Champion is playing

by littleme

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy LitRPG Magic Strategy Supernatural Virtual Reality

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A simple man, lacking in knowledge, but quick of wit. He is flung into the future, where everything is different. Now, he has to make a name for himself, carve his own path in life. He decides to play a game, the biggest one in the world. A strategy game, focused on tactics, used to select the top managers of the largest international corporation. Now, he has to prove his mettle and earn a place for himself in the future...

Watch as he enters the competition, chooses his class, creates an army, and shows everyone in this new world the spirit of a player from the 2010s. Will he be the champion in the end?

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SomeAverageGuy
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Endless dumb luck - Really like it

This story is not some kind of deep epic. It's bubblegum wish fulfillment. But it's done in a new way I haven't seen with hundreds of other similar stories under my belt and it's very good at what it is. Definitely better than most of the stuff on this site. If you're still considering reading, I'll point out that it has the following traits:

-Doing the stupidest thing possible every single time that somehow keeps winning

-Empire building

-A nice coverage of events through multiple perspectives

-Growth of skills/abilities/allies/acquired races

-Might have a bit of a harem in the future

-Armchair/post-battle deeper strategic thinking of what occurred

-Surprise approaches to winning a lot of typical fantasy situations

-LitRPG-lite. No tables. Leveling and abilities aren't a goal, but rather plot devices at the perfect moment to get him over the hump.

If you like the first 4 or 5 chapters you'll like the rest of the story. It's more of the same, just keeps snowballing bigger and bigger. Seems like frequent chapters too. (Good job author / thank you.)

Avatar Moonwalker
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Hilarious is the best word for this fiction

It’s a wonderful story that makes you smile. An interesting plot with curious main hero and a big number of good secondary characters. Samantha is really funny, I do like her.

To conclude, I laughed my head off, reading it, and now in anticipation for the next chapters.

Caleb Steeper
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Good story, rough English.

I really like this story. Different and fun, I'll definitely keep on reading. 

The one downside to this story is that there are times where the English is so bad that I can't really tell what is happening. I'm sure the author will improve though and look forward to the rest of their story.

jackbaddy
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It is a LitRPG novel with an element of a comedy, it made me smile a couple of times, and it is a big advantage. Actions took place in a game similar to the heroes of might and magic. It is a nice idea. I loved this game and spent a great number of hours playing it in my childhood.
The story is a good one; I liked it. There is an interesting plot with funny twists, lucky main hero; honestly, I enjoyed reading the first chapters.
The author is doing a good job.
I'm rooting for MC and want to see the true spirit of player from 2010s.

toolazytobreathe
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The MC rolled the dice and his character got 99.9 luck on 100 .  At least it is true till Chapter 5.1. Some think of him as genius but the truth is this guy just plays rpg with god tier luck stat. 

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The only thing i don't like is that the chapters are so short.

LightCrawler
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This story is a mix of an old French comedy, a favorite game from childhood, and just a manual of psychology.

It's really funny and hilarious. A couple of times a week, I have a dinner break in a cafe next to my work, and when I read this story, there is always a smile on my face. In some magical way, it always lifts my mood for the rest of the day.

 

jellyjiggler
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Interesting premise foiled by poor writing

An interesting premise but poorly executed. Syntax seems subject to constant change, and the story itself can be nonsensical and difficult to follow. The majority of the characters are completely forgettable and the MC seems to only have achieved what he has through endless deus ex machina. If it was supposed do be comedic, it certainly wasn't very funny.

Paul Kite
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Book does a great work of laying the groundwork for the series.

It is a fun read and a great example of LitRPG, complete with stats/skills. Furthermore it manages to include these without interrupting the flow of the story.

memahalo
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Good, but still growing

I'll try to keep it spoiler free. Also, I suck at reviewing and understanding all the finer details of writing. Lastly, I am by no means another writer, and am just a scrub giving his opinion. Also, writing this after finishing 3.6

The story so far has been pretty good. The premise is interesting, but slightly unexplained. The characters personalities are there but I feel that they need to be built up a little better. Maybe something to make them feel more real? Maybe give them more of a motive individually? I don't know. Just, occasionally they feel a little shallow. The worldbuilding is still going on (I think), or at least I hope so. The MC's background, story, and surroundings are rather unexplained. Lastly, some sentences in the first few chapters are very confusing, mostly word choice and sometimes the sentence structure. I don't known if it is because english is the first language, or the chapter isn't read through at least once after they'e written.

Sorry, if I couldn't highlight the positive things more becuase I REALLY like the story so far, I just don't really know how to say it. Just trying my best to give some constructive criticism.

sugouxxx
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I'm Serious. There's nothing i understand little bit from this stories. From your characters, or worldbuilding, and the stories. Nothing is clear to my head.

 

Or maybe i'm just being bias.

Your character is literally cardboard. His personality is just literally take and put it. just that, no deep meaning, and make reader curious who is he ? Other characters is just fodder for making your character looks glorious and blink blink.

I even wonder, where the he living ? Locker Room. Since i don't see that in your stories.

In Addition your scale and enviroment character pretty small

Another is background. The system ? Okay, for stories with system "gamer", Again i don't get it. What the purpose of stats, what the effect. What factor to recruit and increase your Armies. I read from the beginning until you last chapter then it's nothing. I don't know and can't follow how much your stats until now. UNLESS, you want to use deus ex machina.

 

The Stories, i don't have anyword. it's just like ready player one with overlord but

 

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