations ago
Chapter 198 Demonic Fishes ago
Chapter 199 The Island ago
Chapter 200 The Baker ago
Chapter 201 Engage ago
Chapter 202 Old Friend ago
Chapter 203 Hunters and Prey ago
Chapter 204 Ice, Silver and Blood ago
Chapter 205 Discovery Channel ago
Chapter 206 Pancakes? Pancakes. ago
Chapter 207 Farewells ago
Chapter 208 The Journey South ago
Chapter 209 Technological Possibilities ago
Chapter 210 Evaluation from the other Side ago
Chapter 211 Drowning for Fun ago
Chapter 212 Resistance Roulette ago
Chapter 213 Blood Clotting ago
Chapter 214 A Winter Night ago
Chapter 215 Of Ash and Ember ago
Chapter 216 Ashen Considerations ago
Chapter 217 Preparation ago
Chapter 218 A new addition to the schedule ago
Chapter 219 A City on the Rise ago
Chapter 220 Cooking Dragons ago
Chapter 221 Wood and Drakes ago
Chapter 222 Wrong Time, Wrong City ago
Chapter 223 Pointers ago
Chapter 224 The Daily Grind ago
Chapter 225 The Shadow’s Hand ago
Chapter 226 Meditation ago
Chapter 227 Hope ago
Chapter 228 Farewells ago
Chapter 229 Journey through the Night ago
Chapter 230 Back to the Roots ago
Chapter 231 Compass Rose ago
Chapter 232 The Northern Night ago
Chapter 233 Chicken Nuggets ago
Chapter 234 Roses ago
Chapter 235 Tunnel Vision ago
Chapter 236 A City of Dust ago
Chapter 237 Palace Guards ago
Chapter 238 Questions ago
Chapter 239 Of the World ago
Chapter 240 Mapping out ago
Chapter 241 Contact ago
Chapter 242 Floating Wisdom ago
Chapter 243 Metal Gear ago
Chapter 244 Real Steel ago
Chapter 245 The slowing Grind ago
Chapter 246 Knights Knights Knights ago
Chapter 247 Wingwoman ago
Chapter 248 Ilea Spears ago
Chapter 249 The Need for Steel ago
Chapter 250 Undead Rose ago
Chapter 251 Compromise? ago
Chapter 252 Questioning a Robot ago
Chapter 253 Resourceful Dwarf ago
Chapter 254 Questionable Cooperation ago
Chapter 255 Alien Town ago
Chapter 256 The Blue Reaper ago
Chapter 257 Wormholes ago
Chapter 258 Cake ago
Chapter 259 Exterminator ago
Chapter 260 Survival ago
Chapter 261 History ago
Chapter 262 Discovery ago
Chapter 263 The Keys ago
Chapter 264 The Queen of Rhyvor ago
Chapter 265 Underground Paradise ago
Chapter 266 Scouting the Unknown ago
Chapter 267 Treasure Hunters ago
Chapter 268 Bloody Mess ago
Chapter 269 The Inner Circle ago
Chapter 270 Two Monsters ago
Chapter 271 Poison ago
Chapter 272 Overconfidence is a quick and direct Killer ago
Chapter 273 Regeneration ago
Chapter 274 Blood and Bones ago
Chapter 275 Search and Exploration ago
Chapter 276 Dark Ones ago
Chapter 277 Mist and Ash ago
Chapter 278 Royal Advice ago
Chapter 279 Survivor? ago
Chapter 280 Green Memories ago
Chapter 281 Helping out Strangers ago
Chapter 282 Decisive Battle ago
Chapter 283 Factory ago
Chapter 284 Legion of Centurions ago
Chapter 285 Training Considerations ago
Chapter 286 A Test ago
Chapter 287 The Freedom of Choice ago
Chapter 288 Lunchtime ago
Chapter 289 Rules ago
Chapter 290 Routine ago
Chapter 291 Inquisitive Fox ago
Chapter 292 Forges and Armor ago
Chapter 293 Resistance Dance ago
Chapter 294 Powerlevel ago
Chapter 295 Change of Plans ago
Chapter 296 Azarinth First Hunter ago
Chapter 297 Helpful Advice ago
Chapter 298 Fear and Void ago
Chapter 299 Terrific Suggestions ago
Chapter 300 ago
Chapter 301 The Ashen side of Things ago
Chapter 302 Testing ago
Chapter 303 Missing Pieces ago
Chapter 304 Approach to Power ago
Chapter 305 Power Cleaning Montage ago
Chapter 306 King Invalar of Rhyvor ago
Chapter 307 The Vineyard Caves ago
Chapter 308 Mansion of Bones ago
Chapter 309 Pyre ago
Chapter 310 Opinions and food ago
Chapter 311 Challenger ago
Chapter 312 Unreasonable Demands ago
Chapter 313 Cycle of War ago
Chapter 314 Worthy Opponents ago
Chapter 315 Survivors ago
Chapter 316 Cleanup ago
Chapter 317 The End of Patience ago
Chapter 318 Engage ago
Chapter 319 Taleen Praetorian ago
Chapter 320 Aftermath ago
Chapter 321 Relaxed Exploration ago
Chapter 322 Traps and Treasure ago
Chapter 323 The Beach Episode ago
Chapter 324 The Path Ahead ago
Chapter 325 The Vault ago
Chapter 326 Cleaning out a Ruin ago
Chapter 327 Theories and Assumptions ago
Chapter 328 Rescue Mission ago
Chapter 329 Monsters left untouched ago
Chapter 330 Weather ago
Chapter 331 A relaxing Vacation ago
Chapter 332 The Uses of Gold ago
Chapter 333 The Way Back ago
Chapter 334 Priorities ago
Chapter 335 Catching up ago
Chapter 336 Revelations ago
Chapter 337 Plans put in motion ago
Chapter 338 Sparky ago
Chapter 339 Skill Testing ago
Chapter 340 Craftswoman ago
Chapter 341 Maximum Overbusiness ago
Chapter 342 Are you not entertained? ago
Chapter 343 A Breath of Air ago
Chapter 344 Influence of the Rich ago
Chapter 345 Corpses ago
Chapter 346 The Necromancer ago
Chapter 347 Steel and Ash ago
Chapter 348 Moving out ago
Chapter 349 Angel of Death ago
Chapter 350 Hunters ago
