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He have average face yet he was the most beatiful and handsome in the world.

He look like a mortal with no trace of energy around him or any connection with the heaven and earth yet he was the strongest.

He have a frail body yet it was unmoved like the mountain.

All of his casual deed turned into something divine or devil!.


AUTHOR NOTE: THE CHAPTER WILL BE SPORADIC AND SHORT. THE COVER WAS NOT MINE AND IF THE OWNER WANT ME TO TAKE IT DOWN JUST COMMENT. ALSO THIS STORY WILL BE LIKE EMPEROR DOMINATION BUT DIFFERENT.

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THE PRIME DRAGON THAT EAT THE GOD

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First of all. This is MY opinion, I won't force it on you.

Second. Why did this story got those stars. Because concept is very good. Performanse is shitty. It would be very good if it would have better grammar.

Third. I only give it half of the star in character score, because as of the moment I read it, there's no character development at all.

Conclusion. I liked it, but I can't stand grammar as of now.

P.s. Author. I wish you a good time improving yourself and making up for some flaws. Even if you don't try to do it.

P.s.s If you want me to change my opinion PM me when this novel has a good, developed plot, characters, grammar.

I am sorry, if you don't like something in MY opinion.(Not really, so long as it doesn't make sense to me.)