Abandon all hope by Darkmatter

Abandon all hope by Darkmatter

by darkmatter

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Tragedy
Aleg, the second prince of the Slavon Kingdom, experienced bullying since an early age.
The betrayal of his loved ones made him fall into the darkest pits of hell. Cursing his fate and swearing to get revenge for everything, he had endured, and returning it a hundred fold.

This is not a story about legends being born, but the story of the Awakening of a Devil.

Strong language and mature content
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G4merSylver
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A few mispellld words here&there but nothing really bad, A bit of luck and this'll reach the top weekly or monthly stories!

aqswdefr
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Try it!! It is worth it

Good story, easy to read it's not so dark as it seems in the description.

BTW great job on choosing/using those lines from the "Devine Comedy" as to underline his one way ticket to hell.

Also well written.

Sorry if some sentences sounds a bit awkward, "unfortunately" english is not my first language.