There is no Epic Loot here, Only Puns.

by stewart92

Original ONGOING Adventure Comedy Fantasy Female Lead LitRPG Magic

She became a dungeon core.

Everything pointed Delta to murdering her way to success. People were just mana farms, right?

No, that was wrong. Delta refused. Then everything became odd.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
1: Smashing Start ago
2: Take off! ago
3: Mushroom Farming ago
4: The Piggy in the Middle ago
5: The Human Touch ago
6: The Capped Limit ago
7: innocence and Gobs ago
8: What Wicked Web We Weave ago
9: Quissing the Dungeon ago
10: Hole in the Ground ago
11: Fishing for Compliments ago
12: The Nature of Give and Take ago
13: Hook, Line, Sinker ago
14: Conviction ago
15: Delta Ducks ago
16: Duck for Traps ago
17: Along Came A Spider ago
18: I am DEO! ago
19: DEO! and friends! ago
20: A Boary End ago
21: Flaws and Thorns ago
22: The Greenhouse Effect ago
23: Nature vs Nurture ago
24: Unruli ago
25: Slimers ago
26: Special ago
27: Levelling Down ago
28: Guilty Roots ago
29: The Jungle Room ago
30: A Gentleman ago
31: Japing about ago
32: Catch and Mist ago
33: The Curious Container ago
34: The Flower in a Pot ago
35: Rulis and Termis ago
36: Challenge Accepted ago
37: The Nuance of Dungeon Building ago
38: Big Showdown in little Dungeon ago
39: Lost in Translation ago
40: Seeing the Mushroom for the Forest ago
41: Busy Little Bee ago
42: The Little Things ago
43: Raleish the thought ago
44: Mime the Gap ago
Interlude: Cheesecake ago
45: Nu point of view ago
46: Ballad of the Great ago
47: Delta Does Danger ago
48: Equal-system ago
49: Witching Hour ago
50: Evolution of the First Floor ago
51: Happy Accidents ago
52: Griminology ago
Interlude: Crumbling Hearth ago
Artwork! ago
53: Devine Bobbing ago
54: Pic-Nic ago
Maestro ago
55: Heart of the Jungle ago
56: Birds, Mushrooms, and Taxes ago
57: The Musical Trap ago
58: Thorn in The Side ago
59: DEOLICIOUS ago
60: The Star of the Show ago
Map updates. ago
61: This Dungeon Belongs to Noland ago
Update ago
Interlude: Popping the Question ago
62: Holly Water ago
63: Wyin or lose ago
64: The Tree of 'Wisdom' ago
65: The Key to her Heart! ago
66: Tending the Moon ago
Side Story: The Village of Woodedly ago
67: Keys and Doors ago
68: World Wide Web ago
69: New Blood ago
70: Gather your Party ago
Floor maps udated! ago
Interlude: The King's Fortune ago
71: Truth Seeker ago
72: Inferno at the Grove ago
73: Lord of Mushrooms ago
Interlude: Spoiled for Choice ago
74: Blind Truth ago
75: Heart to Heart ago
76: Jungle Fever ago
77: Flower Power ago
78: Maze of Life ago
79: Delta's Dungeon Defence ago
80: Mother vs Mother ago
81: Long may she rain ago
82: Jack and Delta go down a tunnel ago
Interlude: The Imp of no Importance ago
83: The Fortress of Silence ago
84: For Whom the Dungeon Trolls ago
Edit upon a new day. ago
85: Silent Knight ago
86: Oh Holy Knight ago
87: Grotesque Puns ago
Floor 2 update! ago
88: Xanatos Gambit? No, this is a Delta Gamble! ago
89: Split Opinions on Banned Books ago
90: The Dungeon and her Village ago
91: Nina a Hand? ago
92: Fresh Breath of Seth ago
93: A King's Grudge ago
Interlude: Dungeon Education ago
94:Guard Goyles ago
95: All Action, No Talk ago
96: Door to Door ago
97:Bubbling to the Surface ago
Interlude: Death Pips In ago
98: The Madness of Sanity ago
99: Beta to the Punch ago
100: Delta ago
101: How to be a Dungeon ago
102: The Dance of the Dead and Fabulous ago
103: Pop goes the Slime ago
104: Spring of the Soul ago
105: Delta's Day Off ago
106: Delta the Darkest Dungeon ago
107: Love ago
108: Al Far will he go? ago
109: Quickies and Squidies ago
110: Hungry Python ago
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SevinXVII
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Good start turns bland.

Good idea and a great start that loses the sensation pretty fast. The first chapters of building are great but then it starts getting a bit to complicated and it feels like it loses it's focus. Too bad. An ok read though, but I find myself almost skipping sometime half of chapters, especially about the village, because they are boring, hard to keep track of the characters, and not very good written. 

Because it's not sure of itself or has enough direction, it can only try to be interesting by adding new things all the time, and that's tires fast. 

FriedTM
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Would not read if you are over 25 and or male

I cant help but feel I am not the target audience, the problem with this story is ti falls into the trap of what can only be described as writers fanticy. I got to chapter 13 but I just could not go on, the main protaganist felt fake or very young and add. The side characters are a bit flat and the humor is just bad. I can ignore all of this though if it were not for the constant winking at the reader and the unsubtle message. Couple that with a mild female centric fanticy I.E. this comes off as a young teen fiction aimed at women (which is not inherently bad but is pretty much the exact opposit of me) and I just could not read this past chapter 18. Frankly I just don't think this was writen with me in mind and that is ok, not every story is for everyone. Best thing I can say though is whoever this is written by they are a far better writter than me :)

Sourcream24
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So BORING

 Dugeon doesn't to protect it self??

WTF!!!!????

DROP THIS SHIT 

 

Purplegriffin
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I love this book! ❀️ please keep writing πŸ„πŸ„πŸ„πŸ„ I eagerly awaiting next chapter full of puns and fun's as your newest fanπŸ„πŸ„πŸ„πŸ„πŸ„πŸ„πŸ„

LordPurah
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lovely twist on a dungeon novel

First I thought it was the standaard dungeon gimmick with a twist but it is a really cute novel with puns and fantastic characters.

I like it very much.

Thank you for writing it!

Rupie251
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This is an incredibly charming story about a dungeon named Delta. Full of humour and fairy tale fun this is one those stories that will continuously surprise you. The grammar is excellent and there's a diverse cast of believable characters to support the story and take it above and beyond!

L0pez
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Makes one want to treasure 95% of characters

As of chapter 110.

In simple terms.

Sad moments are sad. (10/10)

Wholesome moments are wholesome. (10/10)

Comedic moments are fun.

It's absolutely enjoyable and lovable story and Delta is so damn adorable.

Mine only fear is it going cerberus syndrome path(but given that it was pointed already multiple times, i doubt it would be serious cerberus syndrome rather than comedic).

But, as it is now, it's absolutely loveable.

Luco42
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 This is a really funny story. I just love it when something is hilariously broken and Durence has A LOT of those people. I also love puns, and Delta has A LOT of those. So yeah... 42/5 Stars