There is no Epic Loot here, Only Puns.

This dungeon slice of life kind of story is the fresh air I needed to break a little from the ultra complicated evergrowing plots, the hundred characters stories, op mcs in new settings with old tricks and mostly from fantasy slaughters, gore and the more dark themes.

It's light, nice, flows very well and I love the characters, can't wait for new povs in the dungeon and more 'rooms. Personally I'm hoping for a reaction from a "normal" group adventurers or people there by mistake, and a whole carnaval / circus themed floor.

Read it all in one night, but I'm so glad you have further material ready for quick updates, I'll be checking every day for a new piece of Delta. It reminds me emotionally of Isekai Shokudou, it has the same feeling of relaxed laidback joyous atmosphere so far, but I'm sure the things will be getting more and more spiced up in the future. Thank you and keep up the awesome writing.

Love the fact that somebody has finaly made a dungeon story were the main character talks about wanting to help people and doesn't just put some healing herbs around then calls it good. She actually teaches her monsters not to kill unless absolutely necessary.

Not to mention one that actively talks to people and wants to work with them. Some have tried this but again this is the first I've seen that seems to do it well.

This review is made with knowledge of chapters 1 to 27.

Style:
The style of this story while simple, is not bad. It is not difficult to understand, nor is it annoying on the eyes. Because of this it gets a solid 3 stars out of 5.

Grammar:
This is where it gets a little bit rough around the edges. While there are quite a few spelling mistakes, the overall thing is acceptable. Stewart doesn't repeat words in paragraphs so they are not monotonous. He has a good amount of variety in his word choice, and sentences. Also, I like the little table thing for Nu (I don't know if I should've put this here or not). Grammar gets a shivering 2.5 stars out of 5.

Story:
The story isn't really that unique; a human has been reincarnated as a dungeon core by a 'divine' being in a new world. But the way it's executed is very nice. The MC isn't murder happy right of the bat, but might turn that way latter on depending on circumstances. However, I doubt that would be the case as there would be no more puns. In the end while it's not an original plot, it is a refreshing way it's being written. The story gets a solid 3 stars out of 5.

Character:
Now it gets to the best part of this novel; its wacky, fun characters. When people say that good characters can make a story better they aren't wrong, and this story has plenty of them. Whenever I read about their interactions, I just start smiling. Everyone in this story is just great so far. Because of this they get a fortified 4 stars out of 5.

Extra Comments:
Now let's get to the map that I so dearly love. Maps aren't something many do for their stories, be they about dungeons or not. So to see that this story has one, even if it just about the dungeon is nice.

Now it's the overall rating of this story, that even though it is a bit rough around the edges (mainly in the grammar department) the story gets 4 fortified stars out of 5.

Good job, Stewart.

I didn't expect to like this nearly as much as I do. It's just plain fun, and it's finding it's footing between seriousness and humor.

I'm on chapter 16 at the moment. Haven't seen any dungeon puns yet, but plenty of fun situations.

This story did one thing very right. It has made Delta, the main character, likeable. I just want to root for her as she tries to improve her dungeon. Recommended for dungeon builder story enthousiasts.

This is a great story filled with humor and wit. All of the odd ball people that live in this world make you smile and laugh.

Really good story -- it has a very fun, whimsical (without going into the realm of painful ridiculousness) feel to it that you don't see too often in other stories. Also, very few grammar mistakes.

It reminds me a lot of the wandering inn, another fantastic story on here, with the mindset/feel of the mine character, as well as her relationships with the strange people she meets in the new world.

A great new twist on an old idea. Probably had someone around to...

...show him the tropes.

I quite enjoy this story, it is a bit annoying to see how Delta our main character tries to resolve everything peacefully and that the world is overly whimsical? Depending on the situation that can be a good thing but when it is overly whimsical too often and it is not pulled off right it could end up hurting the story later as events in the story progress.

For anyone that likes puns, this is worth the read. If you want an MC that seeks conflict than look elsewhere there is little due to the aforementioned pacifistic nature of the main character.

I enjoyed reading this. Very funny, very wacky, a good mix of serious and comedy. Reminds me of "wandering inn" so if you enjoyed that story you'll probably enjoy this one too.