Cultivation Queen

Cultivation Queen

by Panda-Chan

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

As the night passed slowly in this dark country you would find danger at every turn. However, in this particular alley, it had a special sort of silence radiating from it. 

Almost as though the sound was being sucked away. 

*BANG*

Only now does the unraveling time reach the end of its trail.

This person which time will soon forget doesn't stop with a gasp nor does the life drain from her eyes like any other person ended by a gun.

This woman was ripped from her flesh and sent along the soul stream early. 

 

Hello, again RoyalRoad!

I'm alive-ish and I am currently working on redoing my first novel. I am sort of out of sorts right now but if you have any suggestions go right ahead and voice them. I'm not one to shy away from free tips. :D

 

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