Tyrants and Heroes - The Hollow Triumvirate

Tyrants and Heroes - The Hollow Triumvirate

by V A Scherholz Dias

It has been 130 since the elf Tyrant Teldarion, the Collector, has been defeated by the minotaur hero Gaareul, supported by an army that consisted mainly of humans, orcs, dwarves, gnomes and minotaurs. While the continent enjoys a measure of peace and prosperity, some of the wounds suffered in that war never closed.

Destiny once again converges on a small group of people whose actions will shake the world. While some leave their homes, seeking adventure and growth, others wallow in the tragedy of their lives and become a conduit through which the world could be cracked open.

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Chapter Name Release Date
I - The Destined - 1 - The Wanderer that Seeks to Better Himself – Alexius Magnar (human) ago
I - The Destined - 2 – The Companion Who Wishes to Be Together – Helena Gracie (human) ago
I - The Destined - 3 – The Dissatisfied Craftsman Warrior – Kardenon Therynia (dwarf) ago
I - The Destined - 4 – The Bored Scholar – Massen Garesade (gnome) ago
I - The Destined - 5 – The Repentant Assassin that Seeks Forgiveness – Arlendir Coriema (elf) ago
I - The Destined - 6 – The Heretic Mother – Tire'lun (ogre) ago
I - The Destined - 7 – The Exile's Apprentice – Kara'khana (ogre) ago
I - The Destined - 8 – The Seeker of Identity – Joseph Orcgram (orc) ago
I - The Destined - 9 - The Hollow Sage - Nameless (tengu) ago
I - The Destined - 10 – The Hollow General – Bereul (minotaur) ago
I - The Destined - 11 – The Hollow Mother part 1 – Aurelya (dragonkin) ago
I - The Destined - 12 – The Hollow Mother part 2 – Aurelya (dragonkin) ago
I - The Destined - 13 – The Bitter King of Forgotten Valor – Amargoss Kharanyla (dwarf) ago
II - The Beginning - 1 - Helena Gracie ago
II - The Beginning - 2 - Alexius Magnar ago
II - The Beginning - 3 - Alexius Magnar ago
II - The Beginning - 4 - Helena Gracie ago
II - The Beginning - 5 - Helena Gracie ago
II - The Beginning - 6 - Kardenon Therynia ago
II - The Beginning - 7 - Kardenon Therynia ago
III - The Eternal Testing Grounds - 1 Kardenon Therynia ago
III - The Eternal Testing Grounds - 2 - Alexius Magnar ago
III - The Eternal Testing Grounds - 3 - Alexius Magnar ago
III - The Eternal Testing Grounds - 4 - Helena Gracie ago
III - The Eternal Testing Grounds - 5 - Helena Gracie ago
III - The Eternal Testing Grounds - 6 - Kardenon Therynia ago
III - The Eternal Testing Grounds - 7 - Helena Gracie ago
III - The Eternal Testing Grounds - 8 - Alexius Magnar ago
Intermission 1 - Amargoss Kharanyla ago
IV - After the Dungeon - 1 - Helena Gracie ago
IV - After the Dungeon - 2 - Kardenon Therynia ago
IV - After the Dungeon - 3 - Alexius Magnar ago
IV - After the Dungeon - 4 - Alexius Magnar ago
IV - After the Dungeon - 5 - Kardenon Therynia ago
IV - After the Dungeon - 6 - Kardenon Therynia ago
Intermission 2 - Aurelya ago
V - Trouble in Ravensguard - 1 Alexius Magnar ago
V - Trouble in Ravensguard - 2 Arlendir Coriema ago
V - Trouble in Ravensguard - 3 - Helena Gracie ago
V - Trouble in Ravensguard - 4 - Alexius Magnar ago
V - Trouble in Ravensguard - 5 - Kardenon Therynia ago
V - Trouble in Ravensguard - 6 - Arlendir Coriema ago
V - Trouble in Ravensguard - 7 - Alexius Magnar ago
V - Trouble in Ravensguard - 8 - Alexius Magnar ago
V - Trouble in Ravensguard - 9 - Helena Gracie ago
Intermission 3 - Joseph Orcgram ago
VI - Crossing into Nemiria - 1 - Kardenon Therynia ago
VI - Crossing into Nemiria - 2 - Alexius Magnar ago
VI - Crossing into Nemiria - 3 - Alexius Magnar ago
VI - Crossing into Nemiria - 4 - Kardenon Therynia ago
VI - Crossing into Nemiria - 5 - Alexius Magnar ago
VI - Crossing into Nemiria - 6 - Kardenon Therynia ago
VI - Crossing into Nemiria - 7 - Helena Gracie ago
Intermission 4 - Nameless ago
VII - The City of Toragan - 1 - Kardenon Therynia ago
VII - The City of Toragan - 2 - Alexius Magnar ago
VII - The City of Toragan - 3 - Massen Garesade ago
VII - The City of Toragan - 4 - Helena Gracie ago
VII - The City of Toragan - 5 - Alexius Magnar ago
VII - The City of Toragan - 6 - Kardenon Therynia ago
VII - The City of Toragan - 7 - Helena Gracie ago
VII - The City of Toragan - 8 - Alexius Magnar ago
VII - The City of Toragan - 9 - Massen Garesade ago
Intermission 5 - Kara'khana ago
VIII – Greshe Khaaran Rising – 1 – Amargoss Kharanyla ago
VIII – Greshe Khaaran Rising – 2 – Aurelya ago
VIII – Greshe Khaaran Rising – 3 – Nameless ago
VIII – Greshe Khaaran Rising – 4 – Bereul ago
Intermission 6 - Arlendir Coriema ago
IX - The Siege of Tarkatore - 1 - Kardenon Therynia ago
IX - The Siege of Tarkatore - 2 - Alexius Magnar ago
IX - The Siege of Tarkatore - 3 - Massen Garesade ago
IX - The Siege of Tarkatore - 4 - Alexius Magnar ago
IX - The Siege of Tarkatore - 5 - Helena Gracie ago

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acederequiza
Overall

Good technical writing with some weaknesses.

I will give you a proper review once I am done with reading all the chapters.

However, I could sum up a few things reading yours.

Your technical writing is very good.

You explained well.

You POV was alright. I could see you are trying to play multiple roles at one time but don't get confused later on.

But I don't understand your storyline. 50 pages in and was still at prologue. That what I felt anyway. Perhaps your story could be a slow burner and all. 

Honestly, the first few chapters are the hook that keep the reader enticed to your story. Too many viewpoints at the start put us off a little. Skipping through your latest chapter, it seemed that you had progressed but again with different POV. Perhaps that is your style. Who am I to say otherwise, right?

If you want some multiple POV who then managed to form a party, I recommend TSR novels. But instead of short chapters, each characters had their own books prior of their meetings.

NeoMare
Overall

A really enjoyable tale if you have the patience to go through the first chapters without anything remarkable happening. However, it is very well written