The Mad One
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One day Humanity ruled the World.
The next day they were gone.
The system is put into play to help Humanity cope with their new, cruel reality. Some will walk their paths, continuously progressing. Others will end their paths, a dead-end. And a few, very few people will fall off their paths, finding nothing but cold water to drown themselves in.
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DON’T DROP THIS FOCTION EVER!!!
there, that should say enough...
What can i say.. i started reading expecting some generic mmorpg litrpg, but i got a surprise....a good one.. The begin is nothing outstanding and the MC is a pussy.. but he becomes better with time and then i got a surprise when i saw some tokyo ghoul edgy shit in the history... but it was really good, i though this time i would drop the history because of that but nah..It was really good.. the system is cool too.. the character development is good, i have nothing bad to say against.. i just wish that in the future im not going to read about some edgy evil guy mental retarded killing people left and right and becoming an evil shit and killing innocent people,etc...And lets hope that he is not a wizard harry that stay virgin forever
If your after a story that is a bit dark, isekai like, with rpg elements give this a go.
Some people complain about the ending because its certainly not your happy ever after but its still appropriate given what happened in the story.
There are plently of design issues in this story but the author is already well aware of them and has decided to address them in their next work rather then this one.
honestly, i enjoyed this story deeply so far (chapter 41).
i would recommend it to my friends. 10/10
honestly this story should never be dropped it has the potential and with time i hope the fan base would grow with it.
the only thing i can say to improve is maybe open more of these stones that grant the main character exp and attribute points or perhaps let him exchange them in the village, (atleast let him collect it and store them, i feel they where a aspect in story that should be kept). (just an opinion)
thank you for your hard-work Mr. author
Overall, the story is very good so far. As far as the prologue goes, I have seen stories in the top page of the top reviewed that have worse intro's.
The setting of being abducted by aliens is also a tried and tested route for novels that works well, however hasn't been explored enough to the point that it becomes cliche, therefore this story also reserves a slight freshness for the readers.
The writing appears to be very good, also I am proofreading this novel for the author so I know the story up to chapter 6, therefore this review is not premature.
Although I must say, who has the better word count now, huh?
It's a good story, no real problems, the grammar is good, no problems, i like it.