Mind Reading Isn't Cheating

by Thundamoo

Original HIATUS Adventure Fantasy Psychological Female Lead Gender Bender Magic Multiple Lead Characters Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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Mind Reading Isn't Cheating is a story about a young girl's journey across the continent of Telemera, fighting monsters and nations in a desperate attempt to leave places a little better off than she finds them.  A story about doing the right thing for the wrong reasons, and whether it’s better to judge someone by their intentions, their actions, or not at all.  ...If that’s even possible.

The main character also starts the story dead.  It’s okay, she gets better.

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Mantarayce
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Mind reading isn't cheating, but it sure is fun

A story about someone who should know everything going on around them, but still managed to find surprise and meaning full connections is always a great one. But that's just the start. This story has drawn me in entirely and I look forward to reading the continuing adventures of Shara and her friend's as they travel across Telemera.

SealedSaint
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Delightful, Deep Characters; New World; Fast-Paced

The writer has commited to posting a new chapter at least weekly, and I eagerly look forward to each one.

Character creation is definitely one of the writer's strengths! Every chapter I learn something new about the characters, and they are always interacting in new and interesting ways.

Overall the story is very well-written. The writer is diligent with details and the writing is read smoothly and easily.

The plot of the story is engaging: enough is going on and enough is left for future mysteries to be unraveled.

SpiralBaka
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Title: Mind Reading Isn't Cheating

Genre: Action, Fantasy.
Protagonist: a girl who can read mind. she is also a strong combatant. around C or B rank in strength.
Setting: a normal fantasy world.
Tension Level: Medium

Basic Premise: a girl's village was destroyed, but she was saved by some guy, and he brought her to be raised in another place by another family. that guy isn't the main character btw, he rarely appears.

Chapter Content: still about how that incident happened, how she cope with it, and how she ended up growing in that place.

Chapter Reached: 9
Personal Opinion: it's good. it's normal, it's normal good. I don't know how it's good. I just think it's good.

salynma
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Good if you prefer dialogue

Characters are likeable and the action moves fairly quickly, though scenes are often bogged down by flowery language and asides. The strongest part of the writing is the dialogue, which flows quickly and naturally and is often humorous. Because of this I found myself skimming over joining paragraphs and only paying attention to the dialogue. If you like dialogue-driven stories this is a good fit for you, but be prepared to do some skimming! Readers who prefer a lot of world building will probably be disappointed, as this is kept to the bare essentials.