Astralis Lumen [Permanent Hiatus]

Astralis Lumen [Permanent Hiatus]

by SlowAsLightning

Fiona Skylar is a gamer like her brother Isaac. The difference is, he's much better and more serious. In a world where playing the game The World Beyond is akin to playing in a major league sport, Fiona finds herself attending somewhere she hadn't planned to go.

Out merely for the cathartic demolishing of her brother's friend in a school where aspiring professional gamers get their start, perhaps she should consider taking her gaming seriously.

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SlowAsLightning's first fiction. Enjoy.

*Now on permanent hiatus due to lack of interest.*

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