If the hero dies, the world will be saved

by devilpyro

Original HIATUS Adventure Comedy Fantasy Tragedy Anti-Hero Lead Female Lead Harem Magic Portal Fantasy / Isekai Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

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A rotten country has summoned heroes without anyone’s permission like usual.

Typical.

The three heroes are like any normal heroes - They accept their task to save the world.

However, when the fourth hero appeared...

"AAH! NOO ONIICHAN! THAT PLACE IS..."

She got caught in the middle of playing eroge.

This is a story of a girl who does whatever she wants, whenever she wants, to live the way she wants.

Not as a villain or a hero, but as a pervert.

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Mu'er
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I dont understand much of what is happening in this story. My suggestion is that you plug this into a spelling and grammar checker. Then proof-read this before you submit. Sorry if this sounds harsh. Altogether the plot is pretty good and versitile but please, for the love of god, at least check what you write at least once before you submit.

Wolfie
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WHERE IS MY CORKSCREW !?

If this is 'AFTER' some clearing .... When I imagine how it must have looked like ... The only option would be to go for my corkscrew to gouge my eyes out. If by passable grammar you count 1 error per 2 sentences then yes, grammar IS passable. Errors span everything from use of english, through butchering narration tense, to pure interpunction.

 

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After gouging your eyes out the story itself happen to be ... em ... ~~so ~~so, quite enjoyable even. It's quite enjoyable meal, served on the trash bin cover, flipped ringht into your face, that comes with a dessert, containing head of Grammar-chan with an icing made of your eyes that have been gouged out after first 3 chapters.

 

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After I reached blighted zone, I meant the uneddited one. I saw ... the reason to look for my corkscrew. Author seems to use dice while writing. Score of 1 results in change to Present tense, 2 equals to change to Past tense, 3 is a sentence in correct tense without an error, that happens to be obligatory in any other case, 4 is a change of a narrator and reroll with a k3 dice, and 5-6 add one more error and reroll with a k6 dice.

 

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To sum up ... story itself may be ... even good... but how it's served make you want to find the author, mount him, and hammer the grammar rules into his head, repeatedly. And sue him for getting blind.

 

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Edit after 120 chapters: 

 

If you think it will get better at chapter ~50 .... think again.

Draconic
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Still at the beginning, but I have to say it.

Please! Find the SHIFT key! It's so damn annoying. Or don't you even know when to use capital letters? It's not too late to learn it... And afterwards run a grammar check just in case, but that is not that important. The story is barely legible as it is.

It seems interesting so far, but I can barely force myself to continue reading. The fact that I'm writing a review at chapter 3 tells a lot. (checked ch 60 to see if it gets better, but still the same)

ed.: Chapter 24 and so far no significant changes. Just the horrible grammar is getting more and more annoying. Originally I thought I could ignore it, if there were some capital letters. I was wrong.

Tweedledeeme
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tried reading hoping for the mc to conquer through her own perversions but was disappointed. 

the_random_user
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Why such the bad reception?

For anyone reading this review, it was writen after mu'er, draconic and ddclash wrote their revews. as such it could be considered the most up to date in regards to the state of the web series.

Style score: in regards to the way this storys sentance structure, it is akin to the way japanese web novels are written, with short, simple to read sentences.

Story score: the story isn't anything special, but its not that bad either. its not going to win any medals sure, but its not bad enough to throw in a dumster fire. its got a female mc too which is kinda refreshing

Grammer score: the gammer seems to have been cleed up alot. i have no issues with the first 25 or so chapters other than the occasional missed word.

Character score: the characters in this series a slightly one dimensional however thats mostly because they dont get a whole lot of screen time (in the earlier chapters). the characters are likable though, so its all good.

Overall: enjoyable and nice to binge read. the story itself is easy to understand without being too simple, and allows you to sit back and enjoy withought having to think all that much.

BoredBeyondBelief
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Theres no dang lizards, and all of the characters have the compitence of a 5 year old child?Oh danger sure i'll go ahead and risk my life for people who abducted me.