Chapter 351 Evaluation ago
Chapter 352 Azarinth Sentinel ago
Chapter 353 The Value of Lives ago
Chapter 354 Conflicting Interests ago
Chapter 355 Compromises ago
Chapter 356 Man of Conviction ago
Chapter 357 Sanctuary ago
Chapter 358 Double Tap ago
Chapter 359 A slice of life ago
Chapter 360 The Vultures ago
Chapter 361 Demonic Tendencies ago
Chapter 362 The Word of a Shadow ago
Chapter 363 Breadcrumbs ago
Chapter 364 Detective Smash ago
Chapter 365 Captain of the Guard ago
Chapter 366 The Gray Company ago
Chapter 367 Deal with the Devil ago
Chapter 368 Blissful Edge ago
Chapter 369 Cursed Meeting ago
Chapter 370 Red Scales ago
Chapter 371 Potential Allies ago
Chapter 372 Contact ago
Chapter 373 A relaxing afternoon ago
Chapter 374 Loot and Levels ago
Chapter 375 Departure ago
Chapter 376 Slaughterhouse ago
Chapter 377 “Healing” ago
Chapter 378 Turning Tides ago
Chapter 379 Fire and Ash ago
Chapter 380 Taking Stock ago
Chapter 381 Packing mule ago
Chapter 382 Sushi ago
Chapter 383 Powerburning ago
Chapter 384 Drawn to the Flame ago
Chapter 385 Mine Residents ago
Chapter 386 Recovery ago
Chapter 387 Hiding Beasts ago
Chapter 388 Safety? ago
Chapter 389 Bunker of Steel ago
Chapter 390 Don’t Fear the Reaper ago
Chapter 391 Newfound beverages ago
Chapter 392 Remnant ago
Chapter 393 Findings ago
Chapter 394 Break ago
Chapter 395 Solitary Gains ago
Chapter 396 Math Resistance ago
Chapter 397 Sunglasses ago
Chapter 398 Benevolent Sentinel ago
Chapter 399 Lethal Voltage ago
Chapter 400 Fear ago
Chapter 401 Ice Valley ago
Chapter 402 Getting Lost ago
Chapter 403 Layers ago
Chapter 404 ago
Chapter 405 Ancient Mind ago
Chapter 406 Strange Acquaintances ago
Chapter 407 Air Pressure ago
Chapter 408 The Winds of Time ago
Chapter 409 Hunting Grounds ago
Chapter 410 Taking Flight ago
Chapter 411 Games ago
Chapter 412 Magic ago
Chapter 413 Ghosts ago
Chapter 414 That’s no Moon ago
Chapter 415 Nemesis of the never Master ago
Chapter 416 Remnants ago
Chapter 417 Friends with Benefits ago
Chapter 418 Ancients ago
Chapter 419 Meeting the Competition ago
Chapter 420 Blaze that Fucker ago
Chapter 421 Buried ago
Chapter 422 Recovery ago
Chapter 423 Friends? ago
Chapter 424 Regen powers ago
Chapter 425 Creature of the Night ago
Chapter 426 Threshold ago
Chapter 427 Open threads ago
Chapter 428 Routine Training? ago
Chapter 429 Questions ago
Chapter 430 Nature ago
Chapter 431 Grounding ago
Chapter 432 Core ago
Chapter 433 Breach ago
Chapter 434 Negotiations ago
Chapter 435 Cosmic Knowledge ago
Chapter 436 Considerations ago
Chapter 437 Ancient Mentor ago
Chapter 438 Basically just exposition, isn’t it? ago
Chapter 439 Quiet Arrival ago
Chapter ??? ago
Chapter 440 Catching up ago
Chapter 441 Administrator ago
Chapter 442 Performance ago
Chapter 443 Impressions ago
Chapter 444 Busy Schedule ago
Chapter 445 Rotten Treasures ago
Chapter 446 Purpose ago
Chapter 447 Truly Enchanting ago
Chapter 448 Corruption ago
Chapter 449 Lessons ago
Chapter 450 Steady Climb ago
Chapter 451 Displacing Circumstances ago
Chapter 452 Seeker ago
Chapter 453 Adventuring ago
Chapter 454 A test? ago
Chapter 455 Abominations ago
Chapter 456 Blood ago
Chapter 457 Worthy Adversaries ago
Chapter 458 Reputation ago
Chapter 459 Request ago
Chapter 460 Problematic Conflicts ago
Chapter 461 Infiltration ago
Chapter 462 Mark of Trust ago
Chapter 463 Quest ago
Chapter 464 Thresholds ago
Chapter 465 Moving Pieces ago
Chapter 466 Bells of War ago
Chapter 467 Shadow ago
Chapter 468 Lilith ago
Chapter 469 Aftermath ago
Chapter 470 Reinforcements ago
Chapter 471 Shadows ago
Chapter 472 Expectations ago
Chapter 473 Practice ago
Chapter 474 Guardian ago
Chapter 475 Possibilities ago
Chapter 476 Baking ago
Chapter 477 The Way of the Sentinel ago
Chapter 478 Inquiries ago
Chapter 479 Reminiscing ago
Chapter 480 Requirements ago
Chapter 481 Choices ago
Chapter 482 Experimentation ago
Chapter 483 Training ago
Chapter 484 Noble Ideas ago
Chapter 485 The Three Shadows ago
Chapter 486 Excursion ago
Chapter 487 Fame and Confusion ago
Chapter 488 Woman vs Machine ago
Chapter 489 Arcane Energy ago
Chapter 490 Client ago
Chapter 491 Reminiscence ago
Chapter 492 Arrangements ago
Chapter 493 Influence ago
Chapter 494 Toys and Theatrics ago
Chapter 495 Cake and Tea? ago
Chapter 496 Assignment ago
Chapter 497 Ruins ago
Chapter 498 Water ago
Chapter 499 Briefing ago
Chapter 500 Invasion ago
Chapter 501st Ilea’s Fist ago
Chapter 502 Destroyers ago
Chapter 503 Questions ago
Chapter 504 Fractures ago
Chapter 505 Golden Boy ago
Chapter 506 Intervention ago
Chapter 507 Impressions ago
Chapter 508 A hunch ago
Chapter 509 Revenge ago
Chapter 510 Messy Solutions? ago
Chapter 511 Infiltration ago
Chapter 512 Myth ago
Chapter 513 Alchemy ago
Chapter 514 Seeking the Faithful ago
Chapter 515 Discovery ago
