Adventure Online

Adventure Online

by Wand148

Welcome! To Adventure Online! Where dreams come true! Where adventures begin! Meet Micheal, a poor boy with a special heart condition. With no family and barely any friends, follow him as he tries to save himself from death, retrieves plenty of fortune, and becomes popular in the process! Prepare for action, prepare for adventure!




(Hi guys! This is my first story so I would really really REALLY appreciate it if you would give me a few pointers and help me improve. I was also inspired by many other stories like Ark, LMS, and Life in New World so don't be suprised to find a few similarities. So please critique my work and Enjoy ;))
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MOAAAR!!! I'll give 5 stars so please write more More MOAR!!!

Interesting premise with an actual reason/goal for the main character to work hard in VRMMO.
Hoping and looking forward to seeing the writer take this to the next level.