There is no Epic Loot here, Only Puns.

by stewart92

Original ONGOING Adventure Comedy Fantasy Female Lead LitRPG Magic

She became a dungeon core.

Everything pointed Delta to murdering her way to success. People were just mana farms, right?

No, that was wrong. Delta refused. Then everything became odd.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
1: Smashing Start ago
2: Take off! ago
3: Mushroom Farming ago
4: The Piggy in the Middle ago
5: The Human Touch ago
6: The Capped Limit ago
7: innocence and Gobs ago
8: What Wicked Web We Weave ago
9: Quissing the Dungeon ago
10: Hole in the Ground ago
11: Fishing for Compliments ago
12: The Nature of Give and Take ago
13: Hook, Line, Sinker ago
14: Conviction ago
15: Delta Ducks ago
16: Duck for Traps ago
17: Along Came A Spider ago
18: I am DEO! ago
19: DEO! and friends! ago
20: A Boary End ago
21: Flaws and Thorns ago
22: The Greenhouse Effect ago
23: Nature vs Nurture ago
24: Unruli ago
25: Slimers ago
26: Special ago
27: Levelling Down ago
28: Guilty Roots ago
29: The Jungle Room ago
30: A Gentleman ago
31: Japing about ago
32: Catch and Mist ago
33: The Curious Container ago
34: The Flower in a Pot ago
35: Rulis and Termis ago
36: Challenge Accepted ago
37: The Nuance of Dungeon Building ago
38: Big Showdown in little Dungeon ago
39: Lost in Translation ago
40: Seeing the Mushroom for the Forest ago
41: Busy Little Bee ago
42: The Little Things ago
43: Raleish the thought ago
44: Mime the Gap ago
Interlude: Cheesecake ago
45: Nu point of view ago
46: Ballad of the Great ago
47: Delta Does Danger ago
48: Equal-system ago
49: Witching Hour ago
50: Evolution of the First Floor ago
51: Happy Accidents ago
52: Griminology ago
Interlude: Crumbling Hearth ago
Artwork! ago
53: Devine Bobbing ago
54: Pic-Nic ago
Maestro ago
55: Heart of the Jungle ago
56: Birds, Mushrooms, and Taxes ago
57: The Musical Trap ago
58: Thorn in The Side ago
59: DEOLICIOUS ago
60: The Star of the Show ago
Map updates. ago
61: This Dungeon Belongs to Noland ago
Update ago
Interlude: Popping the Question ago
62: Holly Water ago
63: Wyin or lose ago
64: The Tree of 'Wisdom' ago
65: The Key to her Heart! ago
66: Tending the Moon ago
Side Story: The Village of Woodedly ago
67: Keys and Doors ago
68: World Wide Web ago
69: New Blood ago
70: Gather your Party ago
Floor maps udated! ago
Interlude: The King's Fortune ago
71: Truth Seeker ago
72: Inferno at the Grove ago
73: Lord of Mushrooms ago
Interlude: Spoiled for Choice ago
74: Blind Truth ago
75: Heart to Heart ago
76: Jungle Fever ago
77: Flower Power ago
78: Maze of Life ago
79: Delta's Dungeon Defence ago
80: Mother vs Mother ago
81: Long may she rain ago
82: Jack and Delta go down a tunnel ago
Interlude: The Imp of no Importance ago
83: The Fortress of Silence ago
84: For Whom the Dungeon Trolls ago
Edit upon a new day. ago
85: Silent Knight ago
86: Oh Holy Knight ago
87: Grotesque Puns ago
Floor 2 update! ago
88: Xanatos Gambit? No, this is a Delta Gamble! ago
89: Split Opinions on Banned Books ago
90: The Dungeon and her Village ago
91: Nina a Hand? ago
92: Fresh Breath of Seth ago
93: A King's Grudge ago
Interlude: Dungeon Education ago
94:Guard Goyles ago
95: All Action, No Talk ago
96: Door to Door ago
97:Bubbling to the Surface ago
Interlude: Death Pips In ago
98: The Madness of Sanity ago
99: Beta to the Punch ago
100: Delta ago
101: How to be a Dungeon ago
102: The Dance of the Dead and Fabulous ago
103: Pop goes the Slime ago
104: Spring of the Soul ago
105: Delta's Day Off ago
106: Delta the Darkest Dungeon ago
107: Love ago
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Sassnad
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More then meets the eye

With every chapter I read the story makes me happier. I was slow to take it up - the synopsis and title invoked the wrong impression in me. One of bad comedy ontop of a poorly thought out story which stems from too many instances of that happening on this site. Instead, what I got when I started reading was a story that is impactful with humor that naturaly springs from the setting instead of being a sperate disruptive presence it so often seems to be.
Every viewpoint we get  has meaning. We learn something new with every chapter. Even if it is just how the outside views something different than how it might be intended by it's creator.

The quality of grammar and language, are as far as I can tell, keeping in mind that english is not my first language, on the upper end. 

The diverse cast are more then paper cutouts. They are distinct from each other with consistent motivations and character traits. 

And last the story itself. We get a gradual growing dungeon that has no clue of the world she is in at the beginning while slowly but surely we get more and more hints of greater threats to come. It isn't frontloaded with poorly thought out villain reveals or forced foreshadowing, instead we get hints of what is to come by learning of through the interactions of the various characters living in Durence. 

So you get the most amount of stars I feel is right to give an unfinished  story.

BitzyB
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Reviewing up to Ch. 69

I'm really enjoying the character development, the comedy, and the plot. While there's some room for improvement on the grammar and formatting consistency, it reads well.

argusthecat
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If Pratchett Wrote Dungeon Fic

As I was writing this, I noticed that two other people have already compared your work to that of the late great Sir Terry Pratchett.  And who am I to go against my esteemed peers?  Because they're totally right.

It's got abtruse coincidences, convoluted puns, one-note characters that reveal secret symphonies, and just downright clever and interesting dungeon ideas.  It's great.  If you're not reading it already, maybe get started.

bichnguy1998
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Why is there no comedy tag. Delta deserve a comedy tag. Her whole dungeon deserve a comedy tag. Hell, this whole novel is one big comedy tag

shader009
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Try it. You won't regret it.

Stupidly funny, (or is that punny?) with a solid storyline to keep you entertained. Lots of tropes, puns to make your toes curl, comedy gold and just a pinch of tragedy to give direction to the story. Honestly I can't find anything to complain about. This is my favourite story on rrl. Give it a try, you won't regret it.

shadespike
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I really do love this story.  The idea is fun. The characers are varied and engaging. I realy can directly relate to a few of them. Please, please, please, keep up the amazing work. 

Sleepyhobo10
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I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.

John Christianson
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Xanth + Diskworld + I was reincarnated as a Magic Academy! = this is a glorious perfect story

I have read up to chapter 71 and I can't help but give full marks across the board. If you love a world filled with over the top secretly OP characters, non violent dungeon building, and puns this is the story for you.

Yosarian
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I really enjoy this story.  A lot of the secondary characters are great, both the dungeon monsters and the people in the town nearby.  The whole story is very charming.

Xaldreca
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Once again, stew pulls off an amazing and fun to read adventure. One of my favorite stories of all time.