Ethereal Sovereign

by Zephon

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Currently on temporary hiatus----

Lyrim Hytio, a boy who lives in a world of Talisman, uses a suit of armor that magically infuses itself into the body of its wielder. He had always wanted one since he was young and now that dream had been fulfilled. Although such things seem happy, Lyrim's father had been exiled on grounds of being a traitor. His father started a rebellion for a noble cause only to be routed by one of his own family members. Lyrim's older brother betrayed him, only to take control of the Hytio clan his father once led. Join lyrim in his goal to gain more power and inflict vengeance upon his brother.
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RazerFin
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I've got to say I like how this story is shaping up. As always Zephon's Background for this particular setting is great. The T.gears are unique and I am waiting to see what  Lyrim's abilities are once he gets his.  As far as characters go, from what I have seen so far its a little hard to take Lyrim completely seriously. This is still the beginning and I feel like you probably have something planned to break him out of his somewhat childishness.

 

I love spectral but at the same time I can see myself getting into this story as well.

 

Keep up the good work sir.. I like where this is going.

Sabotage
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He makes another good story yet again. 

Can't wait to see how it progresses. :p

gcman01
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One of the best stories on here

The character development is very good and the story is as original as it gets and is highly engaging. The only issue in my mind is that Lyrim’s power is progressing a little to fast for my taste but that is a very minor issue. Overall this story is one of my favorites and Zephon’s works always keep me entertained.

dune291
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A story that you can not miss

Great story , original, interesting with bright future .
For people who still have not read , give an oppurtunity you will not regret.

Thanks for the great work.
Keep going.

uno
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I really enjoy reading your other fiction, but this one is just as good! I might like this one better! Hahaha! I agree with you about having an OP MC can still be a great story. I can't wait to see the new characters you introduce (love interest?) and if he ever gets back. Please continue writing and keep up the great work!

Salt
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Ethereal sovereign is truly a work of Zephon. All these extremely good writers warn ff writers to not instantly make their characters op since this would leave the character no room to grow, and here’s zephon, defying all of this advice, starting the character at God level. Some hate it, but I find it refreshing. I hope that you continue this peice of literature.

GreyDragon0
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Just like your other fiction this one is unique in a lot of aspects. Currently with MC being OP I don't see where it can go. Will he participate in the tournament or try to find his way back. I still don't see why he wants to go back because they are all long dead. I still have many more questions, but so far you are are doing great!

ShadowGunzs
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10/10 Totally Worth of reading it.

I like how you make the MC pathetic then many stuff happend and he became op as hell. It'll make you visit it everyday to check if there is new chapter.  And if you think this is not worth of reading when you only read the early part , Give it another chance and read all of the chapter and you'll not regret it. Totally.  Derp :3

NormalReader
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Love this story and how the author involves with his community. I hope that the aurothor's fic soon reach the place they deserve which is top 5 rated fics. He has done regular updates unlike other fic's. Please keep updating regularly like always. I hope a day comes where this becomes an actual book, that would be amazing. 

Demonic
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love this hope it continues i give it 5 stars because i like it in my opinion and i recomend to others