Immortal Shards(hiatus)

by BookDragon

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Magic Martial Arts Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

In the boundless multiverse, all possibilities, no matter how remote, exist somewhere. Universes are born, or are created, and die, or do not. In the vast Myriad Heavens Cosmos, a reality far away from our own, a mysterious energy called Mana provides the basis for both physical techniques and magical techniques, and interweaves and is part of all matter, all spirits, and all energy. Mana is the lifeblood of the world, and those who channel and cultivate its power are called cultivators, for they strive to grow along the myriad paths of power and enlightenment. There are many such paths, known as Dao, but they all feature Shards!


When a being, man, beast, or otherwise, gains a large enough Mana sea in their body, a crystal core, known as a shard,containing the essence of their power, the ideals and emotions that motivate them, and the essence of their soul will form. A beast which cultivates to the level of forming a shard is called a Magical Beast. A human or other being that does is known as a Mystic.


A shard may be a Mage Shard, allowing one to use mana to attack with the elements and produce fantastical, reality bending spells. A shard may also be a Warrior shard, channeling elemental and mana power into one’s physical form, shaped into projectiles, or various other uses; or it can be a Immortal Shard, with the abilities of a Warrior and Mage shard both, and others besides. Anyone who forms an Immortal Shard has the potential to shock the vast planes of reality! In the eternal struggle between the living, who will gain advantage, and for how long? Who will live and who will die? Who will protect and guide the commoners, and fight rogue Mystics and Beasts? Into this world, a child with a potential beyond his wildest imaginations is born. But on the journey of cultivation, there are no guarantees! Will he reach his fated glory, or will he die an ignoble death? This is the story of Alexander Grandstar, and even the gods may not know where it goes!

Current release schedule is 1 chapter a week, on whatever day I decide to place it (usually Saturday or Sunday)



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I'm on the latest chapter right now, and I really like this novel because of two reasons.

1) The three main characters. You've probably seen a lot of humans and dragons main characters/ or just regular human and dragons characters, but how often do you see monkey characters? Not often, I would imagine. The main characters I've seen so far seen to have their own unique personality. One is hardworking and the other is lively and enthusiastic.

2) The magic and the cultivation. I really like magic and cultivation novels. But most novels only have one type. So I was thrilled when I saw this novel. Also the author explained everything very well. Most novels don't explain the different mechanisms in their book. Like for example, a demon king. They don't expand on where he comes from, or why he's attacking. They just say that he is. But this story doesn't do that. He explains it clearly.

Overall, this book is a good read, and it has lots of potential.