The Darkness that Follows

The Darkness that Follows

by Black00Sheep

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Neo Dalia at first glance seems like a normal kid from a small village. In fact the only thing that stands out about him is that his eyes are two different colors. little to Neo's knowledge fate has more in store for him, he may believe that he is insignificant but in fact his existence can impact the 5 great kingdoms.

 

Finding friends, family and who he truly is will be what his journey is all about. Will he be able to overcome the darkness that follows him? if he can't surpass the trials that lay before him he will never truly see the magical powers he possess.

 

This is my first story so any helpful comments are appreciated. 

Cover is from MoaWallin!
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