Leaving Earth

by Warfox

Original ONGOING Adventure Drama Psychological Sci-fi Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead Strong Lead Virtual Reality

After Dr. Hawthorne Crenshaw's university experiences a terrorist attack, he undertakes a titanic effort to colonize a new planet in an effort to rescue some small part of humanity from what he suspects is an unstoppable spiral into a Dark Age on Earth. Subjecting himself to tens of thousands of years of repeated cycles of cryogenic freezing and unfreezing to monitor his passengers, he and his AI T.I.A. shephard Earth's first, and perhaps only effort into colonizing a new planet.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue: Parting Message ago
Chapter 1: Good Night ago
Chapter 2: Thursday, March 19, 2099, Day One ago
Chapter 3: Friday, March 20, 2099, Day Two ago
Chapter 4: Saturday, March 21, 2099, Day Three ago
Chapter 5: Sunday, March 22, 2099, Day Four ago
Chapter 6: Cycle 2, Wednesday March 23, 2133 ago
Chapter 7: Cycle 2, A Message for Earth ago
Chapter 8: Cycle 2, Silence is a Message All its Own ago
Chapter 9: Cycle 2, Unintended Consequences ago
Chapter 10: Cycle 2, Three Paths ago
Chapter 11: Cycle 3, Tragedy and Comedy ago
Chapter 12: Cycle 3, Planning and Review ago
Chapter 13: Cycle 3, Working it All Out ago
Chapter 14: Cycle 4, Mount Ararat ago
Chapter 15: Cycle 4, Settling in for the Long Haul ago
Chapter 16: Cycle 12, Breakthrough ago
Chapter 17: Cycle 12, Reaching Out ago
Chapter 18: Cycle 12, Ships Passing in the Night ago
Chapter 19: Cycle 12.5, Life Marches On ago
Chapter 20: Cycle 13, Working Against Time ago
Chapter 21: Cycle 13.5, Sacrifices ago
Chapter 22: Cycle 13.5, Crossing Paths ago
Chapter 23: Cycle 14, Coming Together ago
Chapter 24: Cycle 14, What We Can and Can’t Do ago
Chapter 25: Cycle 14.5, Enemy Territory ago
Chapter 26, Cycle 14.5, Escape ago
Chapter 27, Cycle 14.5, War ago
Chapter 28, Cycle 15, Alone Again ago
Chapter 29, Cycle 16, With Millennia Ahead ago
Chapter 30: Cycle 30, Time is Relative ago
Chapter 31: Cycle 42, Terrible Teen ago
Chapter 32: Cycle 61, Men at Work ago
Chapter 33: Cycle 62, Guilt ago
Non-chapter, Discord update! ago
Chapter 34: Cycle 77, Phoenix Rising ago
Chapter 35: Cycle 86, Happy Birthday ago
Chapter 36: Cycle 155, Building a Human ago
Chapter 37: Cycle 200, Steel Skin, Electric Blood ago
Chapter 38: Cycle 250, Read-Only Memories ago
Chapter 39: Cycle 500, Plans and Results ago
Chapter 40: Cycle 500, The Shower ago
Chapter 41: Cycle 500, Drops in the Bucket ago
Chapter 42: Cycle 1043 Priorities ago
Chapter 43: Cycle 1472, Hearts ago
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Ozhika
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A story about a not so unlikely future.

Leaving Earth is the original story of a man who, after surviving a terrorist attack, begins to see that humanity is on course to be the cause of its own destruction. With this knowledge in hand, the only course of action action is to leave Earth. Leaving Earth is told through the perspective of an emotionally broken man who, despite his disillusion with humanity, realizes that the success of his mission may be the last chance for the survival of the human race. Maybe life itself.

 

Leaving Earth is not a generic science fiction story, and it is not fantasy disguised as science fiction. It is less Star Wars, or even Star Trek, and more 2001 or the Martian. I would place it in the genera of hard science fiction. But, unlike some works in that genera, the author doesn’t attempt to impress the reader with his knowledge of esoteric mathematical equations or concepts unfamiliar to the layman. The story takes current and plausible near future technologies and uses them in a realistic way. Furthermore, the author leverages the use of these technologies to smoothly introduce a very possible and grim future that the reader may live to witness. The authors reflection on this possible future, the future that spawned the terrorist attack that sent the protagonist on his voyage, are a commentary on many of the social, political, and economic issues of today, and are a sharp warning of the extreme results those problems may produce if left unchecked.

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As the title says, this is pretty much The Fountainhead in space. I’m a sucker for hard sci-fi, so I forged through quite a few chapters, hoping to get past the politics and on with the story, but it never happened.

