
Gabriel "The Bastard Son"
by Mads1289
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Gabriel is a young boy with very unique appearence and thus he is subjected to a lot of bullying,His only desire is for the days to pass so he can escape to his room.His days are quite normal except the fact that he suffers at the hands of other kids,that was the case untill his encounter with Kevin,a scientist with a dramatic backround and a will for revenge.Gabriel finds out that he is not a normal human and Kevin explains to him that various paranormal creatures roam the world,creatures from tales and myths are responsible for the most evil of crimes and Gabriel will use his powers alongside Kevin to bring justice to this so called "normal world".In his quest Gabriel will come across a lot of historic and mythical characters/beings that will help or oppose him...
Author's Note-
Gabriel's story is a very long one,the novel will go on for a long time,more and more chapters will be released that are going to explain the main plot of the story.The story will unfold slowly and the major parts will come soon enough.If you like the story,please rate and if your main issue is the bad writting,I apologize,I will try to improve as I go along.English isn't my mother language and I am taking lessons at the moment.Please be patient with me.
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Had potential but was written poorly...
I’ve only read up to chapter 5, but I just don’t want to read anymore already. The overall plot I can get with; its just that it’s executed badly. The story doesn’t flow at all and the characters feel like robots. It already seems like the plot is being forced and the characters actions are already very questionable (not common sense).
The story could have had potential, but it was just written badly.