Legend of the Empyrean Blacksmith

by beddedOtaku

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy High Fantasy LitRPG Male Lead Martial Arts Strong Lead Supernatural Xianxia
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LEGEND OF THE EMPYREAN BLACKSMITH

After being kicked out of the orphanage due to turning 15, Lino finds himself stranded on the streets. With motivation to become the best blacksmith in the world, he seeks to become a disciple of the Bridge Village's best blacksmiths, only to be kicked out of all of them. He soon finds himself roaming the streets aimlessly on an empty stomach, jobless, peniless and homeless. After hiding himself in an alley when night fell, the reality finally catches up to him - he was truly alone.

Yet, morning come, he is greeted by a knee of an old man who, after beating him for sleeping in the old man's 'backyard', takes him in. Finally being given a helping hand, he clutches tightly onto it, becoming the old man's disciple and learning the ways of the crafting, naturally while flirting with the old man's wife in his free time.

Little did he know that this encounter would spark an adventure that would take him to the heights he never believed even existed, and would let him meet people he'd only read about in the books. It's a story of Lino - an orphaned child who would come to be known by many names, but only one that he'd ever truly accept: Empyrean Blacksmith.

 

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1 - Apprenticed ago
Chapter 2 - Foundation ago
Chapter 3 - Absorbing Knowledge ago
Chapter 4 - A Queer Bastard ago
Chapter 5 - Apparently a Cultivator ago
Chapter 6 - Primal Spirits ago
Chapter 7 - Umbra Mountain Range ago
Chapter 8 - A Bastard Demon ago
Chapter 9 - Hidden Powers ago
Chapter 10 - Shrewd Plans ago
Chapter 11 - One of Their Own ago
Chapter 12 - Devil's Domain ago
Chapter 13 - Endo Clan ago
Chapter 14 - In the Belly of the Beast ago
Chapter 15 - First Evolution ago
Chapter 16 - Death's Shadow ago
Chapter 17 - Bitter Struggle ago
Chapter 18 - Tide of Darkness ago
Chapter 19 - Flames of the Cold Cave ago
Chapter 20 - Fury of Shame ago
Chapter 21 - City of Mercenaries ago
Chapter 22 - Friends in Strange Places ago
Chapter 23 - Radiant Dragon Spear ago
Chapter 24 - Future Plans ago
Chapter 25 - Back Home ago
Chapter 26 - Yesteryear ago
Chapter 27 - The Missing Element ago
Chapter 28 - To See One's Heart ago
Chapter 29 - Hell's Ways ago
Chapter 30 - Cooperation ago
Chapter 31 - Q'vil's Last Stand (I) ago
Chapter 32 - Q'vil's Last Stand (II) ago
Chapter 33 - Q'vil's Last Stand (III) ago
-Quick announcement- ago
Chapter 34 - Onward to Capital ago
Chapter 35 - Umbra Capital ago
Chapter 36 - Beyond the Veil ago
Chapter 37 - Beyond Tomorrow ago
Chapter 38 - Alison ago
Chapter 39 - Fate's Twine ago
Chapter 40 - Competition ago
Chapter 41 - Barren Luster ago
Chapter 42 - A Compromise ago
Chapter 43 - The Spanning Blaze ago
Chapter 44 - Before the Dawn ago
Chapter 45 - In the Darkest Hour ago
Chapter 46 - Hearts of Pain ago
Chapter 47 - Until Dawn (I) ago
Chapter 48 - Until Dawn (II) ago
Chapter 49 - Until Dawn (III) ago
Chapter 50 - Until Dawn (IV) ago
Chapter 51 - Yesteryear (II) ago
Chapter 52 - Journey's Rest ago
Chapter 53 - The Distant Home ago
Chapter 54 - Besmirched Hearts ago
Chapter 55 - Qe'll Remembers ago
Chapter 56 - The Fabled Fjords ago
Chapter 57 - Asmodei ago
Chapter 58 - The Fall ago
Chapter 59 - Wings of an Archangel ago
Chapter 60 - Friend in the Forest ago
Chapter 61 - Necropolis ago
Chapter 62 - The Worst Sort of Pain ago
Chapter 63 - Abandoned Child ago
Chapter 64 - World Ender ago
Chapter 65 - Ashen Fate ago
