Dungeon Mastery

Dungeon Mastery

by Rokoran

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

If this was a light novel, it would probably be called something like "Why Won't Those Adventurers Just Let Me Build In Peace?!"

Unfortunately, even though I have a cheat, my life isn't quite that charmed.

Herein are contained the chronicles of one very exasperated Dungeon Core, formerly a human of Planet Earth.

 

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fredthebadger
Overall

Very good for what's there.

This shows great promise, with good basic writing skills and a so-far-decent demonstration of the setting.

 

Unfortunately, I see no indication it'll ever be updated again, as the author stopped interacting with reviews the same month he last posted a chapter, and was last active a year ago.

pyrtekh
Overall

Very strong start. Actual good storytelling with interesting characters and a solid basis for further growth

Toby Ziegler
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Upon reaching the end of this three-chapter story, all I wanted was more.

Our main character gets an immediately over-powered leg-up on all the rest of the dungeons in the world, but it comes with a giant bullseye for the world's most powerful entities to hit.

I was immediately enthralled with the character and the story's direction. Then quickly disappointed the author didn't continue. This story falls into the category of "Better to have loved and lost," and was worth reading every word.

kenjinn
Overall

good, wish there was more

good, wish there was more!

1. story is great

2. I already like the MC and hes progressing well

3.some type of evil/human has been hinted at

4.cant really write much of a review on three chapters, with a 6 month break.

5. trying to get to 50 Characters :)

Kap
Overall

Great potential but still just the beginning

This has incredible potential just from the first three chapters. I've read quite a few dungeon stories here and less than half had the potential to be utterly amazing like this. 

Delectablebooklover8
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If I had to compare this book so far, I would compose it to an expensive wine. It's flavor (story so far) is smooth and begins to warm you up from the inside out the more you drink from it. It has a DEPTH of flavors as the story develops and is both well thought out and well considered while being portrayed for the readers. The different aspects that are hinted at across the story create different elements that only Add to the melody of flavors as they reach your tongue (mind). The pace so far isn't half bad as you don't have to rush to decipher the information as it crashes against your tongue (mind), nor are you left wanting for more while wondering where or when you're going to receive a new flavor/aspect of the story to play with across your senses (mind-scape)... This story makes one want to know more, at a leisurely pace of course, and one only needs to drink (read) more of this Wine to better understand the history and mechanics of this World bit by bit. Author, your portrayal of a dungeon story is well Done sir! Well Done I say!!! And I raise my glass to your written words! ^~^. I only have One complaint as i casually sip the last of this, the most recent, chapter... My damn glass is empty..... And while I Do understand that I'll have to wait to enjoy another glass or sip of this Wine (story) at a later date. The fact is...I'm HUNGRY.... and.I.Want.MORE... 

*coughs* 

Thank you for the chapter(s). 

I look forward to your future works! ^~^

Signed, a simple addict of good books/stories... 

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.....~ glares at empty glass some more~ ......

Ringostrauss
Overall

I read this because I love dungeon stories.  The first chapter is well written, the grammar is extremely good.  There is not enough content to do much more than review those. Will do a more advanced review when there is more to read.

Agasthenes
Overall

Way too unfinished to be in any kind of ranking 

deadimp
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Loved what I read so far reaaly wish you would publish more chapters was very surprised it started off so great only to find there are so little chapters. hopefully the story will carry on if it does and just hasnt been released yet i hope it does soon

Locklin
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Interesting story and characters. Lots of potential.