There is no Epic Loot here, Only Puns.

by stewart92

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Female Lead LitRPG Magic

She became a dungeon core.

Everything pointed Delta to murdering her way to success. People were just mana farms, right?

No, that was wrong. Delta refused. Then everything became odd.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
1: Smashing Start ago
2: Take off! ago
3: Mushroom Farming ago
4: The Piggy in the Middle ago
5: The Human Touch ago
6: The Capped Limit ago
7: innocence and Gobs ago
8: What Wicked Web We Weave ago
9: Quissing the Dungeon ago
10: Hole in the Ground ago
11: Fishing for Compliments ago
12: The Nature of Give and Take ago
13: Hook, Line, Sinker ago
14: Conviction ago
15: Delta Ducks ago
16: Duck for Traps ago
17: Along Came A Spider ago
18: I am DEO! ago
19: DEO! and friends! ago
20: A Boary End ago
21: Flaws and Thorns ago
22: The Greenhouse Effect ago
23: Nature vs Nurture ago
24: Unruli ago
25: Slimers ago
26: Special ago
27: Levelling Down ago
28: Guilty Roots ago
29: The Jungle Room ago
30: A Gentleman ago
31: Japing about ago
32: Catch and Mist ago
33: The Curious Container ago
34: The Flower in a Pot ago
35: Rulis and Termis ago
36: Challenge Accepted ago
37: The Nuance of Dungeon Building ago
38: Big Showdown in little Dungeon ago
39: Lost in Translation ago
40: Seeing the Mushroom for the Forest ago
41: Busy Little Bee ago
42: The Little Things ago
43: Raleish the thought ago
44: Mime the Gap ago
Interlude: Cheesecake ago
45: Nu point of view ago
46: Ballad of the Great ago
47: Delta Does Danger ago
48: Equal-system ago
49: Witching Hour ago
50: Evolution of the First Floor ago
51: Happy Accidents ago
52: Griminology ago
Interlude: Crumbling Hearth ago
Artwork! ago
53: Devine Bobbing ago
54: Pic-Nic ago
Maestro ago
55: Heart of the Jungle ago
56: Birds, Mushrooms, and Taxes ago
57: The Musical Trap ago
58: Thorn in The Side ago
59: DEOLICIOUS ago
60: The Star of the Show ago
Map updates. ago
61: This Dungeon Belongs to Noland ago
Update ago
Interlude: Popping the Question ago
62: Holly Water ago
63: Wyin or lose ago
64: The Tree of 'Wisdom' ago
65: The Key to her Heart! ago
66: Tending the Moon ago
Side Story: The Village of Woodedly ago
67: Keys and Doors ago
68: World Wide Web ago
69: New Blood ago
70: Gather your Party ago
Floor maps udated! ago
Interlude: The King's Fortune ago
71: Truth Seeker ago
72: Inferno at the Grove ago
73: Lord of Mushrooms ago
Interlude: Spoiled for Choice ago
74: Blind Truth ago
75: Heart to Heart ago
76: Jungle Fever ago
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vladerag
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I could cry because I read faster than it is released!  Truly a fun read, even if the grammar is a bit rough in places, that is more than made up for by the pacifish dungeon core Delta and her growing band of odd creatures.

Havenwings12g
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This is a wonderful story. I've read some chapters to a nephew as a bed time story and now my brother's kid is nagging him for "more delta story". Keep up the bad puns.

hask225
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This is a fun, lighthearted take on a Dungeon Core story, the author has done a great job bringing to life some really fun and quirky characters.

I wholeheartedly hope that the author will continue to write this story because it has some incredible potential, and believe if they decide to publish it will be very well received as a book series (after some editing).

In regards to grammar and writing, it is well written and you seldomly find typos or mistakes.

Thank you for the amazing story author-san. Please keep writing!

Soufdeboef
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How sad.

I should've made this review when you were still at chapter 3. Now the chance is big you won't read this. But if you do. You've made something absolutely amazing and i wanted to thank you for it.

 

Imperial Lightning
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Best Dungeon story yet. For once the character acts according to a set of moral values which don't equate to Benefits > Everything and Anything Else. The character development is great and the people have more dimensions than most MCs of webnovels. Overall great with room to get even better with time. Dungeon(Delta) Story #1.😃

Sir Proper
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I could write a lot, but I am not being paid nor am I being graded, so allow me to be succinct. 
 
If not for the almost weird/ maddeningly out of place, jarring sentence errors I would give this perfect scores, not because it is truly perfect, but because of its cohesive narrative stuff. 
 
Characters have unique voice, motivation, depth, and emotional complexity. 
 
Setting has a great amount of depth, juxtaposition, scope, and weight. 
 
Story has meaningful progress, tension, emotional investment, and cohesion. 
 
Excellent work. My only criticism is edit/proofread your work better. 
 
My highest regards
Gratefully, 
Sir Proper
j03man
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A beautiful, fun, well written story that delivers on its promises in surprising and delightful ways.

The world building is unique and deep but is introduced through characters you know and love (or are at least interested in) in bite sized chunks. So you have a reason to care about the world beyond just the cool concepts the world contains and you never feel overwhelmed by details despite its depth.

ronrironin
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It is a fun read and things are looking like they are heating up. Can't say I agree with the total pacifism the MC has going - leading me to roll my eyes more than once - but it is different. In a saturated genre filled with too much of the same, Puns manages to bring some fresh ideas to the bunch.

mystic_musique
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Best dungeon story out there

Stories about dungeon cores are a dime in a dozen. But this is definitely the best I've read. Delta, the dungeon core, is adorable and horribly punny, and just so nice, she is a welcome breather from the blood-thirsty dungeon cores that are so common. Another thing that makes this story so special are the side characters, from Delta's UI Nu to the citizens of the nearby town. Each of them is so in-depth and interesting, they're not really side characters anymore. Also: maps! Dungeon maps! (Please author, we need more!)

 

P.S. for people who like this: Check out The Dungeon Calls for a Sage, it is somewhat similar and shows promise, altough (sadly) atm it has fewer chapters out there.

Svarog
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Great story but not for me

TLDR: Very fun story if you are looking for light and funny reading. Not really worth it if you are into more "serious" stories. 

 WARNING: I tried to be as general as possible not to have any spoilers.

Let me be very blunt. I didn't like the story. It is not really my type of the narrative and even after reading 60 chapters I was struggling to keep myself engaged. But at the same time, I truly believe that this is an excellent story that fully deserves the praise that it gets. It is just not my cup of tea I guess. But let me elaborate:

 

I think the story title describes it perfectly. If you are here for an epic adventure full of heroic acts, intrigues and complex machinations - you are on the wrong webpage. This is a tale about people. A charming narrative that explores character interactions and is one of those refreshing slice-of-life tales, that leaves you smiling after every chapter. It is funny, it is fairly unique and the story at times gets quite complex and engaging. All of the characters are well developed and as story progresses we learn more and more about them in very organic way. At the same time for people like me, who read the stories for the thrill of challenge, wanting to experience main characters doing badass things in a badass ways, or alternatively enjoy joining MCs as they struggle for the survival in the cruel and unforgiving world, this story is not really for you. Characters do face struggles here, but the struggles they face are more personal rather than external. And the overall tone drifts much closer to the "friendship is magic" narrative, rather than fantastic realism that personally I prefer in my tales.

 

In the end I have nothing but compliments for author. I find it honestly unfortunate that I won’t be able to accompany you till the end of this fantastic story, but even though I can appreciate the quality of the tale, I can’t really relate with it. I wish author the best and see you all around on the RoyalRoad.