The Best Man In Another World

The Best Man In Another World

by Royalist

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A man named "Kolsten" grew up in a poor family with no father, a sick mother, and siblings, when he grew up he started to do part-time jobs and as he got old he became a CEO of a company that he used to work for, he was already a kind, gentle and a great man but when he got money on his hands he didn't spend it on useless things such as cars, paintings. He simply used the money he gained for charity and again as he got old he became one of the richest men and now he was the biggest donator for charity in the whole world but he was on his deathbed, counting his last days but a tragedy was about to struck, an edited phone call made him look like a psychopath and everyone believed it, he died alone and hated but then God offered him a deal. 

It was a simple deal he had to go to another world and he was going to gain another wish right from God and he used that wish to remove his bad emotions such as anger, jealousy but there were some emotions that worked in both ways such as guilt and he asked the god to heavily lower them but this was his greatest mistake because "Love" was one of those emotions.

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