Ethereal Sovereign

by Zephon

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Drama Fantasy Romance Tragedy Martial Arts Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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Currently on temporary hiatus----

Lyrim Hytio, a boy who lives in a world of Talisman, uses a suit of armor that magically infuses itself into the body of its wielder. He had always wanted one since he was young and now that dream had been fulfilled. Although such things seem happy, Lyrim's father had been exiled on grounds of being a traitor. His father started a rebellion for a noble cause only to be routed by one of his own family members. Lyrim's older brother betrayed him, only to take control of the Hytio clan his father once led. Join lyrim in his goal to gain more power and inflict vengeance upon his brother.
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ShadowNox
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This is one of the best fiction anybody has written on this webpage. 

This story has everything good storyteller, action , great character development.

the story  is great 5/5

The style is great 5/5 

the grammar is one of bes 5/5

And finally the characters are awesome 5/5

I would give this story a higher rating if I could but I am unable to.

lordkinati
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The title says all. Both ES and SR are great with a vast world which is being explored very well.

blueDragon
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I don’t know wether his brother still alive or not, but the mc power progress is interesting, of course daily update will make this better… :v oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

hannes1991
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I like strong characters

I like to see how strong characters try to solve problems and am interested in their trains of thought. I'm very eager to know what a live Lyrim will lead and what problems he will face in the future. 

I can't decide between SR and ES I love the both.

DevilAsura
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Really nice Story ! Please continue ;)

Thanks for the chapters keep up the good work please! And have fun writing until the und of the story! ;)

Ichtelt
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 Hey i was a fan of SR and even tough the story is really different i love your story style keep up the good work

kabs
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I love sp, but this is much better

Story(spoilers)

Love how op he gets and the emotional bits are great, I especially like the training arcs, they are awesome

Style

Great, as always 

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Perfect most of the time 

Character 

They are incredibly well done

flipnCrazy559
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Freaking love powerful MC's who are powerful and know how to use their power properly.

FalleN
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Good work,but spectral regalia is a better work.If you ask me puting more chapter at spectral is better.

Arkage
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Good Pretext and Development

The banter between gods is hilarious. PR is good.

I read it all in one night (current chapter released: 22). This story managed to capture and hold my interest for a solid few hours.  When I realized I wasn't reading a full and complete book, I wanted to invent a Time Machine. I might reread it as well.....

The MC is OP yes, but we see how it occurs. I enjoy seeing the world from the gods perspective, and from the outside watching the MC's antics.

I apologize for the lack of structure but it is late and the night is old.

I am looking forward to more (obviously :))