StarPath Online

by thomasdarkrose

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

StarPath Online is a Virtual Reality Massively Multiplayer Online game created by Ventrical Studios. It's been live for over a month and has had record-breaking sales thanks to its mixture of Science Fiction and Fantasy elements. The players can wield magic, use massive weapons that border on artillery, wear power armor, pilot giant robots, and even buy their own ships and fly through uncharted space just to explore the unknown. It has something for everyone and with a focus on game-play, creativity, and exploration over leveling it offers a new and unique experience not offered in many games. However, the main thing keeping Darren from purchasing the game has been a distinct lack of information on the crafting system in the game. Still, with some convincing from Jeff, Darren has decided to purchase the game and give it a try, he has little else to do in his free time. Join Darren as he ventures into a completely different galaxy.

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Mezhanos
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As of this review there aren't many chapters and so it's hard to actually say anything concrete about the story. However I liked the chapters out so far. The story is slow to start and many might be put off by this. For people like that I suggest waiting to binge read a lot of the chapters in one go. 

Main character is a crafter in a VR game and so far he's still in the noob phase. Not much to speak about as he's just starting out. Liked it so far and I hope that people would give this story a little more attention 

Encoded
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Love the story, flow way better than Age of Gods, so far it's looking to have a lot of potential, keep up the good work.

hatoyin97
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Ehhh... Is great but need to see future chapters

Yo! First!

Hmm... you know it is going to need lots of creativity for you to continue this novel right??

Well if you managed to pull this off...

Even if the plot and characters are bad it will be deserving of 5 stars

Sandsforever
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Ch6.1

Really just love this guys writing style 

I love the premise of the story curious of where this goes I know it's on hiatus currently which sucks but hopefully he hops back on the story (author is [as of this review]working on age of gods)

This is just a fun read in general 

Not long enough to rate characters and how they develop

BinLox
Overall

Too boring. The way it's written?

It's really boring at least to the end of ch 2.1. I had to stop reading.