When He, alone stood on these plain of misery.

I always watch and gritted my teeth as his everything is my entertainment and my joy.
As I watch the boy turned to great existence for the saying is
'humble beginning towards greatness' is true
what happen if I make 'Great beginning towards...Epicness'

Shall we see where that will lead us in this journey

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The One who Watch Over Thou

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