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The War is coming.

The 12 countries organize skirmishes against each other with unprecedented violence, every nation not dissimilar from a ravenous wolf waiting for the other to show a sliver of weakness. When the King of his own country is assassinated, a disobedient magician, Artyon, is forced to participate in the following civil war, joining many others in a race against time to set order in Bylmir before old enemies take advantage of the chaos.

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 There is only one chapter out so it's hard to leave an actual review, but I like it so far. Starting the story without a lot of immediate worldbuilding gives a bit of mystery and doesn't leave info dumps. The grammar is great, with the exception of one or two errors.

I can say that I like it for now and I'll update my review as it goes on.