Original HIATUS Action Comedy LitRPG Male Lead

Virtual is Reality.

What would the world be like if video game rules suddenly applied?

Marcus is about to find out. After a freak accident he finds himself stuck between a game and the real world. He’ll need to fight his way through football hooligans, carnies and the dreaded RNG to get to the final boss and save the world. Anything less means it’s game over for good.

Along the way he’ll learn new skills, chase epic loot and most importantly of all, Level Up!

If you love LitRPG you’ll be sure to enjoy this humourous take on the genre.

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Mikkel
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Early, but deserved.

Reviewing as of chapter 5. Honestly? Impeccable.

There were zero grammar mistakes, zero awkward sentences that don't quite flow, both of which being rather rare on this website. Fleshed out characters, in a believable setting. While the main bit of the story itself isn't the most original, it has a unique and interesting way of getting there, which I love.

 

Honestly, can't wait for more. If this has a regular release schedule it'll hit that popular this week section 100%.

Cdbocian
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A fun read. Highly recommended I enjoy this take on the RL rpg.  I am fine with not having to slog through status screens after ever level the MC gets.  I know there are people who enjoy comparing every staus screen and what the skill trees are but after reading so many litrpg's i am happy to not have that filler taking up space that can be used for the story.

Krimety
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I’ll admit that I wasn’t sure what to expect, but this is a fun story!

Interesting take on a LITRPG in RL story. 

I’m interested to see where this goes. 

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This was an interesting and fun spin on the standard lit-RPG novel.

The main character is someone most people can relate to without being a blank slate for people to protect themselves on to. Add in a mix of fun supporting roles and a good dash of humour and you have a good novel to spend an afternoon on.

The story is well written and paced such that there is never a real lull in the action, while still having time for the character development. It brings a wonderful mix of the normal and of the weird which if done poorly would only lead to a chaotic mess but in here, tempered by the humour, leads to an interesting world you just want to explore.

The only complaint I have is the same complaint I have with every good story I read, I wish there was more.

Thank you for a wonderful story and I am looking forward to more from you.

Kappa-sama
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Read it on Amazon, and while some of the paragraphs just felt weird reading, I gotta say it was an enjoyable experience. Decent grammar, actually fairly unique storyline/concept, etc etc, some of the flat characters actually fit in the story as flat, idk.

 

I rate it a solid 24 hamsters out of 30.

cmila
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Pick this up, thank me later

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

Fun, well done and fast paced! Even if it has only few chapters out don't worry and read this gem, you will thank me later 

Zedred
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Great, yet simple, Story!

I just want to say how funny was reading it to the end, when i clicked the first chapter, i was expecting another story of: guy gets a system and the chicks, but i must say that i was pleasantly suprised that it was not the case!

The story is interesting, it has a beginning and a end so it isn't like most stories here that you can't see what the end objective is. I haven't seen a single grammar mistake, althought that may be because english isn't my main lenguage.

My only issue was the character of carlos that almost never listened to the mc but that's just how he is.

All in all i loved this story and i hope it gets a sequel.

memahalo
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It's a short-medium length story with a well balanced, humorous story

druiseeker
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Amazing character development

It starts off really well and has a lot of potential to turn out well.  It has, as of ch 2, some of the best character/scenario development I've seen.  The MC's in a bad rut and its just starting to look like there might be a great potential future.  I'm hoping for more!  I want to see where this goes.