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Rob is an unremarkable young man.

Lonely, unmotivated and may very well be stuck in a dead-end job.

Nothing to look forward to but see his days repeat like any other, and he does not appear to take interest in anything besides frequenting a cafe, drinking and smoking.

There is a lack of rhythm and melody in this gent's life.

That is, until his coworker, Lisa begins to accompany him for coffee.

And perhaps the questionable dreams he begins to have.

And Elizabeth was in it.

A sad child, really.

Do not expect much.

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Charles Poomi

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