An NPC's Path: The Dead Rogue by Pavel Kornev

by boblak

Original HIATUS Sci-fi LitRPG Male Lead Martial Arts Non-Human lead Strong Lead

Virtual worlds are places of boundless freedom. Anyone can become an elven mage or an invisible rogue, join a clan and go on raids, fight, develop their characters and most importantly, escape from the daily grind.

However, a game is only a game if you can quit. This is something I learned the hard way. I just wanted to let off some steam in virtual reality and ended up getting murdered and imprisoned in the body of one of the undead—slow, clumsy and cursed to die at the hand of other players over and over again.

The only way out of this awful predicament was to find the legendary Scroll of Rebirth, but the helpless plague-ridden corpse would need to be turned into a real killing machine. If only people knew what it was like to level up a dead rogue...

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TheDarkMist
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The Style needs some work and story is not the best sometimes the characters are mostly interesting.

The grammar is at a spot the average reader won't be able to spot too many mistakes it's mostly good.

 

Saphyron
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will do a proper review later. When this story has had a good bunch of chapters.

endoria
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Another pseudo litRPG story with a RL plot

I started reading this book on Kindle Unlimited two days ago and decided to leave a review here after stumbling upon it.

The game world is very poorly flshed out, ability/class/game mechanics are not explained, how items work and damage is calculated seems more random than balanced. MC Is a complete moron who does not think about his actions in advance and just stumbles through one lucky encounter after another and after a while his success is 100% reliant on other people or the OP items he finds. 

And through all of that he keeps whining about the dumb ass reallife plot nobody except the MC actually cares about. (That the plot itself is not logical at all is another thing entirely)

 

I was hoping for an actual rogue story about a stealthy character doing stealthy things, combined with some undead humor.... sadly it was not to be.