 

Basically, if you like Ayn Rand, you’ll probably like this. It’s well written, and hews closely to her formulas. If you prefer Alistair Reynolds, you may want to give this one a pass. 

nightreader17
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Thought-provoking and Refreshing

Leaving Earth is a very thought-provoking and refreshing read compared to most other fictions on this site. In brief, it is a story of a scientist/programmer and a developing AI and their millenia-long journey to a neighboring star system as shepherds of the future of humanity, after earth is nearly wiped out by a nuclear winter. 

The best parts of this story is that it does not rely on technical jargon to sound impressive, as many sci-fi fics do. This is a read for people who enjoy the psychological aspect; thinking processes, brief philosophical thoughts, imaginings of a 'worse-case' scenario of current eco/poli/social trends in society. In particular, the focus on how an AI realistically develops its consciousness based on current technology is unique and compelling to read. 

The downsides; it is rather slow paced. If you are looking for action-packed adventure, look elsewhere (or maybe watch Star Wars again). After 200+ pages, we are still only ~150 years of a journey that will take 100,000 years. I suspect some time-jumps will take place, or the story will take a different route altogether, but if you are impatient and want just quick gratification then this may not be the story for you. 

Now, some criticism for the author (note, spoilers). 

Spoiler: Spoiler

Overall, it is a very refreshing and interesting read. If you're bored with all the lit-rpg or reincarnation or dungeon or cultivation fics on this site, I highly recommend you give this story a try.  

LilWubWub
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A story different from the rest

I have absolutely loved this story so far! There isn’t nearly as much action as other stories found on this site, but I believe that truly sets this apart! The characters feel life-like, with interactions that flow as natural as they could. The story also brings up subjects to consider when reading, which serve to captivate and stimulate the reader! The style of the author makes this an easy read, even if the concepts behind them are subjects that are hard to grasp! I highly recommend this story to anyone looking for something different than anything else on this website! 

Xplizit_Fluffy
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Please continue writing! I love the idea of the story when it comes to Dr. Hawthorn and T.I.A the A.I becoming companions on the trip to a new world.

Robertp3001
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A suprisingly well written story

I didn't really think much of reading this story because I typically like to read fantasy type novels but this story is just too good to pass up.  It's a story that doesn't require alot of emotional investement because there are really only two characters you have to care about in the story.

If you are bored, I would recommend giving this story a read.

Demiurge
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A very promising story

I've just finished chapter 14 and I have to say that your story is very promising. While it may seem slow moving, what with wanting to see more of what will happen during the colonization, this story is in fact quite realistic in some ways and doesn't seem rushed. I feel as if you have put a lot of thought into this and I hope to be able to read your work until such a time as it is deemed completed. Good work ! :)

RobotSamurai
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 Its been a really good story so far. It's one of the best Sci-fi stories on this site.

Glasses
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this is great. Well thought out story, realistic characters, and a writing style that keeps it interesting. High quality scifi, in that the subject matter is thought out, the science realistic-ish, and the etting real and believable. Like you’d expect from Michael Crichton or Andy Weir.

The only flaw for me is the grammar. The author can’t seem to get the tenses right. It’s future tense one minute, then past, then present.

Apart from that minor error, 11/10. Keep up the good work. I’d buy this if it were published, edited, and I had money.

Myriad
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Great & thought provoking Sci-fi

I've never been huge into sci-fi, here and there a book do catch my attention... this is one of them.

As of chapter 21, I don't have a lot of bads thing to say about it. The world building and storytelling are great. The interaction between the characters is one of the main driving force of the story.

The author seems to take his time to flesh out the world and his characters. It's nice to not be rushed and feel like the world and its people are actually alive. 

The main grip I can have with this would be the beginning of the story and how it is setup. There seems to be many exaggeration and surrealist events. But the author explains them well enough and they are used as foundation to build characters and the world, so it dampens the effect. 
Some people seem to really have a mental block at that part, i'm not too sure why. The author seems to show how fragile all of us and all we built really are. Even how insignificant we are in the face of time and our own nature. Some stretch to the story will be needed to get somes of the points across.

I especially liked how self-fulfilling prophecy seems to be what drives the first few chapters and we get to ask ourselves a lot of questions and think about the how and if.

To conclude, I think the story early on could of been fleshed out better to make it more "real". But let's be honest, to create what the author is, you need to use your imagination and postulate on so many things... I must praise him for how well he's done so far. I have high expectation for this story and I rate it accordingly.