I Came Back In Order To See You
1980, a new land appeared in the Pacific Ocean, alongside specials abilities. Humans capable of creating fire with only a simple thought, or others with senses greatly enhanced.
40 years later, a student from this new land disappeared from the surface of earth. After working in another worlds for 50 years and gained colossal powers, she finally came back in order to see the one that she longed for the most. However, only 10 days passed in her world.
*Will NOT contain : rape, attempt of rape, NTR WILL contain : Yuri (Girls Love)*
**English is not my native language, so I might make mistakes. I will try my best on this point**
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Title: I Came Back In Order to See You
Genre: Romance, Fantasy, Yuri
Protagonist: A girl that is strong enough to destroy a continent.
Setting: A sci-fi world with superpowers
Tension Level: Low
Basic Premise: the mc has just came back after 50 years of training and saving worlds, and she would finally meet her best friend again...
Chapter Content: still in the prologue (kinda). about the effect of the mc coming back, like dueling someone who used to bully her, planned meeting with goverment, Q&A session with the best friend.
Chapter Reached: 1-21
Personal Opinion: I like yuri, and I like OP MC, so I like this fiction
Plot: Some Esper power appeared on earth. The story is about a weak and bullied high school girl that got picked up by some sci-fi allien. She stayed and trained with them for 50 years. She came back to Earth extremelly powerful but only 10 days passed on earth (so she will stay young and continue her daily life but with OP power in addition). She will meet again her old friends, face the people that bullied her, etc...
This story include (very minor spoil here):
- Very OP mc (physical strenght, speed, endurance, wisdom, magic, math/physics knowledge, OP equipment).
- A bit of yuri but not a harem
- The MC will get involved with politics (in a good ways)
- We get some POV of others characters trying to find out "WHO IS THIS GIRL???!!"
- 3rd person narrator but it explains the thought of the characters
- Some grammar mistake here and there but not really a problem to understand the story
- The MC is NOT dense
- The world building is well done and thought ahead (some mystery from chapter 1 get resolved only at chapter 50+)
- The MC will train others characters
If you like light-hearted story with OP mc and don't mind if there is not that many action or tension, then you will like this story like I do! The story is more about interaction between our OP mc and the others characters, the MC can just one-shot anyone anyway if she is serious XD
You overexplain everything turning it into a bore to read. The "old show don't tell" is a perfect example of how to do it right.
Thanks for the chapters, Author.
I'm totally in for some yuri love <3
Eh. A fine time waster and nothing more. The style reminds me of essays I wrote in middle school, right up to strong strength and powerful power; verbs, nouns, and adjectives are regularly switching places (For all that is unholy, appearance and apparition are not the same thing). Characters are flat, but cute. Story's rather basic, not standing out in any way - good or bad. It all boils down to one thing: if cute girls doing cute girls is worth it for you on its own, might as well give it a shot without high expectations.