The Mad One

by Nefarious

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

One day Humanity ruled the World. 

The next day they were gone.

The system is put into play to help Humanity cope with their new, cruel reality. Some will walk their paths, continuously progressing. Others will end their paths, a dead-end. And a few, very few people will fall off their paths, finding nothing but cold water to drown themselves in.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue: Another Planet ago
(1) 1: The Start ago
(1) 2: Dirty Slate ago
(1) 3: Hope ago
(1) 4: Team ago
(1) 5: Lopped Head ago
(1) 6: Final Trial ago
(1) 7: End of Trials ago
(2) 8: Earth? ago
(2) 9: Battle ago
(2) 10: The Camp ago
(2) 11: Forest ago
(2) 12: Dangerous Game ago
(2) 13: Stolen Good ago
(2) 14: Willpower ago
(2) 15: Second Battle ago
(2) 16: Temple ago
(2) 17: Traits ago
(2) 18: A Week ago
(2) 19: Patrol ago
(2) 20: Hard Battle ago
(2) 21: Camp Unrest ago
(2) 22: Suspicions ago
(2) 23: Against the Strongest ago
(2) 24: The Raid Begins ago
(2) 25: Unpleasant Encounter ago
(2) 26: Boss Fight ago
(2) 27: Teleporter ago
(2) 28: Finale ago
(3) 29: Journey ago
(3) 30: Information ago
(3) 31: Yona Village ago
(3) 32: New Classer ago
(3) 33: Suspicions ago
(3) 34: Tunnel ago
(3) 35: Classer ago
(3) 36: Tier-Two ago
(3) 37: Fight to the Death ago
(3) 38: Bad Times ago
(3) 39: Good Times? ago
(3) 40: The Best of Times ago
(3) 41: Chase ago
(3) 42: Sunshine ago
(4) 43: New Friends? ago
(4) 44: A New Life ago
(4) 45: A different type of Instructor ago
(4) 46: Training ago
(4) 47: Another Village ago
Patreon ago
(4) 48: Ice Crystal ago
(5) 49: A New Beginning ago
(5) 50: Opening Channels ago
(5) 51: Class ago
Input needed for Improvement ago
Book Suggestions ago
(5) 52: A New Journey ago
Book Suggestions ago
(5) 53: Chatter ago
(5) 54: New Lands ago
(5) 55: Leader ago
Changes to schedule ago
(5) 56: Jaguar ago
(5) 57: Conflict ago
(5) 58: A Rotten Deal ago
(5) 59: A Slow Start ago
(5) 60: Mana Circulation ago
(5) 61: Raid Start ago
(5) 62: Boss Fight ago
(5) 63: The End? ago
(5) 64: Agreement Set? ago
(5) 65: Rewards ago
A Path and An Inn ago
(5) 66: Time to Return ago
(6) 67: You and What Army? ago
(6) 68: Old Friends and New Enemies ago
(66) 69: The Devil's Number ago
(6) 70: Blacksmithing ago
(6) 71: Forging and An Old Friend ago
(6) 72: Discovery ago
(6) 73: Departure ago
(6) 74: Monster. ago
(6) 75: Rashkars ago
(6) 76: Forging Legends ago
(6) 77: A Proposition ago
(6) 78: A Sword of Lightning ago
(6) 79: Twist and Turns ago
(6) 80: All things come to an end ago
(7) 81: A New Beginning ago
(7) 82: A Messy Trio ago
(7) 83: The Test ago
(7) 84: A Natural-born Examinee ago
(7) 85: Tier Four ago
(7) 86: Strange People: both old and new. ago
(7) 87: Happy Easter! ago
(7) 88: Happy Easter Monday! ago
(7) 89: The Ten Strongest ago
(7) 90: New Team, Old Game ago
(7) 91: Nude Horrors ago
(7) 92: No Longer Naked ago
(7) 93: Clothes do Make the Man ago
(7) 94: Brutal ago
(7) 95: Controlled Torture ago
(7) 96: Death ago
(7) 97: Grim Life ago
(7) 98: Undead ago
(7) 99: Havoc ago
(7) 100: Second Death ago
(7) 101: Fantasy ago
(8) 102: Back to Earth ago
(8) 103: Talk the Talk ago
(8) 104: Back in Black ago
(8) 105: Watcher ago
(8) 106: Forges ago
(8) 107: Friends. ago
(8) 108: Loose Ends. ago
(8) 109: Titles are hard to think up. ago
(8) 110: Haven. ago
(8) 111: Pete... ago
(8) 112: Not a Haven. ago
(8) 113: Silvermoon ago
(8) 114: Untitled ago
(8) 115: Geared up ago
(8) 116: The Start of the End ago
(8) 117: A Wolf among Sheep ago
(8) 118: Close. ago
(8) 119: Untitled ago
(8) 120: Return ago
(8) 121: Meeting ago
(8) 122: Fools and Kings ago
(8) 123: Plan ago
(8) 124: Return ago
(8) 125: Hidden ago
(8) 126: Power ago
(8) 127: Confrontation ago
(8) 128: Forceful ago
(8) 129: Twist ago
(8) 130: Parting ago
(8) 131: Build-up ago
(8) 132: Crescendo ago
(8) 133: End ago
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Astrowoud
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Ok maybe a few more...

DON’T DROP THIS FOCTION EVER!!! 

there, that should say enough...

bobnini
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What can i say.. i started reading expecting some generic mmorpg litrpg, but i got a surprise....a good one.. The begin is nothing outstanding and the MC is a pussy.. but he becomes better with time and then i got a surprise when i saw some tokyo ghoul edgy shit in the history... but it was really good, i though this time i would drop the history because of that but nah..It was really good.. the system is cool too.. the character development is good, i have nothing bad to say against.. i just wish that in the future im not going to read about some edgy evil guy mental retarded killing people left and right and becoming an evil shit and killing innocent people,etc...And lets hope that he is not a wizard harry that stay virgin forever

Carson6319
Overall

If your after a story that is a bit dark, isekai like, with rpg elements give this a go. 

Some people complain about the ending because its certainly not your happy ever after but its still appropriate given what happened in the story. 

There are plently of design issues in this story but the author is already well aware of them and has decided to address them in their next work rather then this one. 

knifexthrive
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IT'S A NICE READ, AN AMAZING STORY

honestly, i enjoyed this story deeply so far (chapter 41).

i would recommend it to my friends. 10/10smile

honestly this story should never be dropped it has the potential and with time i hope the fan base would grow with it. 

the only thing i can say to improve is maybe open more of these stones that grant the main character exp and attribute points or perhaps let him exchange them in the village, (atleast let him collect it and store them, i feel they where a aspect in story that should be kept).wink (just an opinion)

thank you for your hard-work Mr. author laughing

Pylons709
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This is a review from a celestial author

Overall, the story is very good so far. As far as the prologue goes, I have seen stories in the top page of the top reviewed that have worse intro's.

 

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 The writing appears to be very good, also I am proofreading this novel for the author so I know the story up to chapter 6, therefore this review is not premature. tongue-out

 

 

Although I must say, who has the better word count now, huh?

Mihos
Overall

It's a good story, no real problems, the grammar is good, no problems, i like it.