Chapter 66 - The After-Song ago
Chapter 67 - Alison (II) ago
Chapter 68 - Passing of the Torch ago
Chapter 69 - Setting the Stage ago
Chapter 70 - The Gathering of Fools ago
Chapter 71 - Flying Visitor ago
Chapter 72 - Velin Su ago
Chapter 73 - Skydevil Basin ago
Chapter 74 - Twin Shadows ago
Chapter 75 - Rude Awakening ago
Chapter 76 - Journey Ahead ago
Chapter 77 - Valley of Sects ago
Chapter 78 - Grens City ago
Chapter 79 - Major Ava ago
Chapter 80 - Stirring the Valley ago
Chapter 81 - Days before the Auction ago
Chapter 82 - When Things Go Great ago
Chapter 83 - When Things Go Awry ago
Chapter 84 - Mythic Realm ago
Chapter 85 - Friend From the Other Side ago
Chapter 86 - Fourth Gate Opens ago
Chapter 87 - Ashen Emperor ago
Chapter 88 - World of Gaia ago
Chapter 89 - Skydevil Linger ago
Chapter 90 - Sealing Heavens ago
Chapter 91 - Hell on Earth ago
Chapter 92 - Heart of the Broken ago
Chapter 93 - Budding Fury ago
Chapter 94 - The Coming ago
Chapter 95 - Wrath of an Empyrean (I) ago
Chapter 96 - Wrath of an Empyrean (II) ago
Chapter 97 - Wrath of an Empyrean (III) ago
Chapter 98 - Wrath of an Empyrean (IV) ago
Chapter 99 - Yesteryear (III) ago
Chapter 100 - End of an Era ago
Chapter 101 - Beggar and His Dog ago
Chapter 102 - Exasperated Third Prince ago
Chapter 103 - -Become my Master!! ago
Chapter 104 - Storm Before the Apocalypse ago
Chapter 105 - Brewing Tensions ago
Chapter 106 - The Master's Woes ago
Chapter 107 - A World Beyond the Curtains ago
Chapter 108 - Inhibitions ago
Chapter 109 - Siege of the Throne (I) ago
Chapter 110 - Siege of the Throne (II) ago
Chapter 111 - Siege of the Throne (III) ago
Chapter 112 - Siege of the Throne (IV) ago
Chapter 113 - The First and Final Breaths ago
Chapter 114 - Demonic Battlefield ago
Chapter 115 - The Forgotten Kingdom ago
Chapter 116 - Choiceless World ago
Chapter 117 - Shade ago
Chapter 118 - An Empress and a Beggar ago
Chapter 119 - Conviction ago
Chapter 120 - Rebirth ago
Chapter 121 - Winding Journey ago
Chapter 122 - Hired ago
Chapter 123 - Unintended Invitation ago
Chapter 124 - Sea of Sand ago
Chapter 125 - Ruins of the Forgotten Kingdom ago
Chapter 126 - Grazynth, Guardian of the Far End (I) ago
Chapter 127 - Grazynth, Guardian of the Far End (II) ago
Chapter 128 - Grazynth, Guardian of the Far End (III) ago
Chapter 129 - Exploring the Ruins ago
Chapter 130 - Lessons and Treasures ago
Chapter 131 - Twists of Life ago
Chapter 132 - Blueprints Aplenty ago
Chapter 133 - Terrifying Experts ago
Chapter 134 - Meeting at the Crossroad ago
Chapter 135 - Old Friends ago
Chapter 136 - Woven Threads of the Forgotten Tale ago
Chapter 137 - Convergence ago
Chapter 138 - Home ago
Chapter 139 - Reunion ago
Chapter 140 - Clash of Giants (I) ago
Chapter 141 - Clash of Giants (II) ago
Chapter 142 - Clash of the Giants (III) ago
Chapter 143 - Clash of the Titans (IV) ago
Chapter 144 - Clash of Giants (V) ago
Chapter 145 - Woken From Slumber ago
Chapter 146 - Parts and Pieces ago
Chapter 147 - Threads of Thoughts ago
Chapter 148 - Yesteryear (IV) ago
Chapter 149 - Great Descent ago
Chapter 150 - Farewell ago
Chapter 151 - Alison (III) ago
Chapter 152 - Oddballs ago
Chapter 153 - Kvalend Tribe ago
Chapter 154 - Love at First Sight ago
Chapter 155 - Northern Frost ago
Chapter 156 - A Silent Night ago
Chapter 157 - Ancestral Grounds ago
Chapter 158 - To Answer the Call ago
Chapter 159 - Armed and Proud ago
Chapter 160 - Chaos and Ruin (I) ago
Chapter 161 - Chaos and Ruin (II) ago
Chapter 162 - Chaos and Ruin (III) ago
Chapter 163 - Generosity ago
Chapter 164 - Grim ago
Chapter 165 - Crimson Sky ago
Chapter 166 - Winds of Change ago
Chapter 167 - As the Heavens Roll Onward ago