Chapter 516 Mess ago
Chapter 517 Pirates ago
Chapter 518 Road Construction ago
Chapter 519 Catching up ago
Chapter 520 Rituals ago
Chapter 521 Warriors ago
Chapter 522 Mantises – Manti – Mantuu? ago
Chapter 523 To the Bone ago
Chapter 524 Loss ago
Chapter 525 Diverging Possibilities ago
Chapter 526 Progression and Possibilities ago
Chapter 527 Species ago
Chapter 528 Meadow ago
Chapter 529 Deadly Spirits? ago
Chapter 530 Dangerzone ago
Chapter 531 The days ahead ago
Chapter 532 Activities ago
Chapter 533 Arrangements ago
Chapter 534 Escort Mission ago
Chapter 535 This is a litrpg, in case you forgot ago
Chapter 536 Storm ago
Chapter 537 Foxy ago
Chapter 538 Teleportation ago
Chapter 539 Playtime ago
Chapter 540 Puzzling ago
Chapter 541 Beatdown ago
Chapter 542 Docking ago
Chapter 543 Training Training Training ago
Chapter 544 Off the beaten path ago
Chapter 545 Hunting ago
Chapter 546 Of Gods and Myths ago
Chapter 547 Challenger ago
Chapter 548 Catching up ago
Chapter 549 Arrival ago
Chapter 550 Storm ago
Chapter 551 A realm of wonder ago
Chapter 552 Tourist Guide ago
Chapter 553 Degrees of Monstrosity ago
Chapter 554 Overleveled ago
Chapter 555 Roots ago
Chapter 556 Friends of old ago
Chapter 557 Contenders ago
Chapter 558 Normal Exams ago
Chapter 559 Experience ago
Chapter 560 Breakfast? ago
Chapter 561 The very capable and cool divine tree that is awesome and definitely hasn’t taken over a ago
Chapter 562 Stone ago
Chapter 563 Boning ago
Chapter 564 Uphill Battle ago
Chapter 565 Perseverance ago
Chapter 566 Concerns ago
Chapter 567 Decisions ago
Chapter 568 Reaping Rewards ago
Chapter 569 Request ago
Chapter 570 Fire Proof ago
Chapter 571 Defenders ago
Chapter 572 Training Considerations ago
Chapter 573 Royal Reception ago
Chapter 574 Younglings ago
Chapter 575 Reunion ago
Chapter 576 Feast ago
Chapter 577 Flames ago
Chapter 578 Expansion Pack (Pre order now for exclusive skins) ago
Chapter 579 Molten Steel ago
Chapter 580 Mapping ago
Chapter 581 Incinerate ago
Chapter 582 Entanglement ago
Chapter 583 Discoveries ago
Chapter 584 Gates ago
Chapter 585 Dungeons and depths ago
Chapter 586 The Grind ago
Chapter 587 Opportunity? ago
Chapter 588 Writing ago
Chapter 589 Some Lore for the Wiki ago
Chapter 590 Magic Turtle ago
Chapter 591 Proposals ago
Chapter 592 Peculiar Meetings ago
Chapter 593 Deus Ex Meadow ago
Chapter 594 Beaming ago
Chapter 595 Visiting the Sentinels ago
Chapter 596 Common Adventurers ago
Chapter 597 Wondrous Travelers ago
Chapter 598 Extraction ago
Chapter 599 Northward ago
Chapter 600 Shortcuts and Ambitions ago
Chapter 601 Sneaking? ago
Chapter 602 Jobbing ago
Chapter 603 Quarry ago
Chapter 604 Dressing for the Occasion ago
Chapter 605 Drinks and Baths ago
Chapter 606 Noble Things ago
Chapter 607 Murders ago
Chapter 608 Follow the White Rabbit ago
Chapter 609 Ruins left behind ago
Chapter 610 Search ago
Chapter 611 Catching up ago
Chapter 612 A Hunter must hunt ago
Chapter 613 Wyverns ago
Chapter 614 A simple spell ago
Chapter 615 Tour ago
Chapter 616 Fear ago
Chapter 617 Slice and Dice ago
Chapter 618 Grant us Eyes ago
Chapter 619 Bird food ago
Chapter 620 Seal ago
Chapter 621 Terror of Krahen Keep ago
Chapter 622 Ceaseless Discharge ago
Chapter 623 Arcane Power ago
Chapter 624 Lizards ago
Chapter 625 Furnace ago
Chapter 626 Snêk ago
Chapter 627 A satisfying drink ago
Chapter 628 New toys ago
Chapter 629 Priorities ago
Chapter 630 Broadening Horizons ago
Chapter 631 Orders ago
Chapter 632 Enhance! ago
Chapter 633 Glowing Eyes ago
Chapter 634 Old Acquaintances ago
Chapter 635 Eye of the Storm ago
Chapter 636 Forgery ago
Chapter 637 Paths ago
Chapter 638 Bonding ago
Chapter 639 Steps ago
Chapter 640 A tense welcome ago
Chapter 641 Negotiations ago
Chapter 642 Trust ago
Chapter 643 Royalty ago
Chapter 644 A monster’s feast ago
Chapter 645 Demon ago
Chapter 646 Speaker ago
Chapter 647 Paladin ago
Chapter 648 Sightseeing ago
Chapter 649 Lessons ago
Chapter 650 Reputation ago
Chapter 651 Balance ago
Chapter 652 Acquaintances ago
Chapter 653 Banquet ago
Chapter 654 Growing Awareness ago
Chapter 655 Intruders ago
Chapter 656 Treasure Island ago
The Union of Dubious Dames II ago
Chapter 657 Drilling ago
Chapter 658 Search ago
Chapter 659 Suspicions ago
Chapter 660 Audur ago
Chapter 661 Prey ago
Chapter 662 Wormholes ago
Chapter 663 A short rest ago
Chapter 664 Upgrades ago
Chapter 665 Tombs ago
Chapter 666 Stormy Weather ago
Chapter 667 Gods ago
Chapter 668 History ago
Chapter 669 The lore man cometh ago
Chapter 670 Ice ago
Chapter 671 Gauntlet ago
Chapter 672 Sphering Voidening ago
Chapter 673 Absolutely Nothing ago
Chapter 674 Rebirth ago
Chapter 675 League of common humans ago
Chapter 676 Living Steel ago
Chapter 677 The Pit ago
Chapter 678 Reputation ago
Chapter 679 Titan ago
Chapter 680 Undying ago
