Wraith Eminence-an evil dungeon core

Wraith Eminence-an evil dungeon core

by JoshuaWiebelhaus

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What is evil?

The destruction of life? The sacrifice of the many for the good of the one? The manipulation of others in persuit of your own goals? Many consider that to be evil others call it being a dungeon. Wraith is a dungeon who specializes in dark mana and undead creations, like all dungeons he wants to be the best at what he does and compete with the other dungeons around him inbetween baiting adventures by kidnapping the blacksmiths daughter, poisoning the town well, blackmailing the mayor all in the deliberate effort to bring adventures to his dungeon to kill them take a part of ther soul and all the mana in their body as well as their treasure. Is he evil, definetly, more evil than most dungeons, undeniably.

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51 Chapters
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue ago
Chapter One: What's in a name? ago
Book One, Chapter Two: First Conquest ago
Chapter 3: Aggressive Takeover ago
Chapter 4: Soul Net ago
Chapter 5: Mind-blade ago
Chapter Six: Kobold Assault ago
Chapter 7: What Do You Mean We Can’t Just Kill Them All? ago
Chapter Eight: Playing with Magic ago
Chapter Nine: Contest ago
Chapter Ten: The Inner Circle ago
Chapter Eleven: Marith ago
Chapter Twelve: The World Below ago
Chapter Thirteen: Under City ago
Chapter Fourteen: Rogue Dungeon ago
Chapter Fifteen: Exploration ago
Chapter Sixteen: Dragon Hoard ago
Chapter Seventeen: The Black Lion Inn ago
Chapter Eighteen: The Thunderous Five ago
Chapter Nineteen: Tenebri Terra ago
Chapter Twenty: Repent Sinners! The End is Near! ago
Chapter Twenty-One: Autumn Conclave ago
Chapter Twenty-Two: A Tale of Two Brothers ago
Chapter Twenty-Three: Threats & Deals ago
Chapter Twenty-Four: Blood and Darkness ago
Epilogue, Book One ago
Book Two-Chapter One: Desolation ago
Book Two-Chapter Two: A Living Core ago
Book Two-Chapter Three: The Dead-Lands ago
Book Two-Chapter Four: Adventurer ago
Book Two-Chapter Five: Siege in the Badlands ago
Book Two- Chapter Six: The Desert of the Djinn ago
Book Two- Chapter Seven: Crossing Trails ago
Book Two- Chapter Eight: The Tower of Fear ago
Book Two- Chapter Nine: The Capital of the Nommen Empire ago
Book Two- Chapter Ten: Fire & Brimstone ago
Book Two- Chapter Eleven: Spirits of the Past ago
Book Two- Chapter Twelve: Faceless ago
Book Two- Chapter Thirteen: Prisoner of the Forest ago
Book Two- Chapter Fourteen: Ajax the Invincible ago
Book Two- Chapter Fifteen: Hounding ago
Book Two- Chapter Sixteen: Furry Point ago
Book Two- Chapter Seventeen: Imprisoned ago
Book Two- Chapter Eighteen: Scout ago
Book Two- Chapter Nineteen: Voice in the Darkness ago
Book Two- Chapter Twenty: The Song of Lightening on the Hill ago
Book Two- Chapter Twenty-One: Natural Evils ago
Book Two- Chapter Twenty-Two: Suffering ago
Book Two Chapter Twenty-Three: The Howler ago
Book Two Chapter Twenty-Four: Homecoming ago
Book Two Chapter Twenty-Five: Mark Upon the World ago

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Diarmuid's Shadow
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I love dungeon storys but a lot of themhave a "good" main character, so it's refreshing to read about one that isn't afraid to be chaotic. The story is fantastic and you get a new perspective on dungeons. There are some grammar problems but they are easy to look past and enjoy the story for what it is.

Mighty Moushie
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So I only read three chapters before I felt I had to review it. The story is interesting, the characters have potential. It could be a great new dungeon story. But.

The grammar is an issue. The first paragraph repeatedly uses "adventures" instead of "adventurers." It doesn't get much better in the three chapters I read. I personally don't mind a few grammatical and spelling errors here and there, but the number of errors per chapter just killed the story for me. Which is sad, because I really want to read more. 

With editing, this could be a top story on this site. Without it, I have to give it an overall score of 3.5 stars. 

Sandsforever
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B2 ch22( read it even on haitus)

Some spelling grammer errors 

But the story is good if you have time to kill and you enjoy reading murdery dungeon fun then read it

CaptainLoser
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So  I’m not super good with the writin word but I did note that some times theiyr’re are words that just don’t fit but other than that it’s super   I only started reading it because my other stories are posting to slow but I’m glad that I did lots of fun 

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Ascendant
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could be pretty good i  await its development