Chapter 168 - An Endless Odyssey ago
Chapter 169 - A Fate's Fool ago
Chapter 170 - The Ends and the Beginnings ago
Chapter 171 - Crossing the Wedge ago
Chapter 172 - The Grand Halls ago
Chapter 173 - Hellenguard Smithy ago
Chapter 174 - Heaven Piercer ago
Chapter 175 - Change of Plans ago
Chapter 176 - Cut From the Same Cloth ago
Chapter 177 - Yesteryear (V) ago
Chapter 178 - Seventy-Two ago
Chapter 179 - Peace Offering ago
Chapter 180 - Readiness ago
Chapter 181 - The Royals ago
Chapter 182 - The Holy City ago
Chapter 183 - Hammer of the Heart ago
Chapter 184 - Crafting Spree ago
Chapter 185 - The Divine Armory ago
Chapter 186 - Mind of the War ago
Chapter 187 - Sixty-Eight ago
Chapter 188 - Hell and Hell ago
Chapter 189 - War of the Madmen (I) ago
Chapter 190 - War of the Madmen (II) ago
Chapter 191 - War of the Madmen (III) ago
Chapter 192 - War of the Madmen (IV) ago
Chapter 193 - War of the Madmen (V) ago
Chapter 194 - War of the Madmen (VI) ago
Chapter 195 - Shaking Hands With a Devil ago
Chapter 196 - Heaven-Cast Armor Set (I) ago
Chapter 197 - Heaven-Cast Armor Set (II) ago
Chapter 198 - Ortum Lucis ago
Chapter 199 - Collapsing Skies ago
Chapter 200 - An Elysian and an Empyrean ago
Chapter 201 - Yesteryear (VI) ago
Chapter 202 - Aftermath ago
Chapter 203 - In a Cabin 'neath a Tree (I) ago
Chapter 204 - In the Dark (I) ago
Chapter 205 - In a Cabin 'neath a Tree (II) ago
Chapter 206 - In the Dark (II) ago
Chapter 207 - In a Cabin 'neath a Tree (III) ago
Chapter 208 - In the Dark (III) ago
Chapter 209 - In a Cabin 'neath a Tree (IV) ago
Chapter 210 - In the Dark (IV) ago
Chapter 211 - Primal Awakening ago
Chapter 212 - Capacity for Evil ago
Chapter 213 - For the Future ago
Chapter 214 - From All Skies ago
Chapter 215 - World on Fire ago
Chapter 216 - From Ashes ago
Chapter 217 - Nature of Chaos ago
Chapter 218 - Birth of an Exalted (I) ago
Chapter 219 - Birth of an Exalted (II) ago
Chapter 220 - Heavenly Aptitude ago
Chapter 221 - The Naive Ones ago
Chapter 222 - Into the Titan Realms ago
Chapter 223 - New World ago
Chapter 224 - Into the Fray ago
Chapter 225 - Daughter of Order ago
Chapter 226 - Alison (IV) ago
Chapter 227 - Young Hearts ago
Chapter 228 - One ago
Chapter 229 - Imperishable Guardian ago
Chapter 230 - Eternal Paradise ago
Chapter 231 - Holy Grounds ago
Chapter 232 - The Former Holy Maiden ago
Chapter 233 - The Affairs ago
Chapter 234 - Trials of Ascension ago
Chapter 235 - Harbinger of Chaos (I) ago
Chapter 236 - Harbinger of Chaos (II) ago
Chapter 237 - Harbinger of Chaos (III) ago
Chapter 238 - Harbinger of Chaos (IV) ago
Chapter 239 - Harbinger of Chaos (V) ago
Chapter 240 - Down the Line ago
Chapter 241 - Rewards ago
Chapter 242 - Gateway of Entropy (I) ago
Chapter 243 - Gateway of Entropy (II) ago
Chapter 244 - Gateway of Entropy (III) ago
Chapter 245 - Strengths and Weaknesses ago
Chapter 246 - Order of Eternity ago
Chapter 247 - Forever ago
Chapter 248 - Unceasing Light ago
Chapter 249 - The Last Titan ago
Chapter 250 - Rise and Fall ago
Chapter 251 - The Forgotten Tale (I) ago
Chapter 252 - The Forgotten Tale (II) ago
Chapter 253 - The Forgotten Tale (III) ago
Chapter 254 - The Forgotten Tale (IV) ago
Chapter 255 - Realities ago
Chapter 256 - Immortal Sword Maiden ago
Chapter 257 - History of the Sword ago
Chapter 258 - The Disillusioned Light ago
Chapter 259 - Hannah (I) ago
Chapter 260 - Powers That Be ago
Chapter 261 - Lady of Inclemency ago
Chapter 262 - Hundred Years Vow ago
Chapter 263 - World's First Anomaly ago
Chapter 264 - Laws of Nature ago
Chapter 265 - Yes ago
Chapter 266 - Back to the Roots ago
Chapter 267 - Abyss of Madness ago
Chapter 268 - World on its Knees ago