Chapter 681 Fire ago
Chapter 682 New Toys ago
Chapter 683 Beings lurking in the Deep ago
Chapter 684 Master of the Mind ago
Chapter 685 Demons of the Ancient World ago
Chapter 686 The Fires of Creation ago
Chapter 687 Ingenuity ago
Chapter 688 Forges ago
Chapter 689 Heavy ago
Chapter 690 Puzzle masters ago
Chapter 691 Can we get a zoom on that? ago
Chapter 692 Domain ago
Chapter 693 This chapter is sponsored by the Endless Meadow ago
Chapter 694 Lockpicking Mages ago
Chapter 695 Coordination ago
Chapter 696 King of Souls ago
Chapter 697 Free Real Estate ago
Chapter 698 Magu ago
Chapter 699 S P O R T S ago
Chapter 700 Bets ago
Chapter 701 Deals ago
Chapter 702 Brawl ago
Chapter 703 Ripples in Space ago
Chapter 704 Brunch ago
Chapter 705 Spy ago
Chapter 706 College Life ago
Chapter 707 Gates and Wings ago
Chapter 708 Hunters and Prey ago
Chapter 709 Impressions ago
Chapter 710 Introductions ago
Chapter 711 The Harbinger of Cake ago
Chapter 712 Arrangements ago
Chapter 713 History ago
Chapter 714 Planning ago
Chapter 715 Looking for a Challenge ago
Chapter 716 Access denied ago
Chapter 717 Swarm ago
Chapter 718 Bath ago
Chapter 719 Delivery Sentinel ago
Chapter 720 The Halls of Eternity ago
Chapter 721 Hidden Figures ago
Chapter 722 Taunting ago
Chapter 723 Demonstration ago
Chapter 724 Third Dinner ago
Chapter 725 Cocks ago
Chapter 726 Some gates close. Some gates open. ago
Chapter 727 Descent ago
Chapter 728 Pieces of the Puzzle ago
Chapter 729 Desert ago
Chapter 730 Founder ago
Chapter 731 Exchange ago
Chapter 732 Sand Creator ago
Chapter 733 Monastery ago
Chapter 734 Destinations ago
Chapter 735 Grinding Grounds ago
Chapter 736 Definitely not a cult gathering ago
Chapter 737 Visitors ago
Chapter 738 Concentrated Power ago
Chapter 739 Card Tricks ago
Chapter 740 Dinner ago
Chapter 741 Humanity ago
Chapter 742 Drinking ago
Chapter 743 Contestants ago
Chapter 744 Wolf ago
Chapter 745 Introductions ago
Chapter 746 Blades ago
Chapter 747 Art ago
Chapter 748 Competition ago
Chapter 749 Knives and Noodles ago
Chapter 750 Warmth ago
Chapter 751 Remnants ago
Chapter 752 Twenty Eight ago
Chapter 753 Finals ago
Chapter 754 Dancing Spells ago
Chapter 755 Era ago
Chapter 756 Scrambled Eggs or something ago
Chapter 757 Super fucking busy ago
Chapter 758 Feast ago
Chapter 759 Keys ago
Chapter 760 Thief ago
Chapter 761 Myths ago
Chapter 762 Flesh ago
Chapter 763 Master of the Fabric ago
Dedicated Post ago
Chapter 764 Gathering ago
Chapter 765 Golden Eyes ago
Chapter 766 Enhance ago
Chapter 767 Wasteland ago
Chapter 768 The Fires of Creation ago
Chapter 769 In time of need ago
Chapter 770 Hunt ago
Chapter 771 Mist ago
Chapter 772 Sea ago
Chapter 773 Shift ago
Chapter 774 Wall ago
Chapter 775 Barrier ago
Chapter 776 Immune. Immune. Immune. ago
Chapter 777 Assault ago
Chapter 778 Sphere ago
Chapter 779 Guardian ago
Chapter 780 Meat ago
Chapter 781 Allies ago
Chapter 782 Io ago
Chapter 783 Talks ago
Chapter 784 Conflict ago
Chapter 785 Individuals ago
Chapter 786 Power ago
Chapter 787 Votes ago
Chapter 788 Rogue ago
Chapter 789 Signatures ago
Chapter 790 Dinner ago
Chapter 791 Drinks ago
Chapter 792 Ripples ago
Chapter 793 Corpses? ago
Chapter 794 Father ago
Chapter 795 Curses ago
Chapter 796 Missions ago
Chapter 797 Instant travel ago
Chapter 798 Frontier ago
Chapter 799 Blood ago
Chapter 800 Market ago
Chapter 801 Shades ago
Chapter 802 Dealings ago
Chapter 803 Remembrance ago
Chapter 804 Farewells ago
Chapter 805 Blood ago
Chapter 806 Silver Storm ago
Chapter 807 Silver Storm 2 Electric Baraloo ago
Chapter 808 Orbital Strike ago
Chapter 809 A settlement needs your help ago
Chapter 810 Rip and Tear ago
Chapter 811 The negotiations were short ago
Chapter 812 Search ago
Chapter 813 Isn’t this why you’re here? Are you not entertained? ago
Chapter 814 Brave New World ago
Chapter 815 Opportunities ago
Chapter 816 Request ago
Chapter 817 Orange Juice ago
Chapter 818 Wasteland ago
Chapter 819 Journey ago
Chapter 820 Plea ago
Chapter 821 Octavia ago
Chapter 822 Allies ago
Chapter 823 Extraction ago
Chapter 824 Westward ago
Chapter 825 Gods ago
Chapter 826 Flame ago
Chapter 827 Snake Eater ago
Chapter 828 The Tower ago
Chapter 829 Heart ago
Chapter 830 Excavation ago
Chapter 831 Black Sea ago
Chapter 832 About time ago
Chapter 833 Choice ago
Chapter 834 Whispers ago
Chapter 835 Mind ago
Chapter 836 Excursion ago
Chapter 837 Haven ago
Chapter 838 Barrier ago
Chapter 839 Riddles ago
Chapter 840 A relaxing afternoon break ago
Chapter 841 Will ago
Chapter 842 Fire ago
Chapter 843 Wind of Aveer ago
Chapter 844 Who we are ago
Chapter 845 Normalcy ago
Chapter 846 Reminisce ago
Chapter 847 Initiates ago
Chapter 848 Root ago
Chapter 849 Feast ago
Chapter 850 Prototype ago
Chapter 851 Tales ago
Chapter 852 Life ago
Chapter 853 Nap ago

