Ethereal Sovereign

by Zephon

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Drama Fantasy Romance Tragedy Martial Arts Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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Currently on temporary hiatus----

Lyrim Hytio, a boy who lives in a world of Talisman, uses a suit of armor that magically infuses itself into the body of its wielder. He had always wanted one since he was young and now that dream had been fulfilled. Although such things seem happy, Lyrim's father had been exiled on grounds of being a traitor. His father started a rebellion for a noble cause only to be routed by one of his own family members. Lyrim's older brother betrayed him, only to take control of the Hytio clan his father once led. Join lyrim in his goal to gain more power and inflict vengeance upon his brother.
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Elodin
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Really like the story.  Feel like the plot progresses faster than SR which I like.  Wish there were faster releases.

DkDax
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totally underestimated this story

Your other story sounds good but it also sounds way too serious, I'll probably get around to reading it but I'm sure I'll still like this one way better =)

Piwoot
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Love it more than Coiling Dragon :D

I love it more than spectral. Even though he is so powerful, there is still an interesting story. 

Storywalker
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The pinnacles perspective

What I truly appreciate about this work is that it gives the reader you a perspective of the top. In a xianxia based  world that is really rare. One of my favorite scenes of all time time is when Beirut pulls out his sovereign artifact and annihilates Adkins. I have always wished for many of my mc’s (Linley especially) to able to become one of those badasses at the top. It provides a sense of security for myself that they can endure whatever is being thrown at them because I can empathize with the mc’s. I always fear for the character that are insecure of the position like xian ni. I enjoy reading xian ni, but I’m constantly worried that the main character will not possess enough power to stop another tragedy. In the end the character is endlessly striving for power, which warps his personality to an extremely scary level. Then he cuts off most of his possible relationships with others. Hopefully without that need to gain a ridiculous amount of power the Lyrim change focus on relationships with other and not forget about the little people that he surpasses.

The only problem and this may be a perspective issue is that i feel that the main characters maturity is a bit ambiguous. He feels similar to his childhood personality still rash and barely able to control his anger. He is not thinking large decision through, which could possibly be his greatest weakness. Maybe you should keep it like that to shake thing ups. However, maturity is being able to overcome or confront those demons.

lorenzo86
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Since I begined reading I couldn't stop till the end .. sniff I want more , thanks you rock!

isidonis
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I love this FF. After I started to read it I couldn’t stop until the last chapter. I almost failed a exam because of this FF. It just so cool. Story, MC. I’m getting from this exploration themes with traveling to another worlds and such like from stargate/star trek series. It captivated me completely. I just don’t see just why you dear author said this isn’t best of your work… Well, I like it and many ppl do too, so I hope you will keep providing to us next chapters of this ff. 

 

PS. The only thing I don’t get it is why this ff have “romance” tag, because I don’t see any(Lyrim doesn’t care about love/romance now after getting HUGE power up).  ;]

Dingy Pat
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I like where to story can be heading many possibilities that can happen to make this story a wonderful read.

elbonnyjunior
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kinda feels like a deja vu

i love the series, theres no prob whit it, but i have the feeling i seen that pic before, is it an anime?,.........please someone tell me

Figgy
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I hope you continue it .

Pls come back to this ff if posible or just close it if not. I cant wait anymore for more.

lolred
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only my view i liked the story hope it will be back up but don't wand spectrel to take the hit cause of it either well lets see what happens