Chapter 269 - United ago
Chapter 270 - Myriad of Hearts ago
Chapter 271 - World Over ago
Chapter 272 - Distress Call ago
Chapter 273 - Sanctuary (I) ago
Chapter 274 - Sanctuary (II) ago
Chapter 275 - Sanctuary (III) ago
Chapter 276 - Hannah (II) ago
Chapter 277 - Mediator ago
Chapter 278 - Entropic Resurrection ago
Chapter 279 - Soundless Pyre ago
Chapter 280 - Onslaught of Changes ago
Chapter 281 - Gauntlet of Absolution ago
Chapter 282 - Beyond Expectations ago
Chapter 283 - Shadows of Entropy ago
Chapter 284 - The Hunt Begins ago
Chapter 285 - Converging Goals ago
Chapter 286 - The Hunted ago
Chapter 287 - Serendipity ago
Chapter 288 - Vicious Tongue ago
Chapter 289 - Birth of the Order ago
Chapter 290 - Catharsis (I) ago
Chapter 291 - Catharsis (II) ago
Chapter 292 - Catharsis (III) ago
Chapter 293 - Catharsis (IV) ago
Chapter 294 - Catharsis (V) ago
Chapter 295 - Catharsis (VI) ago
Chapter 296 - Catharsis (VII) ago
Chapter 297 - Reign of Chaos (I) ago
Chapter 298 - Reign of Chaos (II) ago
Chapter 299 - Reign of Chaos (III) ago
Chapter 300 - The Eternal Watcher ago
Chapter 301 - Before it All Began (I) ago
Chapter 302 - Before it All Began (II) ago
Chapter 303 - Before it All Began (III) ago
Chapter 304 - Northern Fjords ago
Chapter 305 - Inside the Pocket ago
Chapter 306 - Only Spoken of in Myths ago
Chapter 307 - Flying Fortress ago
Chapter 308 - Land of Dragons ago
Chapter 309 - Dragon Aspects ago
Chapter 310 - Light and Shadow ago
Chapter 311 - Elysian ago
Chapter 312 - Times of Magic ago
Chapter 313 - Law of Death ago
Chapter 314 - If the World Knew ago
Chapter 315 - Fire and Fury ago
Chapter 316 - A Year Later ago
Chapter 317 - Plight of the Holy Continent ago
Chapter 318 - Birth of the Empyrean Blacksmith (I) ago
Chapter 319 - Birth of the Empyrean Blacksmith (II) ago
Chapter 320 - Fire and Fury (II) ago
Chapter 321 - Fire and Fury (III) ago
Chapter 322 - Fire and Fury (IV) ago
Chapter 323 - Fire and Fury (V) ago
Chapter 324 - Continental Terror ago
Chapter 325 - The Owner and the Pet ago
Chapter 326 - Gods ago
Chapter 327 - Penumbra ago
Chapter 328 - Jade ago
Chapter 329 - Triage ago
Chapter 330 - Tales Converge ago
Chapter 331 - Return Home ago
Chapter 332 - Poise of the Empyrean ago
Chapter 333 - Vestiges of Time and Chaos ago
Chapter 334 - Fathers and Sons ago
Chapter 335 - Fight Without Fighting ago
Chapter 336 - The Bend of Time ago
Chapter 337 - The Holy Holm ago
Chapter 338 - Gaze of the Thousand Eyes ago
Chapter 339 - Lucky Stars ago
Chapter 340 - Full Circle ago
Chapter 341 - To Change the World ago
Chapter 342 - The Founding Seven ago
Chapter 343 - Ghost of the Distant Past ago
Chapter 344 - Lost Shadow ago
Chapter 345 - Fire (I) ago
Chapter 346 - Fire (II) ago
Chapter 347 - Fire (III) ago
Chapter 348 - Fire (IV) ago
Chapter 349 - Fire (V) ago
Chapter 350 - Fire (VI) ago
Chapter 351 - Hannah (III) ago
Chapter 352 - Theory of Everything ago
Chapter 353 - Liberation ago
Chapter 354 - Cosmos ago
Chapter 355 - Bastion of Knowledge ago
Chapter 356 - Void Cult ago
Chapter 357 - Shifting Tales ago
Chapter 358 - To Tame Time ago
Chapter 359 - Beckoned Back Together ago
Chapter 360 - A New Beginning ago
Chapter 361 - Expedition to the Palace ago
Chapter 362 - Prison Break (I) ago
Chapter 363 - Divine Smith (I) ago
Chapter 364 - Prison Break (II) ago
Chapter 365 - Divine Smith (II) ago
Chapter 366 - Prison Break (III) ago
Chapter 367 - Divine Smith (III) ago
Chapter 368 - Prison Break (IV) ago
Chapter 369 - Divine Smith (IV) ago
Chapter 370 - Prison Break (V) ago
Chapter 371 - Divine Smith (V) ago
Chapter 372 - Prison Break (VI) ago
Chapter 373 - Divine Smith (VI) ago
Chapter 374 - Hallowed Fury ago