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Easygoing Battle-Junkie LitRPG

Reviewed at: Chapter 454 A test?

There is no crisis to be resolved, the mc is op but not to the point where she will have to step forward to save the world. This is more the easygoing, slice of life of a battle-junkie grinding out her skills and levels from the system.

I actually prefer stories that are just about batttle junkies (or other eccentrics like crafting-maniacs or mad-scientist), which this story seems to be. It's not a tense story about a hero with the weight of the world on thier shoulders, not about offending young masters and then exterminating their clan, nor about facing the entire world. It's not just a humourous slice of life without any action either, though I do find it funny.

This is the simple adventure of a slightly op battle-junkie type girl. The fighting scenes are great and entertaining. The slice of life is light, funny and refreshing. The system is grindy, straightforward and(for her)power progressive(fast). 

Edit(chapter 36): Changed score after reading detailed reviews abit(especially oinos and ninetails). Though I have a different view on scoring, the minor errors are there, though not very impactful to the quality of the work and are becoming rarer. MC will hopefully pick up interesting long-term companions/side characters soon.

Edit: I think I'm kinda dumb to just realise she has a job that treats magic like qi. She literal has most the skills qi cultivators do. A healer monk type class.

April 2020: I have been reading this story for two years. Perhaps i should have updated this review in that time but other reviews are available. The author has written 450 amazing chapters in those two years (okay, two years and a couple of months). The author detailed use of style, grammar and characters have improved progressively in that time. Still, how to describe the protagonist journey over thar time to carry on from the earlier review and hopefully encourage more people to read, while not spoiling. Well...

Considering the people she met (creature, machine/golem and humanoid), the monsters she has fought (creature, machine/golem and humanoid) and the places she has grown attached too. I'm not sure I ever should have called it a simple adventure, though it is still light on drama. That is thanks to our easygoing protagonist (and ofcourse thre great author), not the lack of plotlines or her lack of motivation.

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Read and rate other reviews if you aren't convinced to read from mine! Upvote reviews that make you want to read, I just love this story, I'm going to upvote reviws that i think are accurate now.

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I started the adventure with this story 2 years ago, when the first chapter was released. It is the only one that was able to keep me by its side for so many chapters and such long time. Others either ended prematurely, or lost their appeal. I think this is the best proof of quality of this book, as well the best reason for reading it I can give.

Just read the first 5 or so chapters, if you liked it, then it is almost guaranteed that you will love the rest.

The best part of this book, I think, is its ability to build up an excitement no matter how much already was written. The MC achieved a truly ridiculous level of power, yet I found myself eagerly awaiting the next fight, next milestone. The world is vast, there is always another challenge, without ascending to another level of existence or unnecessary waffle. Just marvelous adventure.

The story is not only about fighting and gaining power. Many mysteries make the world much more exhilarating. There is much to learn, even about the system. Also, the MC is interacting with almost every part of the described world, so not much is left as only dry, background information, untouched worldbuilding block. This is rare and creates a feeling of freedom, simultaneously making the world feel more real.

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The story which updates I look forward to the most

I spent some time thinking about which category I was least content with to withdraw half a star so that my review doesn't come off as "I indiscrimately give 0 or five stars to everything I like" But I couldn't decide, so I just left it like that.

I first encountered this story when it was trending, read two chapters and was put off by the (then) mix of present and past time in the story. So I put it on my "Read later" list, because it had promise and sometimes the author comes back around and fixes such things. Well, the author did.

This is an amazing story and even better, it gets updated very on a very regular basis. The characters feel alive, you can understand everyones motivations, the MC is relatively OP, but earned it the hard way and the combat is intensely satisfying.

 

 

Spoiler: Spoiler

 What I also really like, is how the author handles crises. The demon invasion was not an "End of the world" crisis, and could have theoretically been handled without the main characters' interference. The Golden Lily are a threat but at the moment are not actively targeting the MC. This leaves room for the main character to do what she enjoys (eating&fighting&exploring)

 

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I went in expecting a pretty great novel based on the reviews, but I have to throw in the towel. Hardly anything is offensively bad about the story, but I do not understand how any of the reviews put any category as 5 stars.

Grammar: This is one of the biggest issues for me, and unless the author has massively improved in the later chapters, it baffles the mind that anyone considers this aspect good or great. A good chunk of the beginning chapters mention in the author note box that they were editted and someone else even proofread them, but it is still so bad. The wrong words are constantly being used, and so often it's the same mistake over and over. Two examples that stuck out every time they occured, which was usually at least once a chapter or two, are "chose" instead of "choose" and "thought" instead of "though". I don't know if the author put the proper word for either of those even once by accident. Reading a chapter is never a smooth experience as you are constantly rereading sentences or paragraphs when you realize a misspelling or the wrong word changes the meaning that was supposed to be gotten across.

