After I Lost to the Demon King

After I Lost to the Demon King

by FullxTilt

A beleaguered adventurer enters a bar in the dead of night. By the next morning, he’s become a public menace as the new town drunk. But what circumstances led him to give up his sword for the drink? And what’s with that ominous title on the cover of this book?

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I wrote this for the January Resolution Contest on RRL and figured I may as well upload it to the site as well.

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Nefarious
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It was a fun lil story. I can't really point out any glaring flaws other than that with the story itself, although that is an unfair complaint considering this is a short story which has to be economical with its words. 

Anyway, I hope that you will write a longer piece sometime later as it was fun reading this :)

idanallmighty
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Read this short story, worth every minute! I got more satisfaction in this half an hour then from some finished books here. 

Its a simple story that give you so much more then you would expect, both in characters development and emotions. If it was longer i would read it all night. Give it a shot.