Chapter 375 - The Cast of Dawn ago
Chapter 376 - Unbound Dreams ago
Chapter 377 - Always and Forever ago
Chapter 378 - Law of Entropy ago
Chapter 379 - Reasons and Tales ago
Chapter 380 - Bloodlines ago
Chapter 381 - Genes ago
Chapter 382 - Changes ago
Chapter 383 - In the Belly of the Foe ago
Chapter 384 - Meeting in Heaven ago
Chapter 385 - Inevitable ago
Chapter 386 - Cradled World ago
Chapter 387 - Scent of the Void ago
Chapter 388 - Alliances ago
Chapter 389 - Face to Face ago
Chapter 390 - Heart Over Prejudice ago
Chapter 391 - Everafter ago
Chapter 392 - Age of Empyrean (I) ago
Chapter 393 - Age of Empyrean (II) ago
Chapter 394 - Age of Empyrean (III) ago
Chapter 395 - Age of Empyrean (IV) ago
Chapter 396 - Age of Empyrean (V) ago
Chapter 397 - Age of Empyrean (VI) ago
Chapter 398 - Age of Empyrean (VII) ago
Chapter 399 - Age of Empyrean (VIII) ago
Chapter 400 - Age of Empyrean (IX) ago
Chapter 401 - Provenance ago
Chapter 402 - The Limits ago
Chapter 403 - Settled Roads ago
Chapter 404 - The Strange Prince ago
Chapter 405 - Heart of it All ago
Chapter 406 - Uncertainties ago
Chapter 407 - The Council of Chaos ago
Chapter 408 - Quiet Before the Storm ago
Chapter 409 - Dangwe ago
Chapter 410 - The Tempests of Heaven ago
Chapter 411 - Chaos of Void (I) ago
Chapter 412 - Chaos of Void (II) ago
Chapter 413 - Chaos of Void (III) ago
Chapter 414 - A Mortal Reminder ago
Chapter 415 - For Tomorrow ago
Chapter 416 - Place of Belonging ago
Chapter 417 - The Turning Wheels ago
Chapter 418 - Seafarer ago
Chapter 419 - Against the World (I) ago
Chapter 420 - Against the World (II) ago
Chapter 421 - Against the World (III) ago
Chapter 422 - Against the World (IV) ago
Chapter 423 - Overcoming (I) ago
Chapter 424 - Overcoming (II) ago
Chapter 425 - The Quiddity of Elan ago
Chapter 426 - Enigmatic Attack ago
Chapter 427 - Theory of the Craft (I) ago
Chapter 428 - Theory of the Craft (II) ago
Chapter 429 - Theory of the Craft (III) ago
Chapter 430 - Edge of Immortality (I) ago
Chapter 431 - Edge of Immortality (II) ago
Chapter 432 - Edge of Immortality (III) ago
Chapter 433 - Confoundment of the Newcomer ago
Chapter 434 - Edge of the East ago
Chapter 435 - Cruelty of the Scorned ago
Chapter 436 - Aaria ago
Chapter 437 - The Hollow Isles ago
Chapter 438 - The Prince Forgotten ago
Chapter 439 - Beyond the Differences ago
Chapter 440 - Curse of the Dragon Isles ago
Chapter 441 - Becoming of Chaos ago
Chapter 442 - Vastitude of Truths ago
Chapter 443 - Overwhelming ago
Chapter 444 - Origin War (I) ago
Chapter 445 - Origin War (II) ago
Chapter 446 - Origin War (III) ago
Chapter 447 - Origin War (IV) ago
Chapter 448 - Origin War (V) ago
Chapter 449 - Scars ago
Chapter 450 - The Last War ago
Chapter 451 - Nine Years (I) ago
Chapter 452 - Nine Years (II) ago
Chapter 453 - Nine Years (III) ago
Chapter 454 - Nine Years (IV) ago
Chapter 455 - Nine Years (V) ago
Chapter 456 - Nine Years (VI) ago
Chapter 457 - Nine Years (VII) ago
Chapter 458 - Nine Years (VIII) ago
Chapter 459 - Nine Years (IX) ago
Chapter 460 - Dawn of Grace ago
Chapter 461 - World Anew ago
Chapter 462 - Two Ends ago
Chapter 463 - The Western Front ago
Chapter 464 - Beyond the Line ago
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TheRealSlimShady
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This book could of been amazing. If the writer didn't randomly make the MC go from being 17 to looking like a 40 year old.. Half the fun of the book was because he looked like a kid. Not only that why is he aging so fast? i thought cultivators aged slowly? what ever it is it ruined the whole tone of the book i gave up as soon as he turned into a 40 year old. 