Style: Probably one of the better aspects, but nothing to write home about. There are random points when this takes a massive dip and the novel basically reads like someone giving you the cliff's notes version of the story because the author cared more about fitting all the set up into the chapter rather than telling it in a compelling or more interesting way. It's a lot of fighting and grinding, but the majority of it is told differently or vividly enough to not feel like it's just copy pasted. The way they handled showing what skills leveled up got much better in the last 50 chapters or so. Just waiting for a bunch of them to level up at once and then showing the first and last notification for each skill was much better than when it would just show the status screen with the updated skill levels.

One thing that does absolutely drive me insane is the author seeming to think our suspension of disbelief will be shattered if he doesn't throw in sentences every now and then of Ilea having to stop what's happening to go to the bathroom. She's talking to someone? Randomly in the beginning or middle she'll mention she has to go, than it'll say she goes, and right back to talking to the person. Same thing happens with food. Probably 80% of the chapters reference her getting food multiple times, but that rant will be continued in the character section.

Story: Ilea doesn't care and neither do I. She stays in one spot for a few hours to maybe a couple weeks. She makes it to her destination, and if it was to be with people, she realizes she is bored and itching to fight more things, and dips. If it's a place she can punch things, she stays there for a bit until she has thoroughly punched everything around, gotten her levels and skill ups, and then dips for a better place. Throw in some vague references to greater things happening in the world and a whole bunch of mysteries that don't amount to much or seem particularly thought out. A lot of the mysteries are so vague they seem more like the author threw them in incase he needed something he could expound upon later.

For example: the dwarven city/dungeon. She meets some people who are in there for reasons. They must reach their destination at any cost, being happy to use this stranger they basically kidnap, Ilea, as a trap activator because their thing is super important and the vaguest line imaginable makes it seem like they suffered worse so what they're doing is justified. Ilea asks multiple times what they're after. They don't answer. Reasonable. She's a disposable person they don't really care about, why would they tell her. Then, the big reveal:

it turns out they needed to make it to a teleporter that goes to a different dwarven dungeon. Right before they teleport away, the dude explains this and has a flash of anger at some guy only referenced as "him" letting us know they're doing it for revenge or because some guy is forcing them to and then they disappear

 

The hands arc so far was the closest thing to an actual arc, with everything before that having the barest of stories to get her to places she can punch things. The story is so barely a factor as to not really be bad or good.

Character: Some characters are perfectly fine, others are one note and completely forgettable, others are downright horrendous. Ilea sliding more and more into that third category is one of the things that got me to drop this. She is becoming a caricature of her original personality, and based on some of the reviews that got 600-800 chapters, it seems like that only gets worse. At the beginning, food was a passion of hers and after eating nothing but grass for months, she wanted to try a bunch of the new foods of the world and make up for lost time. Now, multiple times a chapter she is shoving food into her mouth, stopping at restaurants to eat, and whining when she can't eat, even in completely inappropriate moments. In a mission and her and her teammates almost died? Better complain about not being able to eat while waiting for them to recover. Waiting to meet up with your friends for food where she'll spend stupid amounts of money on food? Better mention how she spends the hours before going to other restaurants because eating food makes her hungry. It's a joke that was never funny and strains my patience the more it is brought up.

Same issue with her and being serious. At first she didn't really take it seriously since she wasn't even sure if it was real or not, and then because she was beating everything so handily she didn't need to take things seriously. Her making jokes while talking to herself honestly seemed more like a coping method to keep herself sane since she'd go months without seeing anyone else. During the dwarven ruins arc she still made jokes, but it was never really at inappropriate times. When other people died she wasn't cracking wise. When she almost died she became a mess and even mentioned to herself that she wasn't smiling and forced one to try and not completely breakdown and change as a person. Then in the hands arc, on her first mission where her and her teammates almost all die she is making jokes and not taking it seriously, despite everyone getting annoyed with her and telling her to knock it off. It also doesn't help that the jokes aren't funny.

Lastly for Ilea, the sex. Just feels like when the author gets horny while writing he throws in a sex scene. There is no set up for any of them. The ones with the guys are at least mercifully short. Roland sits next to her on the roof of a wagon and draws while she reads. Cut to them waking up naked next to each other. A watress is introduced and is getting sexually harassed by a customer so the waitress shocks him with electricity. Better follow her to the bathroom, say you want some, she shocks Ilea, but because she can handle it that leads to a much more prolonged and described sex scene. The one with Kyrian is even more genuinely creepy. One or two references of Ilea telling herself not to fall for him when she looked into his eyes earlier in the story, but she told herself not to fall for Eve and her other male teammate. Guess she'll be sexing them up the next time the author is horny. With Kyrian, she takes him to her house, asks if he's had sex and when says no, asks if he wants to. He says no, so she instead asks if he's kissed someone, when she says no, she kisses him. Then they make out and she gets on top and starts stripping them both and they have sex. Doesn't help that he he can barely talk to people, stuttering every time and looking down, and she was helping him learn to read, further making it seem like he has a mind of a child, making this whole thing seem incredibly manipulative, and definitely giving off r*pey vibes. 

The trio in the dwarven caves are all immensely unlikable and the fact the author tries making them seem like redeemable characters with Ilea considering what they do as reasonable is disgustingly toxic. Force her to join their group, reveal all her secrets about her class and stats, a big no no in this world people would kill you over trying to do, and then repeatedly send her to die activating traps. But they don't look at her weird for being a battle fanatic and she leveled a bunch, so it's all okay and they can be friends. Her teammates with the Hand are fine but have like 1.5 dimensions to them. At least they're changing to become less obnoxious to their teammates and into "better" people, something Ilea herself failed. Besides Eve's mystery seeming equally pointless and not at all planned out, don't have much else to say about them.

If you have nothing else to read you can find worse. Don't bother thinking much about the story, doesn't seem to matter.

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Well, everybody and their dog has written an overview of this fiction and I'm not the one person to be deterred by that, so here's one more to the avalanche.

I've been reading this opus periodically since the time it had about 200 pages (that's when I like to pick up fresh stuff) and it has gotten progressively better. I remember the time I started reading it and thought: "the grammar is weird and the POV even weirder", but it was still at least a little bit enjoyable so i grit my teeth and stuck with it.

Lo and behold, it has gotten a lot better and the authour even revwote the bad grammar and the weird POV in the earlier chapters. And since then it has became the nicely flowing slice of life LitRPG that you can take as a bechmark for others, that still has stuff to go for.

P.S.: I've since reread the whole (up to now around 220 chapters) story twice and still find it nice.

Fuchsia
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Not for me, but maybe it's for you

Reviewed at: Chapter 200 The Baker

I wanted to like this story, but I couldn't. 

Don't get me wrong, i'm usually fine with stories like this, where a character goes from place to place beating up shit, getting stronger, solving every single problem, and having everyone compliment them all the while. It's a guilty pleasure for sure. This? Yeah, nah. 

What didn't I like about it?

The characters. They have no personality whatsoever, as much as the author would like to pretend that they do. Ilea in particular is just about as cookie cutter as they come, and has no personality outside of making sad jokes and fighting. 

The dialogue. Most characters sound like tweens, even the older, supposedly mature ones. It's painful. Also, Ilea's innerse voice is incredibly obnoxious. The author wants her and other characters to sound funny, but they're not. It's so heavy-handed that it brings you out of the story.  

The plot. Again, i'm fine with these kinds of one-dimensional, progression stories, but this one is just boring. Read one arc and you've read them all, with minor changes. Would be fine if the characters were decent enough, but they're really not. I have nothing and no-one to attach to. 

What did I like? 

Just about everything else, especially the magic system and writing style. This story may have evolved into something better, with better characters and plot over time, but i'll never made it there to find out. 

I don't like this story, but I can see why some people do. 

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Solid Progression Story

Azarinth Healer is a solid litRPG with satisfying and continuous power progression. 

The premise of the story is a portal fantasy where the MC finds herself with a battle healer class, and then proceeds to train, fight, and grind to get stronger.

The story currently releases 6 decent-length chapters a week, which keeps the pacing up even when the MC is training/grinding/studying. The grammar is good, with few major errors. The characterization is straightforward and consistent, with Ilea being a pragmatic and mature adrenaline junkie whose goal is to challenge herself and get stronger. 

A strong point of the story is how well the litRPG system has been designed and handled so far. It is an interesting 2-class/person system with well-defined capabilites and rules. Ilea's progression has been very satisfying and has felt earned.

The story refreshingly does not involved any save-the-world situations, and has mostly been allowed to evolve organically as the MC adventures. The worldbuilding has been quite well done as well.

Overall, I would strongly recommend this story.

(Review as of Chapter 247)

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One of the Magnum Opuses of RR, that I'm dropping

Reviewed at: Chapter 497 Ruins

Ahhhh, Azarinth Healer. One of the biggest series on RR. Also one of my favorite (and ex-favorite) series on here. This series is one I would definately recommend everyone try at the very least, but also a series that I've decided to finally drop.

This series used to be my go-to series on RR, the one I'd spend hours binging, then putting it down for a few months only to pick it back to binge it once more. Rhaegar uploads so consistently and so often that I sometimes wonder if he's secretly a robot programmed to write all day everyday (god knows I myself can barely write a few hundred words per day).

But at the same time, after reading almost 500 chapters of this amazing series, I've found myself bored and quite frankly annoyed whilst reading.

In this review, I'll first go over why I gave the rating I gave, and at the end I'll give a more general reason to my rating. Hopefully I won't get bombarded with dislikes because I didn't give this series all 5 stars lol.

1. Style:

Honestly, nothing unique or interesting. Pretty generic, but not bad by any standards. 4 stars because it's solid, but nothing extraordinary.

2. Story:

Story started off quite interesting. We have a fairly generic opening, with our MC Ilea getting isekai'd into a fantasy forest. She gets chased by wolves and drakes and stuff, find the hidden Azarinth temple, and gets her class. Pretty standard stuff. She then finds human town, stuff with elves happen, stuff with the Taleen happens, stuff with Shadow's Hand happens, pretty decent stuff and we get some inkling of some deeper plot with the Golden Lily and that one girl who was also from Earth.

My problem with the story starts with Ilea going to the North. Frankly, the whole shebang with the North could've been good if it weren't for the fact that it got dragged on for so long. I'm not 100% sure how many chapters it took, but I feel like the mini arc where she is clearing that Rose steel dungeon (or whatever it was called) where she meets Elfie dragged on for way too long, with most of the chapters being Ilea just beating up the knights over and over again. The whole North arc felt like a side-quest, honestly, and it was just as I was getting interested in the Golden Lily storyline.

We then spend like a good 100 or 200 chapters going from the North, back down south, then back to the North while barely progressed the Golden Lily storyline, and by the time when we finally get back to it, I've forgotten most of the stuff surrounding them. It honestly just felt like Rhaegar deciding to drag it out for the sake of dragging the story out.

One thing I'll say, though, is that the power ramp is dealt with decently. There is definately some power ramping going on lately, but they were able to keep it in line for the most part.

There's some other stuff that I found irksome, but I will do more in depth later in the review since it's honestly purely my personal opinion.

That said, 3 stars for the story.

3. Grammar:

Nothing special to say about this other than the fact that Rhaegar really need to reread what he wrote and fix the minor spelling mistakes before posting.

4 stars because it happens quite frequently.

4. Character:

Alright, characters. One of the main problems I had with this story lately. Ilea's honestly pretty...bland. Sure, she's got an attitude and is somewhat memorable, but honestly I don't think she has progressed much at all as a character. Her stats go up, but she's still the battlejunkie with an attitude, not much change or character growth in the 500ish chapters I've read. The biggest character "development" she's gone through was when she had a breakdown when she first killed a person, but then she went back to the usual Ilea right after.