Quantum qwazi
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Yep characters complete one note garbage mc psychotic garbage perfectly happy slaughtering little girls and any on who happens to be in reach and world building Generic af though mostly nonexistent any one who rates this book two star is outside their mind this is undiluted garbage

CLE9595
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I don't understand the hate

If it was only my opinion I would give it 4.5 star but people putting 0.5 star force me to put 5 star
The MC is out of the norm, but the world isn't. So that doesn't get out of the way of the novel story ( he got rejected a lot before being lucky enough to get accepted )
the MC doesn't seem to want to insult whoever he sees to fight more, the MC wants to be the strongest blacksmith, not the strongest warrior ( for the 20 chapters I've read )
the only thing I could enjoy is a side character like a rival ( but not opponent ) or a strong friend who is especially good on something MC isn't ( By example a friend that specializes in strategy or whatever )

Nicholas The Daoist
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I have been binge reading this book for a week now and I can say this novel is great. The novel has comedic moments and serious moments but I can say through these that it is very good.

ILeaveAReviewWhenIDropIt
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The story is good. I recommend it.

The Hero/MC is headstrong, not stupid, sentimental and optimistic. Have specific goal to accomplish. Have mature World building and alive characters.

But the plot is too complicated in its execution (for me). In 60 chapters, the contents about the grand plot have more word count than it should be (and lots of it is incomprehensible, bits and pieces of the past and future), lowering the immersion to the current arc.

Why do you need to say things cryptically? Many of the lines is don't even make sense. Just being mysterious will not make readers like the story.

Dropping this. Maybe read it again later.

Detrox
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I love the humor and the story is pretty decent aswell.

tormanen
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mc is a shameless bastard and I like it that way.

A bit brutal of an mc kinda a shameless piece of shit with a weird sense of humor. If you can't stand him in the first 10 chaps you gave it the good old RR try and should leave. I stuck around and the world came together I can't call it a slow burn but the world comes together slower than some other stories here in a good way imo. 

I wont call this story a hit or miss but the sense of humor doesn't go away. The writing gets better even if the story doesn't really change tone from the serious whatcha believe in with a bit of cringy shameless bastardry and funny on top. 

ThatchyPlayer16
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Blacksmithing Godly Warrior

I really love how this story combines both blacksmithing (a somewhat normal job) with being a bad ass warrior that fights off the world. Lino the mc is an awesome character, he doesnt give a shit about what anyone else thinks and does things his way. His sarcasm and ability to be a constant asshole to everyone around him makes his character stand out from the others. 

Overall the story and the characters just blend perfectly and make the world feel truly alive. 

My only negative for this novel is the sizing of things, like for example and 90 mile long dragon on an island is slightly ridiculous but other than that i really recomend this story if you are looking for something new. 

Another positive is the authors constant upload schedule, basically uploading everyday and with quite large chapters.

9/10 from me :)

 

demonicdie
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The mc has brain pit

its good story if u can stand the MC manner.
he treat his Master like servant

Jknott
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I like the concept. But the grammer is just awful. Im sorry unfollowing.