The side characters are, in my opinion, much more interesting that Ilea herself, and more "growth" if I'm going to be honest. The problem I have with the "growth" is that it's usually just "Oh Ilea, you're not gonna do XYZ!" becoming "Ermagerd Ilea you're so OP n stuff, and you got good morals!". (Going to talk about the morals stuff later).

2.5 stars because the characters are still super bland even after ~500 chapters.

My personal opinions:

Time to talk about some of the kinks and quirks that really bugged me personally.

First, the biggest thing that put me off lately is all the "morals" and stuff Ilea is enforcing. It honestly just feels like Rhaegar wants to make it so that Ilea is a Good aligned character, but without actually putting too much effort into making her seem that way. Ilea just going around telling people "Torture isn't good" or "Slavery is bad" and all that stuff, which makes perfect sense for us readers who live in the 21st century, but which probably makes no sense to the people in Elos since, you know, they don't exactly have the moral compass of a person living in 21st century Earth. The characters then essentially bend over backwards to accomodate Ilea because "Ilea stronk", and this all just feels like a very cheap way to say "Ilea has good moral compass :)".

I found this especially grating during the seige of Riverwatch, where she goes off about how "slavery bad" then beats up the invaders and makes them promise to abolish slavery. I mean, yes slavery is bad, but like come on. Pretty sure everyone reading this story knows that slavery is in fact bad, we don't need Ilea to tell it to us over and over again. It was especially annoying when the leader of the invaders essentially told Ilea that the slaves weren't captured because of race or whatnot, and frankly had a decent quality of life for a slave. (Think Roman slavery, except a lot more accomodating). So it essentially ends up with Ilea forcing the invaders, which if I'm remembering correctly, was a guy with a title who ruled over a piece of land, getting told to "abolish all slavery and send them off with food n stuff or else", essentially crippling their their economy.

It's this kind of stuff that makes me dislike Ilea, she just don't see the bigger picture when she makes her decisions. Another decision of hers I really hated was when, in the North, Hallowfort was getting attacked by the Feynors and the Dark Ones managed to capture one of the attackers. They were going to torture the captive to get more information, but Ilea just killed the captive and told the Dark Ones "torture bad", without thinking about the fact that, you know, getting information that could win the whole dang war would lead to a lot less deaths?

Like seriously, Ilea seems like some sort of teenager who thinks everything in life is black or white, and that doing the "morally correct" thing (that agree with her own moral compass) is always the right thing to do, no matter the consequences.

Oh, yeah, there aren't consequences because apparently nothing bad ever happens when Ilea does something that's honestly dumb.

Finally, as some of the other reviews have pointed out, this story is honestly getting stale. It's just the same thing over and over again, and with the glacial pace the underlying plot is progressing at, the series has become sort of slice-of-lifey.

 

Alright, rant/review over. All in all, Azarinth Healer is a solid series and is definately one of the magnum opuses of RoyalRoad, though it is not without flaws.

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2021 Update: Grammar has improved.

AH is one of the better stories on RR: it has believable characters, decent worldbuilding, and a decent story. The main issues are grammar, style, and unimportant chapters. The grammar issues have mostly been fixed, though there are still errors from typing too fast, such as missing spaces and random letters being added to words. Proofreading would solve these issues easily. Ilea received most of her character development early on, and stagnated at around chapter 80. Other characters have grown well, especially

Spoiler: Spoiler

The style fluctuates as the author tries different techniques early on, and again at between chapters 120 and 200. Other reviews have asked how non-combat classes level up, it's the same as how Ilea first reached level 10, practice. Finally the main issue I have with AH: the pointless chapters. Some chapters, for whatever reason, have no real content. No character growth, no exploring, no meaningful combat, and so on. They have repeatedly stopped me from reading any further, dropping the story for months at a time until I forget them and can read on. I’d name them, if I could remember them.

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Started good, now some what weird

Reviewed at: Chapter 603 Quarry

I enjoy it but now in much further in I find it harder and harder to relate to Ilea's choices. She's trying to be "good" or what and a bunch of chapters repeat her stances over and over but I find them hollow.

The overarcing story is really interesting. With lots of mystery and fights and more fights.

!!!Spoilers!!!

So now at Chapter 602, her current fuck buddy I guess is an elf, the thing is elves eat humans.... He even eats a human leg in this chapter?! And she's fine with it???

Ilea goes on and on and on about how humanity is fucked and humanity is bad yada yada over and over again. Yet she tries to be a good person yet her morals are all over the place.

She has like a set of codes she follows I guess?

So if you do slaver or rape or torture as a human she will always kill and give you no choice most of the time to change, it mostly dependes on her mood.

She befriends Elves! Elves which caused trauma to her in the first 100 chapters I think and made her join the Shadow hand?? Elves that destroy human cities and eat men, women and children. Sure the elves she befriends might've been fine but they all say they eat humans and even enjoys eating children cause they taste better! Her current fuck buddy even eats a human in my most recently read chapter WTF?!

 

Then she wants to help the elves defeat the Taleen? Which now wars with the elves, which is currently with all knowledge and knowledge she has is keeping the elves in check and not making them destroy humanity. Why? She even points out what if the elves turn their entire attention to humanity after the Taleen machines are destroyed what then?? Humanity is fucked then.

 

Then she befriends a demon in an earlier chapter which she allows to eat humans but only bad once though. At least that demon seems more civilised than the elves.

 

I just find it so weird that Ilea is getting more and more disconnected with humanity and keep saying that she hates interacting with humans. Yet she has no issue being friends with human eating Monsters.

And wtf about the golden lily plot? The revenge for eve? Now she's buddies with them?? Joining their club. She even befriends a mass murdering pirate for a couple of chapters before she stops having a fun time with him because he went a tiny bit to far and killed a few prisoners which Ilea then admits she would have probably killed anyway.

Characters grow in the story but Ilea seems to not grow and atleast not much, and the way she grows in I find bad as she's getting more and more disconnected with humanity and turning into a monster.

 

I just hope that in the future Ilea finds her human side again and fuck offs from the Elves and other bad characters, atleast she has made a few other friends of races that aren't bad to humanity.